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Nice! It's the first time I've seen someone writing about Gao Qilan. It seems that it's most likely that the two heroines are Gao Qilan and Meng Yu. There are no other problems except that the updates are like 🐢crawling. Tomato Transformation Ceiling, Cyclonus Series Ceiling, Super Beautiful!

It's well written. I just want to bring out Lily's story as soon as it's over. I can't wait (Happy)

It's great. It's also the first time I've found a novel with Gao Qilan as the protagonist. There are no shortcomings except for slow updates.

Well written, keep up the good work You have to persevere and write slowly and more and more people will read it. If more people read it later, some people will say it doesn't look good. Don't worry about it. If there is any problem, just correct it. Slowly improve it.

It's really good to watch. It's the first time I've seen a Kuangbiao fanfic with Xiaolan as the protagonist. The key point is that it's well written. Come on, come on.

This book is amazing! A masterpiece! I won't accept refutation of what I said! After a year, I came back and caught up with it. Even though I know the plot, I still feel that the author is awesome and the writing is awesome.

The changes are quite consistent with the content of "Hurry Up", and Lily is a bit sweet, and the protagonist's motivation is also very reasonable. You can find the motivation and starting point for every thing you do. The score of 8.2 Is low, it should be higher than 9.

It's very good. After the ending, I still have more to say. The plot has nothing poisonous, and it can be said to be a masterpiece. Of course, this article has certain flaws, such as the discrepancy with the beginning of the original timeline, and the lack of strict conformity with the original work, but the problems are not big (there is no "ooc", "touching" logic, and unreasonable settings.) In my opinion, it is within the acceptable range; on the other hand, I think the wording of "admiration value" is slightly inappropriate. In fact, the words "emotional value" and "shock value" can be used, and readers can feel more comfortable during the reading process. The above 𧫴 are personal thoughts, suggestions and considerations, and are not malicious. I wish you well. Hope to know.

There is no ink on the lower chest, so I won't comment on it. Anyway, it looks good. [Top post][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]

The needle doesn't poke, this should be considered a low-opening, high-moving move (don't bully). The subsequent plot is quite uneven. The author's writing is a bit unnatural at the beginning, but it feels better and better as he writes later. Although the time span was too large a few times, the author was probably afraid that he would be scolded by some readers if he did not write it well, and he probably wanted the plot to be faster. But the ending, emmm, I can't say it was as expected. Overall, it was very good. I only read 20 chapters and now I read it all at once out of book shortage. It's pretty good. I'll see you in the book.

The lily theme is so well written, so please give the author a boost!

I like it very much. It's very interesting to watch Kuangbiao from Gaoqilan's perspective. Although the system is a bit slow, I have to say that it is a good book and it updates quickly. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. Not much to say, but worth a look

Who knows? I read the whole book in one afternoon. It's so good. It's so good. I even feel a little disappointed for no reason. I have never watched Cyclonus. Now I feel that I have watched Cyclonus in the Parallel World. It is so good.

A great book that ranks high in the Kuangdong series.

It's so good. This novel is the best one I've read in the drama about Kuangbiao. Although it only has more than a hundred chapters, it's so good. It's so good. [Send my heart][Send my heart]

It looks good to be true. After reading it in two days, it is a little bit less true. Although some details do look a little problematic, but for the most part, I think the overall look is pretty good (this is based on the fact that I haven't watched Cyclonus very much. If I have watched Cyclonus, I can really feel that some characters are indeed a bit different from the original work, but after all, the author said that there is his original work here, so I don't think it is a problem)

It's so pretty, but it's too short [pouts] I really beg you to open a new book. It's okay to write about Cyclonus again [I'm about to cry] Five stars is absolutely ⭕ It would be better if a sequel could be written. After all, the plot can continue to develop for a long time. I'm not a buddy, so I'll ban you.

I'm so confused! Very cool article! Overall it's not procrastinating, it's reasonable, the plot is rich, and it's very interesting! I didn't expect the sexual transformation. When I read the title of the book, I was still wondering what Gao Qilan and Meng Yu could do. Wow.

6 Turned over! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is the most complete Cyclonus fanfic I have ever read.

The content is substantial, super good-looking, and it's one of my favorites. [Shy] [Shy] It's still a bit unsatisfying, and it's a bit weak. It would be perfect if there was more plot. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Looking forward to the next work. [Eat melon][eat melon]

Very interesting, written about Crazy, one of the few with two female protagonists, I have only seen this one so far

Very good, but a little short. It's not that kind of lolita article. It can be said to be a post by a royal sister. It's really good and has a good idea. But because it's a short article, it mostly relies on violence to solve the problem. But it's very cool. It's hard to find such articles.

Super awesome👍! The Cyclonus fanfics I've read have either 1000 or 800 points, but this one didn't skip a chapter and I read it without any delay. The plot is exciting, compact, great, and very attractive. Read the next chapter! Three words that can be said in a thousand words - that's cow🐮! ! ! The author will start a new book soon, and I still support it! Solute…

It is still a good novel, and the plot is quite good. There are still some problems with the details, but they are not major and it is still acceptable. This is a fanfic, and probably less people will read it in the future, but it is also a relatively novel subject matter. There are no twists and turns in the emotional line. Some people may not be able to accept the CP added by some authors, but I can still accept it. It's a fun read, and there are some unreasonable parts, so just try to ignore them. There's no need to pursue them. I also read it for Lily. After all, I've watched Cyclonus for a long time, so I should review it. I have to say that the system's template is a bit watery, and there are some useless plots with a low number of words, which are a bit redundant. The protagonist's emotional line is not very detailed, but after all, the emotional line is still very important in this book. After all, many people are also attracted by the title of the book, so it is best to write about the process of emotional changes in detail here. Overall, it's still worth seeing! ! !

The plot is compact, the logic is clear, refreshing and reasonable, and the relationship between the two girls is really beautiful [crying]

It's very interesting. I'm looking forward to the author's next book [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The book is quite good, but it's a pity that the character design is a bit problematic. A man who transformed his soul into a woman was not surprised at all, and there was no psychological change like that of a man turning into a woman. It felt like he was just a tool to advance the development of the plot.

It's super good. This is the best novel I've ever read. Why is it that the book is gone [crying][crying][crying][crying] No @u What's going on with the author?

The whole story is clear and well-connected. And the characters have distinct personalities. Characteristics are obvious. Worth reading

Very powerful! I give you five stars⭐Actually, I haven't watched this TV show. I just watched the clips on Douyin and I know some of the plot. I originally came here for Gao Qilan and Meng Yulihe, but the author wrote it very well. I've finished watching it! ! So goodbye Gao Qilan (Lan) and Meng Yu, let's live a good life. The mountains are high and the rivers are far away. Goodbye in the world👋🏻