If the Hokage Can't Roll His Eyes, What Does It Have to Do with My Heavenly Eye?

A very good book. . . The head is open well enough to see through. The pigs in the production team are more diligent than you.

It's okay. It makes you want to continue reading. Come on for more.

Not bad, not bad. Naruto joins the Immortal Cultivation System, which is very interesting. I hope there will be no female protagonist or only female protagonist. Women will only affect the typing speed. It will be faster and better.

The writing is quite interesting, the writing is online, the plot is interesting, the setting is also very good, and it looks quite interesting. To briefly describe the level of writing, well, in terms of character settings, speech styles, and various smart performances, the writing can be said to be of high quality, far above the passing line, but it still feels a bit less than the top level of writing. Emmmm, as for the top-level writing style that I define... I guess no one can achieve it... At least I haven't seen it yet... Or it exists, but I don't know where... As for the plot, it can be said to be a very novel and original fanfic. At least what I saw is that the book slightly changed the original work from the beginning, gradually began to deflect the plot development of the original work, and started to make major preparations to change the plot of the original self-written plot. Looks pretty good Regarding the setting, the protagonist's golden finger is still very good, although the appearance is a bit strange, far-fetched, and a bit mysterious... However, Goldfinger's abilities still seem pretty good. It's easy to develop and has all the difficulties of development, but it's not too rigid and can only have those abilities. Generally speaking, the shortcomings are very few and pitiful, but the advantages are very strong, which greatly increases the potential of the whole book. Keep it up and work hard to update it.

The writing is very good. I have always wanted to find a kind of article about cultivating immortals in the world of Naruto, but basically it is either the Long Aotian plot or the harem stallion, which satisfies all my fantasies about this kind of article.

It feels like it's been a long time since I've read a book that made my blood boil. Maybe the author does have many loose ends here. But that doesn't stop it from being an excellent book. To be honest, I'm very curious, why is this book rated so low? Oh, so annoying. Now I don't know where to find Tomato books. Some particularly bad books have exceptionally high scores for no apparent reason. On the contrary, there are some very good books, but the scores are not very high. Once you give a good review, they will say that you are a good person and you can make money together. It just feels baffling. Maybe some people do have their own favorite types of books. But I don't feel the need to maliciously suppress some okay books. At least the sentences and plot are relatively smooth, which is great, for a book in Tomato. Anyway, I just don't understand it. I don't know why, but suddenly I want to say so much. Well. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and hope you can write better. There must be more updates.

"Naruto awakens electromagnetic power, electromagnetic gun teaches you how to be a human being" Protagonist Hinata Satoru, heroine Uchiha Rin 2022-5-29 2022-11-22 "I am cultivating immortality in the ninja world, killing the nine tails with the Immortal Killing Sword" The protagonist Hinata Ha, the heroine Uchiha Arashi 2023-2-22 2024-1-29 The settings of the two books are very similar.

The title of the book is about cultivating immortals, which is quite majestic. However, it is about mortals cultivating immortals. It is not the kind of swaying immortal cultivation style, but the style of Han Li who struggles to grow up slowly in the struggle. I don't like it, but the writing is okay. I give it four stars.

Although the ending is not perfect, the pace is super fast and it is fun to watch. I have always felt that it is better to limit Naruto fan fiction to less than 500,000 words. The plot content can be described clearly and the pace is fast enough. All in all, this book is quite well written [like][like][like]

Full marks, the best Naruto novel in the world. Nothing else, just this Chinese Taoist plug-in makes me very happy. That sound of the sword was really on fire like all the swordsmen in Zhanshen.

I like this type. China's Taoist magic is broad and profound. This is the essential difference. Just like the fire in Naruto can only be said to be ordinary fire, the Taoist Samadhi True Fire can even burn space. Not to mention other Sun True Fire and Taiyin True Fire, as well as other magical powers, body training, soul training, and Qi training, all in one. The three treasures of Taoism

Okay, okay, I think it's okay after looking at it

Use love to generate electricity: Love is like fire, burning and colliding, the heart is beating, it is love like fire, you are laughing, I am the crazy person, love is like fire, it will warm the heart, I see the flame of love flickering,

It's super good-looking, an invincible story. The protagonist's many skills are very cultivating, but it's a pity that he became invincible very quickly. I can't see enough of the parts without invincibility at the beginning. It's also a pity that the family is still not strong enough. It all depends on the protagonist. Apart from the protagonist, his combat power should be basically the same.

Advantages: novel content, stable combat power, somewhat strict logic Disadvantages: The number of words is small and not enough to read. There is no discomfort, just in line with my appetite.

In my mind, one of the best Naruto fanfics. The integration of Naruto fanfic, swordsmanship and immortality is pretty good. The combat power is a bit weak, but the writing is cool and it's over. Overall, it's pretty good. Come on, the author [like this post] [like this post] [please ask for more updates] [please ask for more updates]

It's great, it's awesome, it's so cool! The author hastened to continue updating! I haven't read enough yet, so keep writing! It's better to have a super funny one! Add more obituary eating turtles! [Sneaky laugh]

So far, this book seems to be quite good. It is suitable for Chinese people's cultivation methods. I wonder if the author can update it six times a day. Two updates are not enough.

The details are not handled well, but the subject matter is worth watching [Chigua]

It's pretty good. It's one of the few books that kept me from skipping chapters. I just don't understand why the rating is so low.

It was quite enjoyable to watch, but unfortunately the ending was too rushed, and there was always a feeling that it was not finished.

I rate it 9 out of 10. With so many Naruto stories, it's considered readable.

It's very good-looking. Don't be fooled by the ratings. Personally, I think this book has a score of at least 9 points. It's very good-looking and highly recommended [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Come on, do it well, it looks great

This book is considered one of the best among Naruto books, and the third-person perspective description is also commendable. I approve of you! ! !

Book reviews that are true and objective, with multi-dimensional descriptions, clear structure, and substantial content can help more book lovers.

I'm really impressed. How come such a beautiful book only has a score of 7.6?

March 16, 2024 Saturday 12:53 minutes "I am cultivating immortality in the ninja world, and killing the nine tails with the Immortal Sword" has been read

It's a very good book, but my book is "To the Moon" [face covering] [OK]

To be honest, except for the ending which felt too rushed, everything else was pretty good.