Quick Travel: an Inescapable Fate

The book is very good, cheers for the author 💪. For those of you who haven't read that chapter or are not sure yet, I would like to say that the article is written from a perspective [laughing]. Are you on the wrong side like me [crying with laughter]

Give yourself the first five stars, come on!

The plot is my favorite type, it's really good, but there are some small suggestions. I hope the author can listen to them. I'm commenting before I've finished the first world. It may be offensive, but I can't help my little hands. First of all, this is the first time the author is writing a book, so he may not be able to grasp the progress well. The main plot of the first world should be developed after going to the countryside, but the author has written more than ten chapters before going to the countryside. If it were not for fast time travel, the progress would be neither fast nor slow, but if fast time travel, the progress would seem a bit slow. However, it is possible that he wanted to write a longer story, which can be ignored. Secondly, the writing power is insufficient, and some descriptions are not very delicate. For example, when Song saw Ji for the first time, his first impression was "He is very tall and very clean" (it should be more or less like this [awkward laughter]). Would it be better if it was "He looks very tall and gives people a very clean feeling"? That's all for now, I forgot some, so a little suggestion, don't spray if you don't like it!

Come on💪💪💪The author keeps working hard, it's not bad! ! [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] I'll give you a five-star! ( ˝ᗢ̈˝ )O(∩_∩)O

?! ! ! ! ! ! So is Ji Chenan up or down? I saw the second world traveled, but I still didn't understand it.

Really, very good-looking, especially in the doting younger brother dimension. The male protagonist's boyfriend is still a yandere. Before they were together, his boyfriend would spy on him and have various photos of him. However, in this dimension, the male protagonist is a very chic person, which can also be said to be self-centered. But who doesn't want to be such a person? If you don't like it, just complain. If you don't like something, it won't appear in front of you again. Your family will try their best to satisfy him. The problem is that the male protagonist is not angry and is very indulgent to him. This is too embarrassing! After all, for those who like to read yandere novels, there is nothing better than going in both directions. Of course, if one party cannot accept monitoring, forced love is very exciting, but it is still very immoral! Later, when they got together, his boyfriend tracked his location on his mobile phone, monitored his phone, and monitored his home. The male protagonist knew all this, but he didn't care at all. "It seems that there is no need for privacy in front of him." Help, this is too embarrassing! This is still a sweet story, both male protagonists have long mouths in every aspect! This seems to be a novice author, but he writes really well Big, come on💪

This one is really, really good-looking. The setting of the heart-throb attack and the affectionate micro-sickness. The setting of the heart-throb attack is really rare. You must watch it. I know how to emo, and the author will update it soon [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

After watching the first world, I felt so uncomfortable and a little bit crazy. I like the author's settings. The storyline is good, but the writing can't keep up. It's so uncomfortable [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] I sincerely hope that the author's writing will get better and better [love]

I originally wanted to give two stars, but because I was afraid of affecting the author's rating, I gave it five stars. Well, you can take a look at these lightning protections I mentioned. I've only finished watching the first world. I think it's normal to have a bit of a heartthrob aura, but uh, how should I put it? I still like the emotional lines between the protagonist Gong and the protagonist Shou here, and the characters of the two of them really irritate me. There are a lot of supporting female characters in there who inexplicably like Shou because she is very beautiful, like the kind who are attracted by the aura of a heartthrob and then fall in love with her to death, and I feel that the female supporting characters in there are being dumbed down. Not only the supporting female characters, but also some supporting male characters are like those who are inexplicably attracted to the aura of the heartthrob protagonist, and then become crazy obsessed with them, just because he is good-looking. I personally feel that if a man is very good-looking and beautiful, I can also like him, but that liking has a sense of boundaries. You only like him because of his appearance, so there must be a sense of boundaries, just like the kind where you like handsome guys and I also like handsome guys, but the superficial love is not very deep. The love here is the kind of love that only belongs to me. It's so sudden and inexplicable, just because it's beautiful, and then it's that kind of love that's crazy to the extreme. I can only say this, ah, I can't accept it at all. The kind of love they have is very similar to the one I watched before about a quick travel game that eliminated those heart-throb viruses. Just like that, they are like the kind that catches the heartthrob virus, and then like it like crazy, like it, the ultimate love What we are saying is that it is okay to be a heartthrob, but there must be a certain amount of moderation. Actually, I think what I said here is a bit harsh. Because I have only seen one small world, I don't know much about the rest of it, but I feel that the author may still make those supporting characters like Shou very much, just because Shou is beautiful, and then they will be so crazy. It's just that apart from these shortcomings, I still like it better, such as the interactions, settings, and characters between the protagonist Shou and the protagonist Gong. I think these are all good, all pretty good

It's good-looking, but there are few updates [crying] Why did I discover this good article so early [crying]

The setting is very good, but the writing style is actually a little immature. I think the story is very good. I just finished reading the first world. I will give it a review. If it makes the author feel uncomfortable, I can delete it. I felt that the first world made me feel frustrated, and the progress was too slow, but the author probably wanted to write it in more detail. I also hope that the author can correct the typos and don't forget to add punctuation marks. Because I am used to reading it briefly first. If the setting is better or the story is exciting, I will read it carefully a second time. If the punctuation marks are missed, I will be a little disgusted, but I really like the story written by the author and hope it can be improved. Wish

Good review! Super, super good-looking! But I hope you don't spend too much time writing about the darkened heroine. It's not very good-looking. I want to read the sweet one.

It's okay. There are a lot of typos in the front, but it's still acceptable. I can tell that the main god (emm… I don't know what Shou's name is) likes Chen An very much, and I hope to treat Chen An better in the future. After all, it's quite rare for Shou to like Shou more than Gong (not that Gong doesn't like Shou). I also hope the author can work hard. This book is quite good, and I still like it [Love] Also, why was it said that Chen An was the one who took the attack if he stood on the wrong side? The author's description is so detailed that it can still be seen that Chen An was the one who took the attack [face covering]

I haven't finished watching the first world yet, but I always feel that the other characters and the other male protagonist have good looks, they all like the male protagonist, and they all think that the male protagonist will be with them. The other male protagonist thought of how they would be happy together when they were not together and didn't know each other (if the later episodes are good, I will change the rating) Many of the books I read were basically good and I gave them five stars, but I did feel that this one was a little bit a bit off, and the plot was not very attractive. Personally, I think that) may be the reason why I didn't finish it. I need to work harder.

It's rare to see a situation where the protagonist is the main god. It feels very novel. Is this the author's first time writing? I feel that some sentences are not easy to read. Of course, this article is also very interesting. Please give the author a big boost [Love] [Blow kiss]

It's really, really, really beautiful. It's really really really beautiful. I really like the author.

I've watched half of it. I like the simple setting of the period novel. Li Yike is very upset. Sure enough, you can't meet someone who is too amazing when you are young, otherwise you will never forget it for the rest of your life [crying] But I still have to say something: the author's writing style is not particularly good. There are quite a few wrong sentences and typos, and the sentence segmentation is not clear, and the punctuation marks are not used well. I hope it can be improved. Some of the themes are quite new and not bad, keep up the good work

Well, the themes are pretty good, the end of the world, campus... But I can't stand every aspect...

The content in this novel is just not that interesting or exciting. However, the content development is still okay. I hope it can be better in the future and not be so boring. Quite boring.

Like it, like it! ! Although the previous writing was very unfamiliar and there were mistakes, but the author's story was very in line with my wishes, so I kept reading it. Gradually, I don't see any mistakes now, and the expressions are better and smoother. The progress is really great, you can see it, you are working hard, come on! !

It took me two days to finish it. It's been a long time since I stood up and turned around [covering my face], but I should say it smells really good! I feel like Gong is a heartthrob and is criticized by bigots and crazy people. I haven't seen this type of work for a long time. It's so cool [Admiration]

Well enough. Arrange more scenes for the two of them, there is too little contact! There are too many other characters. It's very important that the author can be more open-minded in his writing. It's a bit bland now [cool]

Great, emotionally nuanced. (Smell the aroma of rice) (Climb out of the soil gracefully) (Climb gracefully into a high-end restaurant) (Sit down gracefully) (Look at the menu gracefully) (Order gracefully) (Wait gracefully) (See the food coming) (Pick up the knife and fork gracefully🍴) (Cut gracefully) (Close gracefully) Eyes) (Tasting gracefully) (Suddenly opening eyes) (Tasting something delicious) (Happy) (Tasting it again) (Yummy) (He buries his head and cooks elegantly) (Elegantly finishes eating) (Elegantly wipes mouth) (Elegantly climbs down) (Elegantly climbs out of a high-end restaurant) (Elegantly climbs back to earth) Goodbye in the world

After watching the first male protagonist in the world, I didn't feel aggrieved at all. He is so good-looking that he should abuse the scumbag.

I just watched the first world, but I feel like everyone in it has malicious intentions. It's a bit nice and a bit weird.

I'm a local dog and I love watching! ! So beautiful! [Adoration]

The author's writing is so beautiful, it deserves five stars! ! ! ! ! 😍😍😍😍

It's very interesting to watch, and the plot is also very good, except for the opposite side at the beginning. But at the end, I always felt like something was missing, and some of the world's holes were left unfinished. But still very good.

Thanks to the author! Give a five-star review and support it. I had been watching it before, but I forgot to type it, and I just remembered it now. Hey, this book is so beautiful, how come so few people have read it?

Very happy with their final outcome! My two teenagers should be so full of vitality and hope! [Admiration] [Flowing kiss] In my heart, one is unattainable, only for the person I love deeply [Sending my heart] [Admiration] The other one has always loved the other! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Their story never ends! 2023.10.6 23:57 (Friday)