Quick Transmigration: An Inescapable Destiny

The book is very good, cheers for the author 💪. For those of you who haven't read that chapter or are not sure yet, I would like to say that the article is written from a perspective [laughing]. Are you on the wrong side like me [crying with laughter]

Give yourself the first five stars, come on!

The plot is my favorite type, it's really good, but there are some small suggestions. I hope the author can listen to them. I'm commenting before I've finished the first world. It may be offensive, but I can't help my little hands. First of all, this is the first time the author is writing a book, so he may not be able to grasp the progress well. The main plot of the first world should be developed after going to the countryside, but the author has written more than ten chapters before going to the countryside. If it were not for fast time travel, the progress would be neither fast nor slow, but if fast time travel, the progress would seem a bit slow. However, it is possible that he wanted to write a longer story, which can be ignored. Secondly, the writing power is insufficient, and some descriptions are not very delicate. For example, when Song saw Ji for the first time, his first impression was "He is very tall and very clean" (it should be more or less like this [awkward laughter]). Would it be better if it was "He looks very tall and gives people a very clean feeling"? That's all for now, I forgot some, so a little suggestion, don't spray if you don't like it!

Come on💪💪💪The author keeps working hard, it's not bad! ! [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] I'll give you a five-star! ( ˝ᗢ̈˝ )O(∩_∩)O

This one is really, really good-looking. The setting of the heart-throb attack and the affectionate micro-sickness. The setting of the heart-throb attack is really rare. You must watch it. I know how to emo, and the author will update it soon [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

?! ! ! ! ! ! So is Ji Chenan up or down? I saw the second world traveled, but I still didn't understand it.

Really, very good-looking, especially in the doting younger brother dimension. The male protagonist's boyfriend is still a yandere. Before they were together, his boyfriend would spy on him and have various photos of him. However, in this dimension, the male protagonist is a very chic person, which can also be said to be self-centered. But who doesn't want to be such a person? If you don't like it, just complain. If you don't like something, it won't appear in front of you again. Your family will try their best to satisfy him. The problem is that the male protagonist is not angry and is very indulgent to him. This is too embarrassing! After all, for those who like to read yandere novels, there is nothing better than going in both directions. Of course, if one party cannot accept monitoring, forced love is very exciting, but it is still very immoral! Later, when they got together, his boyfriend tracked his location on his mobile phone, monitored his phone, and monitored his home. The male protagonist knew all this, but he didn't care at all. "It seems that there is no need for privacy in front of him." Help, this is too embarrassing! This is still a sweet story, both male protagonists have long mouths in every aspect! This seems to be a novice author, but he writes really well Big, come on💪

After watching the first world, I felt so uncomfortable and a little bit crazy. I like the author's settings. The storyline is good, but the writing can't keep up. It's so uncomfortable [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] I sincerely hope that the author's writing will get better and better [love]

I originally wanted to give two stars, but because I was afraid of affecting the author's rating, I gave it five stars. Well, you can take a look at these lightning protections I mentioned. I've only finished watching the first world. I think it's normal to have a bit of a heartthrob aura, but uh, how should I put it? I still like the emotional lines between the protagonist Gong and the protagonist Shou here, and the characters of the two of them really irritate me. There are a lot of supporting female characters in there who inexplicably like Shou because she is very beautiful, like the kind who are attracted by the aura of a heartthrob and then fall in love with her to death, and I feel that the female supporting characters in there are being dumbed down. Not only the supporting female characters, but also some supporting male characters are like those who are inexplicably attracted to the aura of the heartthrob protagonist, and then become crazy obsessed with them, just because he is good-looking. I personally feel that if a man is very good-looking and beautiful, I can also like him, but that liking has a sense of boundaries. You only like him because of his appearance, so there must be a sense of boundaries, just like the kind where you like handsome guys and I also like handsome guys, but the superficial love is not very deep. The love here is the kind of love that only belongs to me. It's so sudden and inexplicable, just because it's beautiful, and then it's that kind of love that's crazy to the extreme. I can only say this, ah, I can't accept it at all. The kind of love they have is very similar to the one I watched before about a quick travel game that eliminated those heart-throb viruses. Just like that, they are like the kind that catches the heartthrob virus, and then like it like crazy, like it, the ultimate love What we are saying is that it is okay to be a heartthrob, but there must be a certain amount of moderation. Actually, I think what I said here is a bit harsh. Because I have only seen one small world, I don't know much about the rest of it, but I feel that the author may still make those supporting characters like Shou very much, just because Shou is beautiful, and then they will be so crazy. It's just that apart from these shortcomings, I still like it better, such as the interactions, settings, and characters between the protagonist Shou and the protagonist Gong. I think these are all good, all pretty good

It's good-looking, but there are few updates [crying] Why did I discover this good article so early [crying]