◆Once upon a time, I always felt that I was ashamed of my wife
◆She has paid so much for me and this family
◆Until one day, I heard someone say that she wanted to divorce me and asked me to leave the house.
◆Because, I can no longer keep up with her dance steps
◆A thousand-mile embankment can be destroyed by ants
◆I never thought that the marriage we promised to never separate would actually come to an end◆
☞Immersive urban love defense battle, flashy and bright, not stained by dust
Reader comments
It's hard to say anything else. It's an ironclad fact that this wife is indiscreet.
The author's book is good, but the emotional line is not well drawn, and the plot is not deep enough. My favorite cuckold novel is Marriage and Promising Life. I don't know if you have read it. The plot is tense and exciting, one link after another, and the emotional line is well drawn. The most important thing is that the theme of the cuckold article is the trust between husband and wife, which cannot be cuckolded just to be cuckolded. There is a sentence in the last chapter of a book: Trust is like a piece of paper, once it has wrinkles, it can no longer be smoothed out. The heroine of this book did not cheat, but she lied too much to the protagonist, and the marriage eventually broke up. I think this is the meaning of cuckold stories to readers. The writing style of your book is okay, and it is very comfortable to read, but the plot is not good enough. I skipped reading because I can probably guess what happened. I hope that your future cuckold stories can change the theme and don't describe emotions too deliberately. If you leave out some plots, your book will almost become a sweet novel.
Does the author and the male protagonist have a happy ending in the end?
It's written quite realistically
Is the protagonist being cheated on?
Is this book a eunuch?
"The Growth History of Scumbags and Scumbags"
Except for the escape of the culprit, everything else is well written.
It's hard to say anything else. It's an ironclad fact that this wife is indiscreet.
The author's book is good, but the emotional line is not well drawn, and the plot is not deep enough. My favorite cuckold novel is Marriage and Promising Life. I don't know if you have read it. The plot is tense and exciting, one link after another, and the emotional line is well drawn. The most important thing is that the theme of the cuckold article is the trust between husband and wife, which cannot be cuckolded just to be cuckolded. There is a sentence in the last chapter of a book: Trust is like a piece of paper, once it has wrinkles, it can no longer be smoothed out. The heroine of this book did not cheat, but she lied too much to the protagonist, and the marriage eventually broke up. I think this is the meaning of cuckold stories to readers. The writing style of your book is okay, and it is very comfortable to read, but the plot is not good enough. I skipped reading because I can probably guess what happened. I hope that your future cuckold stories can change the theme and don't describe emotions too deliberately. If you leave out some plots, your book will almost become a sweet novel.
Does the author and the male protagonist have a happy ending in the end?
It's written quite realistically
Is the protagonist being cheated on?
Is this book a eunuch?
"The Growth History of Scumbags and Scumbags"
Except for the escape of the culprit, everything else is well written.