"What? The Boundary Breaker dies, that's okay, give me the order to the Emperor of Heaven immediately!"
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Under the dark red sunlight, everything you could see was scorched black. The man, whose upper body was covered with black mud, touched his burnt upper body with his hands that looked a little charred, and stared at the "black mud" that buried his legs. He said to himself somewhat speechlessly: "Who did this prank? If you don't get me out, I'm going to call the police!". The empty surroundings seemed so silent except for the man's voice...
Reader comments
The more you look at it, the better it looks! It would be better to add more character narration.
Pfft, it turns out I'm just an insignificant passerby... It seems like there's no use keeping you [laughing and crying]
The more you look at it, the better it looks! It would be better to add more character narration. Pfft, it turns out I'm just an insignificant passerby... It seems like there's no use keeping you [laughing and crying]