I Talked My Poor Desk Mate into Cultivating Immortality, and the Nation Took Notice

How can I put it, it might be more suitable if the theme of cultivating immortals is replaced by urban love. I feel that the plots in the first few chapters are comparable to the love affairs in martial arts dramas in current TV series. After all, there will be blood when fighting, so the male protagonist should probably show a little masculinity, but it didn't show up in the first few chapters, not to mention that the male protagonist also experienced a lot of battles. If the protagonist is already invincible, then it would be okay to write like this in the first few chapters, but it is not. To put it simply, I feel that the protagonist does not take the recovery of spiritual energy seriously. There is only obsession in his heart, his obsession with the heroine, everything is centered on the heroine, and he has no ideas of his own.

Finished reading Chapter 29. The male protagonist has been hanging on the female protagonist and not confessing her love. Even though the female protagonist has confessed her love, he still feels disgusted if she still doesn't agree. Now that you've confessed your love, we're just going to be boyfriend and girlfriend, what's that? You're going to sleep with someone after confessing your love, right? After you confess your love, you have to sleep with someone, ah, otherwise you will never confess your love, right? You can't talk about it later if you want to sleep after confessing your feelings. It's disgusting to have to hang here. Now that you have cultivated the sense of qi, you can release some steam. We didn't have this function before, so we couldn't tell our parents about it, but now we can. Once you do this, you can let your parents practice. You've even made friends with their two younger brothers. It will be disgusting if your parents don't teach you. In your previous life, your parents died because of spiritual energy sacrifice. You couldn't make them believe it before. Now that you have a way, why don't you pay? When I think of the professor, I don't think of my parents first, but of the two younger brothers.

In fact, the etiquette in this story is quite novel, and there are no flaws in the writing of the story. The urban immortal cultivator and the empress pendant, coupled with the refreshing feeling of getting something for nothing, this setting is actually really great and can be rated as a five-star. But, everyone who talks like me will have a but. First love should be young and beautiful, impulsive but innocent, but what about the protagonist? If he is not a reborn person, I can accept that boys and girls dare not confess to each other, but he has already experienced the world, but he can still delay for the sake of delay, and he is stingy about even saying a firm confession like "I like you". What is he doing? Don't take the initiative or refuse? If you don't commit and still hang around, you are a scumbag raising fish? The heroine was originally a pure and pitiful figure, pure and innocent, like a white moonlight. However, the heroine's best friend tried to help her, and the part where the heroine wanted to pursue the hero but pretended to be cold seemed to be a bit too strong. Is the author a girl? I mostly see this kind of over-exerting emotional scenes in female videos. In short, the character design is actually quite likable, but the handling of the emotions between the characters is difficult for me to understand. In my opinion, it is a bit exaggerated.

From what I've seen so far, the plot is okay, and some classic routines are acceptable. Then the characters are a little wobbly, and I feel like they're not fully designed, but it's okay. I'm just trying to figure it out in the early stages. It's a small problem. The main problem of this book is that the main character is seriously ill, the ups and downs of Shen Te Miao's love, everything is not yet mature, and Te Meow rationality triumphs over sensibility... I have said in front of others that she is your wife, and I have met my parents, but I am still unsure about the relationship, so I just put it off, even if it avoids review, it is not uncertain about the relationship.

Sigh😔The author doesn't want to write a hard story. The heroine asked her if she liked it, but the protagonist refused to explain clearly. He even said that he wanted her to feel the ups and downs of love. It made people's brains hurt when they read it [embarrassing laugh] [face covering] [face covering]

It's good to read, but I may have to read it at a word count of 100,000,000 words. I hope the author can persevere. I still order gifts when I don't have to go to school.

Looks good, come on^0^~!

The male protagonist knows that the female protagonist likes him and says that he wants to be with the female protagonist and at the same time rejects the female protagonist. The female protagonist confesses her love and is slapped by the male protagonist. He also says that the male protagonist has been reborn and has liked the female protagonist for a long time, but the male protagonist refuses to agree. I guess it will take a long time to get along. Anyway, I gave up. This situation is cerebral palsy.

The first few chapters made me vomit, the best among the garbage, the first chapter, the perception is lowered, I will give you a play "Just a Fantasy of a Dying Man", you have to give me the speed of rebirth, and have the soul to leave the body to make up for the regrets, and then suddenly he is in high school, and later his best brother Fatty Zhang Sicheng tells him to get lost, saying that he is a pure waste and has no qualifications. , Instead of taking him to practice immortality, then taking the heroine to practice, asking the old man to borrow a sword, the old man didn't do anything wrong, snatching other people's swords, and still think he is relying on his old age to show off his old skills, don't say that your plot is cliché, don't say that your classic heroine has low self-esteem, is poor, has a peerless appearance, no one cares about it, only has a grandmother who can't live without a pig's foot CPU, the character of this pig's foot is just a bunch of excuses.

Showing his son's dark history to outsiders? What is it? Nezha has three heads and six arms, while the author has one head and two arms.