Nine Heavens Paradise

Well written, but the punctuation needs improvement

It's good to read, come on, the author, but there are too few. I hope there will be more updates. It's rare to find a book that I like to read [please update] [admiration]

Wuwuwuwu, the punctuation mark has been changed by the author. Don't come in. You left before you read it. My dears, come back and continue watching.

Don't be mislead by punctuation marks. It's very good when you see it at the end. [Like] Although some of them don't have double quotation marks, it looks really good when you see it at the end. And the author has greatly corrected it. Come on [Like][Like][Admiration]

There is spring in the four seasons, and there is morning in spring. Morning and morning are precious only when you are there

The content is okay, but the dialogue does not have quotation marks "", which is really uncomfortable to watch [grieved]

Dear author, please add "", otherwise it will be so uncomfortable to watch [cry][cry][cry]

It's so beautiful. I really like this book.

It's good. The subject matter is very novel. [Flying Kiss] The heroine has a good personality.

I don't like the lotus flower Qingling The more I look at Qing Ling, the less I like it

Very nice. There's just something wrong with the punctuation marks.

The background setting of this character is very similar to Three Lives, Three Worlds and Ten Miles of Peach Blossom.

Come on, author, the writing is very good, but the punctuation is a bit flawed.

Well, not bad. The first part is about symbols, but the later part is no problem. Overall it's okay.

Not bad, the author is great

Like sweet love

I particularly like this book

Except for the punctuation issue, everything else is fine. I hope the author pays attention to punctuation marks

I saw this moment in one breath and suddenly it was gone. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

If Qing Ling and Wu Xie are together, then what should we do if he is a mortal? Or is he also coming from the calamity later?

It looks great. Please keep updating the author! ! ! (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

I think it's quite interesting, but in the middle, when they go to the Lord of God's dream to save people, it's too long, and it's a bit unreadable, but overall it's still very interesting.

The writing style can be improved, the characterization can be more three-dimensional, and some action descriptions and psychological descriptions can be added when describing the characters, such as frowning, rubbing the eyebrows, etc.

Can you put double quotes in the dialogue?

Just add "", otherwise it will be difficult to read

When I first saw it, the comments said that the dialogue was not marked " ", but now that I've seen it, it's already there

I just like to see this type of [send heart] [send heart]

It's very interesting. I hope the author will update it soon [Like][Like][Like][Like][Learned][Learned]

The heroine has a very good character, not the kind who can put on a show, and the plot is reasonable. It's a very nice book, and it's worth recommending.

Looks good, come on! Finished reading it in one go