Becoming the God of Original Sin, I Awakened My God-Level Talent

What I wrote before always failed, so I decided to write it again. For details, please see my book circle! —— The author is a novice and my writing is not good, please forgive me! At the beginning, I planned to write an ordinary supernatural novel, and the main perspective was to follow the protagonist. The existence of the Original Sin Organization is mainly to make the protagonist less passive, that is, not to be restrained in doing things. But the more the author writes, the more chaotic it becomes. The author is still more suitable for writing behind the scenes. The protagonist's role may be a little less, but I think it's still okay. There are a lot of characters, which may be a little hard to remember, but as long as you can watch it, don't worry about so much! The author knows that he has many shortcomings. This is also the first time for the author to write. If you have any opinions, you can give them! I hope you all like it, the author has tried his best! (ฅ• . •ฅ)ﻌﻌﻌ♥

I really like the books written by Kashiwa Yeye~ I really like these settings and so on (≧▽≦), but I feel that the protagonist has no sense of existence (╹▽╹). Although the presence of the vest is quite strong, the most impressive thing about the protagonist is Good Night💤 (Although Maomao really wants to complain (*_*), why is Maomao's focus so strange!!! ᕦ[ ◑ □ ◑ ]ᕤ)

Teacher, do you think there are too many guest characters? Especially in the early stage, basically everyone is a guest character, and the guest characters have their own settings. There are many and complicated settings that make the protagonist not very outstanding. There is a feeling that people can't tell who is the protagonist, because everyone has a setting, and it's hard to understand. Emmm, I think it can be reduced. Of course, you don't have to listen to me, respect.

Persistence is the cutest person

September 10th at 1:34, it's the person who has become a book fan [Sending Hearts]

It's very beautiful, come on~ I've repainted it many times! [Shy][shy][shy]

I think it's very interesting. Come on, author.

If you like it, it looks good, come more often, and come more with the fairy author, I love it!

Be sure to support the author, persistence will always pay off. I look forward to that day! There are really not many authors who are so insistent on updating. Anyway, I have published three books and haven't updated them for half a year, and I am even more lazy to write every day. Come on, author! Will keep watching until the end. If you don't see my congratulations when it's finished, can you remind me? Come on, I love you!

It's okay. It's obvious that the author has a very strong desire to survive and his attitude is so serious. I'll give him five stars. Authors who like to watch behind-the-scenes stories should keep up the good work. The author is very active, but there are also shortcomings. He dug too many holes in the early stage and may not be able to fill them in the later stage. So I will give the author five stars first. I am personally introverted and my language organization skills are not very good. I just said what I wanted to say. I wish the author will get better and better, and his writing style will also get better and better. Keep up the good work

It looks good. Come on, show your love❤（*＾3＾）/～☆

I just remembered that I haven't posted a book review yet. It's great. Come on, Bai Yeye! (๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ)

The writing is good, the plot is good, and the quality is very good! Come on, Bai Yeye, the lovely author who will update twice tomorrow! (∗ᵒ̶̶̷̀ω˂̶́∗)੭₎₎̊₊♡

The mobile phone was smashed by my biological father, and now I can only comment on Bai Yeye on the Queen's mobile phone. [Cry][cry] The original account is @Lingtiao

The author writes very well

Come on, you will definitely succeed if you are positive and enthusiastic.

To be honest, I don't understand. I don't understand but I respect it [awkward laugh]

I thought I could watch it for a long time, but I still can't stand it anymore. I'll give you a five-star [send my heart] before I leave.

Don't write everything clearly, give it a sense of mystery

It's easy to get along with the clone

Can anyone write a fanfic about Lu Yunzhi and Su Luo?

I feel like the author feels too comfortable when writing about the protagonist's life.

Come on, author, please write according to your own ideas.

I haven't read it yet, but I haven't seen any bad reviews. I'd like to give you a five-star review first to support it [sending my heart]

It's a bit messy, but overall it's good. It's a bit biased towards group portraits. Also, the author is super lively, I love it.

I like this one better, but the pace is a bit slow, but I still support you, so five stars☺️

The writing is very good, it's rare to see such an active author [laughing] [laughing]

Not bad, the sentences are fluent and the writing is okay. Come on and work harder ❛˓◞˂̵✧. . . , Don't stop updating. At least there is a good knot [smile]

It's good to read, but with so many pictures, why are there so few reviews?

It looks good, the author added some code~