If someone tells you that there is such a virtual game where you can switch on mechas, fight monsters, and travel among the stars and the sea, but the price is a life without sex, would you give it a try?
Try! Definitely try it!
Woman, don't stop me from flying the mecha!
Man, your mecha is too weak!
The above is all a joke. This is a story about a group of robot players exploring the universe in mechas~
Reader comments
It's very well written. I hope it will be followed up after the public beta is really opened. AI intelligence will no longer have troubles. The subsequent progress of the protagonist cannot always be focused on a few players. It will be built on a large framework and the AI intelligence will contact the players.
After reading it, please represent me personally.
This book has been recommended. After reading it, it was okay. I didn't step on any big surprises.
Is the writing at the average level of Tomato?
The plot has obviously not developed much yet, and the character design seems to be just a foundation now. T-34, the level of brainstorming is far ahead of the planning. He over-understands the game and writes strategies. These are the few points I remember. Serve the country with loyalty, have a strong sense of immersion in the game, and be a master. Captain of the heavy weapons team.
The following are my suggestions. As the author, you just have to read them for fun. You can adopt them or not.
It can appropriately allow players to brainstorm some plots. A game cannot be without plots. This task is left to T-34, the master of brainstorming. For example, the protagonist, who used the identity of Eugene, said it is better to be young. At this time, you can let the players think about some plots, but not too much.
The author's intention in shaping the players can be clearly felt. The author has given the players distinctive characteristics. Then he only needs to write some extensions based on these characteristics. In fact, group portraits, the fourth natural disaster, etc., Mainly describe many characters. At this time, you must have those distinctive characteristics, otherwise the readers will not be able to tell them apart, and they will not be able to remember who your character is.
Let's just write that little bit for the time being. I'll write more when we come back and finish the book.
If you don't like it, don't criticize. The above are all personal opinions. If you want to refute, you are right. Your family is healthy. Just read this article for fun.
Give me 5 stars to encourage you [sending heartfelt wishes]
In the long time I have been reading, it is considered a good book.
The writing is already very good. At least it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the interstellar world. It can be tolerated as long as there are not too many impurities and poisonous points. If you can't bear it, go out and watch the defense.
It's pretty and not poisonous.
Good looking. Robot player
The big character will take me with you! It's called sleep, that's the word
The type of mecha is left to the author's discretion, as long as the combatants have a certain sense of presence. If it's not convenient to add it, forget it.
It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review.
The demining is completed, interstellar high-tech + mecha + the fourth natural disaster, it is quite satisfactory, the plot is stable and has no fluctuations, the world view is quite large, I haven't seen anything particularly interesting so far, and it may be better if it doesn't collapse in the future. (To help you sleep, take your seat accordingly.)
It's a good book, and there's nothing poisonous about it. There are just a few updates.
I think this book is very beautiful. It must be finished. Write him 100,000 chapters
Finished reading the latest chapter! Very good, one of the best novels about the fourth natural disaster that I have ever read!
Give it to the author directly! [Eating melon][like]
Very satisfied, good quality
Isn't your update efficiency a bit too much? Shouldn't you just stop updating? ! ! (Anger｀Д´anger)
It's really beautiful but why is there no one there?
It's a good book, but I was delayed by the classification and sorting of tomatoes.
It's beautiful, but why are there so few people?
Not bad, I rather like the atmosphere here.
Come on, come on, come on, the fourth natural disaster novel is very well written and interesting. Don't stop updating it.
It's good to watch, but it's just that the protagonist plays so many people, but a few people can't help him. Sooner or later he will be exhausted [laughter]
It's really good to watch, please come on, author💪Don't let it suck and don't stop updating!
It's great. It's the first time I've seen the fourth natural disaster with this kind of setting. Big boost for the author.
Since it is a robot technology, can it develop in the same direction as warframe?
It's very interesting. I've read a lot of The Fourth Scourge before. This is the first one where the player is a robot. It's very interesting.
It's very well written. I hope it will be followed up after the public beta is really opened. AI intelligence will no longer have troubles. The subsequent progress of the protagonist cannot always be focused on a few players. It will be built on a large framework and the AI intelligence will contact the players.
After reading it, please represent me personally. This book has been recommended. After reading it, it was okay. I didn't step on any big surprises. Is the writing at the average level of Tomato? The plot has obviously not developed much yet, and the character design seems to be just a foundation now. T-34, the level of brainstorming is far ahead of the planning. He over-understands the game and writes strategies. These are the few points I remember. Serve the country with loyalty, have a strong sense of immersion in the game, and be a master. Captain of the heavy weapons team. The following are my suggestions. As the author, you just have to read them for fun. You can adopt them or not. It can appropriately allow players to brainstorm some plots. A game cannot be without plots. This task is left to T-34, the master of brainstorming. For example, the protagonist, who used the identity of Eugene, said it is better to be young. At this time, you can let the players think about some plots, but not too much. The author's intention in shaping the players can be clearly felt. The author has given the players distinctive characteristics. Then he only needs to write some extensions based on these characteristics. In fact, group portraits, the fourth natural disaster, etc., Mainly describe many characters. At this time, you must have those distinctive characteristics, otherwise the readers will not be able to tell them apart, and they will not be able to remember who your character is. Let's just write that little bit for the time being. I'll write more when we come back and finish the book. If you don't like it, don't criticize. The above are all personal opinions. If you want to refute, you are right. Your family is healthy. Just read this article for fun.
Give me 5 stars to encourage you [sending heartfelt wishes]
In the long time I have been reading, it is considered a good book.
The writing is already very good. At least it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the interstellar world. It can be tolerated as long as there are not too many impurities and poisonous points. If you can't bear it, go out and watch the defense.
It's pretty and not poisonous.
Good looking. Robot player
The big character will take me with you! It's called sleep, that's the word The type of mecha is left to the author's discretion, as long as the combatants have a certain sense of presence. If it's not convenient to add it, forget it.
It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. The demining is completed, interstellar high-tech + mecha + the fourth natural disaster, it is quite satisfactory, the plot is stable and has no fluctuations, the world view is quite large, I haven't seen anything particularly interesting so far, and it may be better if it doesn't collapse in the future. (To help you sleep, take your seat accordingly.)
It's a good book, and there's nothing poisonous about it. There are just a few updates.
I think this book is very beautiful. It must be finished. Write him 100,000 chapters
Finished reading the latest chapter! Very good, one of the best novels about the fourth natural disaster that I have ever read!
Give it to the author directly! [Eating melon][like]
Very satisfied, good quality
Isn't your update efficiency a bit too much? Shouldn't you just stop updating? ! ! (Anger｀Д´anger)
It's really beautiful but why is there no one there?
It's a good book, but I was delayed by the classification and sorting of tomatoes.
It's beautiful, but why are there so few people?
Not bad, I rather like the atmosphere here.
Come on, come on, come on, the fourth natural disaster novel is very well written and interesting. Don't stop updating it.
It's good to watch, but it's just that the protagonist plays so many people, but a few people can't help him. Sooner or later he will be exhausted [laughter]
It's really good to watch, please come on, author💪Don't let it suck and don't stop updating!
It's great. It's the first time I've seen the fourth natural disaster with this kind of setting. Big boost for the author.
Since it is a robot technology, can it develop in the same direction as warframe?
It's very interesting. I've read a lot of The Fourth Scourge before. This is the first one where the player is a robot. It's very interesting.
A good book
Not bad, just less
Very different novel recommendations
Come on, come on, rush to 8.0.
Good looking🤩appetite