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Let's briefly talk about the plot of this book. A book about transformation covered with immortality. Very simple, two lines, the line of cultivating immortality and the line of interaction between the male and female protagonists. The male protagonist Lin Zhiwudi starts the game, and the female protagonist Shen Yue starts the game as a loser. This is the line of cultivating immortality. The interactive line between the male and female protagonists is, as the introduction says, getting married. So it is a single heroine, but the heroine Shen Yue will have some lily plots. Transformation literature is relatively niche and has strong tastes, especially about transformation and marriage. I know some people will not be able to accept it. I understand that personal tastes are different, so please read as appropriate and rate rationally. Kneel down and thank you! ! !

[Shocked][Full][Like][Like][Like][Like] It's really good! There is also an update coming! ! Update soon! ! ! ! [Angry][angry]

The overall structure and story of this book are pretty good. If the writing style were a little better, I think it would be a hit.

Recommended by a friend, I came here by invitation. The book is quite good, with a certain degree of humor, and it is a good book about cultivating immortals and getting married. The number of chapters is too few. (I have read the latest chapter so far) I personally feel that it is more daily life. I also like daily light-hearted articles. I also hope that the author can persist. I think you also understand that the article about changing marriage is a niche article. It's okay to update slowly, but I hope it doesn't stop updating. It's better to end it hastily than to stop updating. I also hope this book can achieve good results! [Learned]

The subject matter is great, um, can you not bury it easily? I hope it can continue. I don't know where the author gave up, but I still feel that it is a pity for this book. A lot of the protagonists' understanding of each other's feelings is also buried in the article. At this point in the break, men have to admit their feelings. Being too coy will give people a petty attitude. After all, both of them were men before, even if one of them changed from a man to a woman. He (Shen Yue) still has some deviations in emotional recognition (in the article, it can still be seen that his feelings for Lin Zhi are changing, and his feelings for Lin Zhi are taking root. He may be avoiding it or may not really realize it. I think part of his excitement about other women mentioned in the article is due to his previous boyfriend. Sexual identity is partly about admiring women (after all, everyone likes beautiful things). For the continuation of this relationship, there is always one person who takes the first step, and then there is the running-in period. After all, the running-in period is about falling in love. I think the relationship between the two of them will be more interesting than the relationship between ordinary men and women~ So can you see the author of so many words...

There are many lilies, but there are really few marriages, and they have a perverted interest in me.

Dear author, tell me honestly, have you ever helped your brother pick up soap and then slipped in with your foot? [Think]

I'm begging you, please update quickly. Why is another one dead? It's so hard to find a new wife that suits my taste. Do you know how hard it is for me? Why did you send it again? Otherwise, the four of you should get married @ @ Winter is Coming, @HU What you wrote about changing marriage is really super, super, super, but can you still be resurrected, live, live [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Author, stop being lazy and update it quickly, maybe two chapters a day. You are the slowest updated book in my collection. One chapter every few days, probably not 100 chapters in a year.

I like it, but I stopped updating it, so I only give it four stars [angry] [angry]

Hey, are there many people in Kangkang?

Author, I advise you to update quickly, otherwise you don't want me to give you a star rating.

Well, it's hard to say, maybe I shouldn't open this discontinued novel, this feeling is too uncomfortable (/_＼), ugh :-(, I hope the author can be resurrected!!!

It's not easy to see that the story that has become my heart has to be discontinued. It's so uncomfortable╯╰. Please write a book like this.

The author, Sa Jia, is not very good at writing, so he can only say "good book" as a compliment. The subject matter is new, hahaha, come on! [Cool]

This book can hehe, when will my brother also become a little white-haired lolita? [Laughing](๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

The author will come back soon to update, please don't want this book to be discontinued! ! !

The inspiration should come from the golden-haired crunchy shark, but the white hair pokes me very much [laughing]

Come on, I'll keep chasing [eating melon]

Personally, I think it's a relatively good-looking story about changing a marriage. The subject matter is novel, the male protagonist is quite capable, and the "female protagonist" has maximum charm. The disadvantage is that the update is slow and infrequent

Very good theme

So is the heroine Deli stupid? [Thinking]

Give me full marks. If it doesn't work, change it again.

Why didn't the author write [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

On a hot summer day, sunflowers bloom and fragrant lotuses bloom. The orchid boat's diagonal cable is hanging down, and it is only suitable to spread the pillows and quilts towards the pavilion.

Save a file and check back in 2 months [cover face][cover face][cover face]

To put it simply, I used to hate transformation tattoos, but after reading this, I feel pretty good about it. Well, it dropped from 8.8 To 6.8. I'll give it five stars.

I originally wanted to give a five-star negative review, but when I read Chapter 55, I got a 6. I was still looking forward to when they would show off their affection.

The writing is really good. I didn't really like the system sharing genre, but after reading this book, I didn't feel much resistance.

Can the author be resurrected? ! !