The Knockout: I'm the Real Mastermind

I didn't want to take advantage of this popularity, so I clicked on the recommended fanfics with my heart as a book lover and my love for TV series. Well... I won't comment on the writing style. After all, my own writing style is quite nonsense, but the plots are indeed... How should I say, there is no Kuangbiao. Taste, with this mentality, I want to try writing by myself, and retain the original taste and character of the characters to the greatest extent on the basis of the refreshingness of the online article. Please comment on whether the writing is good or not. I can only say that I try to be sincere, just like the original Avengers!!! Thank you all! The old rules are, if you are satisfied, please give us a good review and update it. Take a look at the free gifts. If you are a student party, don't charge money for gifts. Rich people are welcome, the more the merrier!

It's a cool story with a single heroine and a sister-in-law. The whole story is very fluent, and there's nothing frustrating about it. Although it's a cool story, it's not mindless. It has a good grasp of the various personalities of the original characters. There's nothing that breaks the character, and the emotional scenes are written very naturally! The overall style is rather fair-minded, and the protagonist has a sense of propriety in everything he does and does. He doesn't blindly trample the original characters, nor is he bragging. He also adds characters from other worlds, and shows a new plot based on the original work. The integration is good, and it is very interesting!

At present, it deserves a 5-star rating, but the plot feels a bit too dramatic. The protagonist is different from the original character. He is not forced to become a gangster. He also wants to do big things in the future. Since he has such ambitions, I feel that the sister-in-law's rank is not worthy of him. The protagonist did not travel alone to Kuangbiao. With his future rank, having a woman from the underworld next to him felt like he was lowering his level a bit. As the protagonist is a future big entrepreneur, everyone will pay attention to his marriage. If you have a wife who has been involved in the underworld since childhood, what kind of impression will it give to the people above you? With the strength of the protagonist, it is not difficult to become a celebrity model. I understand the psychology of time travellers, and I also understand the charm of a sister-in-law, but judging from the future development of the protagonist, marrying her is not a good choice.

The protagonist helped An Xin and Meng Yu get together, but it didn't feel good, and he didn't say whether to send the girl away or not. An Xin and Meng Yu are not suitable for being together. A dull person only has work in mind, and work comes first. The other one has been carefree since childhood, just like a flower in the greenhouse. Because of her family background, as a woman, she lacks basic respect for the dark side of society. Coupled with An Xin's job, she is bound to be hurt. Just because we have known each other since childhood and have a good impression of each other, we want to be together? The protagonist has told An Xin about his revenge plan. It has no other effect than holding you back. Because of An Xin's relationship with the bureau, the protagonist also has it, but it's just a hair loss. This is the easiest to solve.

It's a novel theme that I like very much. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

It was okay at first, but after looking at the catalog, I still want to recruit the Tang brothers. I don't understand. You are a big boss from Xiangjiang. Don't you have a team under you? Why use these two people? Is it because he is an original character? I don't see how strong they are either. There is no need to express any realistic opinions. As soon as your pen is written, don't you have two good subordinates?

Is it a single heroine?

Who has watched Kuangbiao and doesn't know what the Gao brothers were like after they became successful? Especially if you don't know what the second child is like? The protagonist is still in a foggy state, and I don't even know how he died in the end! No matter how much money you have, why do you keep so much money? You don't have to use your money and power to make the most of it. You are still an ordinary social big shot after doing things. In Zhao's eyes, you are still a bastard.

So far, this is one of the top three or even the first among the Cyclonus fan fictions I have read. I hope it won't end badly and it can be shorter. It would be best if the plot ends and the protagonist almost takes revenge.

Not long after the beginning, he misses someone else's wife. This kind of stitching is written in such a way that you can't choose other movies and TV series that are more good? Finding the murderer is all incidental, women are the key point, a time traveler only has this level of thinking