Junior Uncle from the Qin Dynasty

I've tried the poison and it's too watery. Although I didn't follow the plot directly, I added some plots about businessmen making money. It's watery.

666 Is a good book. The author has rich experience and his writing style is charming and charming.

It's quite interesting, but it would be better to change the MLM business. After all, there are so many chapters, and it is completely unclear what the path is. In fact, selling tiger pills is enough, and I sell some spirits I made. After all, the MLM business is too complicated! I saw that in Chapter 60 I didn't find out whether it could make money at all. Even if it could make money, why bring in outsiders to make money? There is no one in Tianzong!

The protagonist is very mediocre, does not have an invincible temperament, and always takes the route of submissiveness and cooperation. There is no sense of being invincible at all.

Is it Xiaonian? This familiar writing style and the plot with a strong sense of directness

I finally figured out why the author hasn't rated it yet after finishing the writing. It's so miserable.

Very good keep up the hard work, come on!

I hope I can collect them all

A lot of nonsense

It's too boring, it's too boring, and the title is not attractive either.

The ending was unexpected. Although there are many fan-written stories in this genre, the author's writing style is delicate, and the emotional description is also very stylish. It is neither subtle nor kitsch, with a little ambiguity. I believe it will still be exciting after returning to the Qin Dynasty. The reason for choosing to end it like this is that the follow-up war and the multi-line narrative advancement of the contention of a hundred schools of thought are not the author's strengths. Now it ends abruptly, and it avoids the shortcomings just right. There is a lot of white space, which is quite interesting.

I just watched it, did you cut off the Hu Jing Salamander?

I can't stand it at all

Author, if nothing else, please add punctuation. You don't even have the ability to break up sentences.

To be honest, it's quite watery

The water is too watery

Come on! ! !

A little short, but fast

This is a love story disguised as a fan.

This novel is like a stitch monster! Several people from the Qin Dynasty were sewn together

Very good and worth seeing.

Isn't it pretty? This book is actually pretty good! But why are the results not good?

Why did it end? It was so sudden.

It's quite interesting. I've traveled around the world and have captured Zhao Ji and Dong Jun.

At present, I would like to call you the strongest writing style of the Qin Dynasty under the evergreen old thief [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

The writing is good and the plot is coherent and somewhat humorous. What kind of embarrassment has I not read? It's a good book [smile]

Qin Shi's colleagues are pretty good! Just a little short