Death: Become the Daughter of the Spirit King at the Beginning

Here is a cup of blue sky. This book is my first, and I will work hard to write the story in my heart. The normal update time is set at 7 a. M. Every day, with two updates per day. During special periods, there will be three updates. Of course, if there are too many reminders or rewards, additional updates will be made. I have a few saved manuscripts, and I welcome the challenge (laughs). Without further ado, I continue to code. If there is anything in the book that you feel is wrong, please comment and correct it. Thank you all.

Five stars for this great book. I hope the author will persevere and finish it.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. Good luck to the author.

It's a very interesting single article. It would be nice if there were more posts. Please.

Well, it doesn't feel like you can get something for nothing in traditional system literature. The pace of combat power and strength improvement is also relatively stable. I look forward to the excitement and daily life at the beginning of the main plot [laughter]

It's full, but unfortunately there are a few stickers. I can probably guess it. The author doesn't need to hesitate so much. He is focusing on niche and unpopular themes. You can see that most of the latest chapters are waiting for you to advance the emotional line. Write what you want to write! No need to hesitate.

Among the current Tomato Laomin comics, the number of Death stories is extremely rare, and most of them are of worrying quality. This book very cleverly did not choose the Zanpakutō system but brought in the DNF profession as the basis of the protagonist's combat power. The identity of the Soul King's daughter gave the protagonist the rationality for its early development. The plot chose to face the old man after he defeated Youha for the first time. When the Thirteenth Team was first established, it avoided the poisonous points of fans of the original characters. It was so smart. The whole book has basically no shortcomings as a Death fanfic. Although the protagonist in the transformation novel has a lovable personality and there is no clear male-female cp, the author is really good at sewing and has not offended any readers. It is highly recommended.

In fact, the author can refer to the holy light professions in Xiabie games, such as wow, priest's pain suppression, sacred hymn, silence, group dispersal, desperate prayer, power word series, knight's holy light beacon, eye for an eye, hot floor, laser flashlight.

I'd rate it 4.5. How should I put it? I'm not a fan of Tomatoes, but it fits the style of Bleach very well. It's one of the best Bleach fanfics I've ever seen. The writing style is on the lighter side, and the results would probably be better with the other two companies. This is not a cool article that pretends to be cool and slaps you in the face. In the first hundred chapters, many people were furious because the protagonist never dealt with Shi Tan, and felt that the protagonist was too weak. In fact, I think this book would be more perfect if it didn't include the plot of the transformation. It's a standard light novel with a male lead and a female protagonist. There's no pretentiousness and no ups and downs at the same time. If you have accumulated strength for hundreds of years, you will become invincible. The person in front who couldn't jump was kicked to death by the side of the road. Even if there was someone in the back who did sit-ups, it was like swatting mosquitoes. The author is a gentle person, so the protagonist is a gentle protagonist who never gives up on anyone, saves everything he can, has no regrets, and is invincible in the world. Recommended for readers who can accept the slow pace of Japan. If a fast-paced book is like drinking cold beer, it is refreshing but you can resist it when you drink too much and become impatient. The type of this book is tea tasting, brewing slowly and drinking leisurely. Unknowingly, the sun sets in the west, and you have a half-day leisurely life. You smack your lips after thinking about it, and sigh: Beautiful~ I deducted 0.5 Points simply because I am picky. I feel that the author's writing style can still be polished. It would be perfect if the combat part was written more heartily~

How to say it? It would probably be better if instead of a transformation story, she was a female from the beginning. For example, it could be set that the protagonist was originally a policewoman who likes to watch anime or something. Overall, it's pretty good. Five stars for encouragement.

It's very interesting. It's quite different from other Death stories. It's just that the Priesthood is useless in the later stages, especially the one who is proficient in plate armor and made double arm guards. But overall, it's really an excellent fan story [Like]

I've read a lot of Bleach fanfics, but none of them have me reading more than 100 chapters. I would call this one the strongest!

It's good to read, I hope the author can stick to it and finish it.

The emotions are delicate and in line with ordinary people's values. In short, it's over.

Five stars, I hope I can finish it. I wonder if Yijigu will appear again [laughing evilly]

A very good Bleach fanfic, at least above average and considered excellent. It's just that the ratings were pulled down. They clearly stated their position in the introduction, but there were also people from other camps coming to write negative reviews.

It's quite interesting, although I haven't finished watching it yet

The book is very good. I have some suggestions. If the author introduces a new character, can you provide a picture? [Like]

The Bleach fanfic is very good. It starts to become invincible in the middle and late stages. I am a passerby who has never seen Bleach. I think it is good-looking. As for the heroine... Yusha, Unohana, Hikifune Kiryu, you can say it. There are no emotional scenes (referring to sweet love). You can say it doesn't matter. There are three people and three children, and they are all mothers [laughing and crying]

Great book! It's just a bit short, not enough to look at [crying]

The author has ideas for localizing the God of Death, and the fifth path after slaying the ghost with his fists, and he really explains the concept. I feel that if the imagination is bigger, it will be like the telekinesis system played in the hunter.

Well written, I read it in one sitting, good luck to the author

It's very interesting. I like Death very much. This fan work is also good and makes up for a lot of regrets.

A very good Death novel. There are not too many plots that make people feel disgusted, nor are they too mindless. The emotional scenes are also good, and the pure emotions are great.

I want to be healthy! ! Good review! ! I was disgusted by being remarried just now. Come and wash your eyes.

It tastes a bit like a girl's video, but it's okay. You can watch it by skipping.

Very good, different from other fics. Unfortunately, there is no protagonist's own Zanpakutō. The lack of interaction with his own Zanpakutō feels like something is lacking.

The subject matter is great, I hope you can stick to it

Very good, the transformation text here is relatively good, and there is also the element of death, but the content of the post is still less, less!

Compared with other Bleach fanfics on Tomato, this one is much better, both in terms of text and plot. Just hope it doesn't end badly.