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Nice! ! I really like the character design of Yu Yan! ! Yanyan, a master in love, is just waiting for the puppy to pounce! ! I hope you won't be in love in the future and don't chase the male protagonist! ! Keep people awake! ! The male protagonist can be in love, but the female protagonist shouldn't be in love. Wow.

It's quite beautiful, but the demon Zun Yue in the back is so sad, the pain of not being able to love

I hope that the heroine (Yu Yan) written by the author will always maintain the character of the first plane heroine. The first plane is well written, and I can feel that the heroine is a veteran of fast-travel missions. However, from the second plane, it feels like a novel written by two people. The heroine's character is somewhat inconsistent, and it feels very tired and uncomfortable to read from the second plane. As for the apocalyptic plane, I feel that it is similar to the first plane, so it was written by one person. The heroine is stunningly beautiful, sassy and scheming. This is the correct way for a heroine to open up. The childhood sweetheart scene was especially uncomfortable to watch. Peining like this should chase his wife to the crematorium. Moreover, the plot is incomplete and does not explain the ending of the original heroine. I hope the author will keep the character of the first-dimensional heroine. The first-dimensional heroine made me think she is beautiful and sassy, ​​not easy to love, extremely egoistic, and very creative. Full-level fast travelers with many skills at the same time are all retired after all, right?

Others are acceptable, but Peining's, ahhh! Why! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]

One thing to say, except for the last story, which is too brainless, the other stories are pretty good and neat. There are no superfluous things to communicate with the system or thoughts that don't belong to the characters. They are all about saving.

Two of the female protagonists are a bit frustrated, but the others are pretty good [eating melon]

I feel like my heart-throb aura has weakened my heartache (´-ωก`)

It looks good. The male protagonists in each world have similar personalities. I feel like the male protagonists are sliced ​​up.

It's not bad, but the description of the text and language could be more beautiful, in which case the book would be more outstanding. However, it doesn't need to be too polished. If the language is more elegant, it will be good. Come on duck [send heart][send heart]

The first world is nice to watch, but the rest doesn't seem to be to my taste.

The demon Zunzunyue looked at me and I felt so uncomfortable that I couldn't calm down...

It's great to watch, the story is novel, and the characters are good

The writing is good(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ The style is also very novel [laughing] Keep up the good work and break through yourself💪(≧ω≦)

The full text has a lively pace, smooth writing, and fresh language. The only shortcoming is that the ending of each plane is a bit compact and general.

The little junior sister is doing well but has suffered something she shouldn't have to suffer.

It was pretty good, although the ending was a bit lame and haphazard. But the previous articles are really good as a whole. Each story has a very clear line direction. It is really nice. I recommend it to my eyes!

It's very beautiful. You can choose what you like. I'm very happy.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Super good-looking and high-end

It's okay, let's see again

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It feels like it was written by two people. Some worlds are beautifully written, while other worlds are mediocre.

I actually like the latter part more than the previous one. I was about to abandon the article at first, but I casually read the latter article and it was very interesting, so I just skipped and read the last chapter.

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good

Not bad, well organized and the plot flows smoothly

I have read a lot of fast-travel novels, and I think this one is very good. I like the length of each story and most of the storylines are pretty good. Why is the score so low?

In fact, this novel is quite good. The logic is clear, but the ending feels a bit hasty at the end. It's boring and girls who like Bai Yueguang recommend it.

Please do more updates, the writing is very good, and each one is beautiful, but there are not enough to read, so please update more, thank you for your hard work.

Very beautiful, highly recommended

Not bad, very pretty

It's very interesting. Please give it a try. [Love]