A Person and a Dog Forgotten by Time

It was very comfortable to read, similar to the one by Ximen Dahei Niu. However, when I changed the map, I felt that the book was too bland and I deleted it. I am looking forward to the development of this one.

It's good to read. The protagonist and Dahei are humorous and the middle two characters are funny. It's easy to read.

It's okay, it's funny, and the plot is okay, but it's a bit confusing to watch. For example, the protagonist wants to return to China but his cultivation level is not enough. The protagonist does not improve his strength, but goes to hunt for treasures and open a tavern. It just seems a bit confusing to me. Of course, it has something to do with the setting. The protagonist can become stronger by eating waste pills and become invincible quickly. The author added a saturation setting to balance it out. What I want to say is that it feels a little out of touch, incoherent, and has no mood setting. Then there is the issue of time. I don't have time for this novel, so I was fascinated by it. For example, when discussing the transfer of Wanxiang Sect to Lingyun Sect, I just said it a second ago, and it feels like it has been merged directly below. There are no ellipses, and there are not a few days later. There is a lot of text, and then it is very sloppy at the end. The title, but I think this is very interesting, but there are many typos, the characters are confusing, and the sentences are not smooth. Overall, this novel is quite funny.

It's really, really beautiful! My favorite is Dahei! I really cried to death when Dahei was sleeping, I even thought it was dead. . . . But it revived later! I felt very good after reading the whole book! Worth a look for everyone! ●ｖ●

Very similar to the immortals of Chen Xun and Ximen Heiniu. There is no conspiracy along the way. There is no villain with cerebral palsy. The immortals are ordinary and warm.

It's pretty good. The protagonist, one person and one dog, is humorous, but also warm-hearted. He opens a small shop in a human tavern, and enjoys it. After the earth wakes up, he discovers his identity, returns to the earth, and protects the world.

It's full of humor and quite funny. What do you say when it comes to the middle and late stages? Feeling a little tired. Alas, overall it's still very good. I'm looking forward to the next work. If you want to score it, it would be 87 points. Grade b

It's not bad for a traditional web article. It's not as exaggerated as a systematic article, but it's too everyday, lacks a little bit of excitement and passion, and is too slow to warm up. It would be better if it could add a little bit of excitement. (You can only check it for yourself, the author can take a look)

It looks great, but there are some details that need to be worked out. If you look at it normally, you may need to look for details in the middle.

Wang Yu's Dog Road made me laugh every step of the way, and it can always make people collapse in unexpected ways.

I like the simple and straightforward beginning, but later on I have bonds, such as saving the common people, and raising a daughter. I don't like it. The protagonist's characteristic is immortality. He does not need to cultivate immortality in order to seek immortality, and he is not bound by the laws of heaven. He can do what he wants, help mortals, open restaurants, open amusement parks, and open zoos. He can do whatever he wants and do whatever he wants.

Yes, another cool style of writing. Author, please update quickly and take a break! [Laughing][laughing]

The content is wonderful, much better than another novel I read, and the characters are also very interesting. Just don't spread too many maps, otherwise it will be boring. Of course, if the story is exciting, then that's another thing.

I've read a lot of immortality articles, and this one you wrote is the best, it's not watery! Humane

A very good book. Good luck to the author.

I finished reading it in one breath, So far it looks good, I hope it doesn't suck [eating melon]

This is a pretty good novel. Overall, it was a joy to read.

A very nice book, I recommend everyone to read it

I'm reading a book, it's nice, it's funny, I'm so happy, hey, I'm happy, this author kidnapped me and made me get away from everyone in the prostitution party.

It's a pretty good book, plain but interesting. The two protagonists are quite lively, and Erya is also quite cute [please update]

It's good to watch, but the plot behind it is a bit distracting, but it's okay

Based on my experience in reading novels, this novel starts out funny and then adds a little bit of sadness. Anyway, overall it's pretty good

Very good, I hope the author is great, keep up the good work

Why is it so beautiful and rated so low? Anyway, I feel really good

It can be said that this book is not very amazing when I read it, but it has a kind of magic that makes people want to know what happens next. Now that I read it, I have no idea of ​​abandoning it, and I don't feel tired or boring. Every frame has a fresh feeling. I can only say that the rating of this book should not be so low! ! !

Praise for the author, the book is very nice

It is really rare for people to write about this kind of subject matter. It's fun to watch, keep it up! [Blowing kiss]

This is a very interesting book. Come on, author.

Recommended by old bookworms, worth a look

Super exciting, I like this style very much, cheers for the author