Witches of the World: This White-Haired Girl Is a Little Too Much

Friends who are reading a book. Welcome to leave comments and comments! Let me be healthy. Who likes the Witch?

I don't see how strong the S-class Dragon Curse is, and its performance is not as good as that of the A-class. There are too many scenes of supporting characters in Chapter 50, and the fights do not show how powerful the protagonist's S-level dragon curse is, giving people a feeling of being ordinary. It can be seen that the protagonist's mother is a strong person with a childish heart. The setting is good, but she does not provide the protagonist with even the most basic training items. Is this a strong person? Even if you have the strength, your child will have to suffer.

Yes, there are no men in the witch world, that's good

Do the protagonist's two mothers not care about the protagonist's growth? According to the introduction, the two mothers of the protagonist are both big bosses, but the resources the protagonist needs are all obtained by himself. So what are the uses of these two mothers (big bosses)? It is better to write that the two mothers are ordinary witches who cannot become witches, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch.

This is the coolest witch I have ever seen, a witch who ages. And the protagonist is not disdainful at all! Greed of money is only a part of crumbs, not greed for money is crumbs

There are not many people watching, so give me a five-star encouragement first. The narrative style feels more comfortable and natural, without much nonsense, extra points. Sometimes there will be typos and so on. You can put it into Word to read it before posting. The automatic error correction is quite easy to use. Can you give some metaphors for the battle scenes, especially the skills? At present, the graphics are not strong or the effects are not very good, and the shocking skills cannot be felt. I really like this technology + magic setting, but unfortunately there are not many things on the technology side. It would be very interesting to combine the two (find out about the wind magic AK (yes, it is the picture of Barbara))

It's said that it's a relaxed daily life, but it turns out that it's not as satisfying as it should be. You have to hold it in, and you hold it in with outsiders, even with your best friend, and you don't even tell the truth to your own mother. I really can't stand this kind of protagonist who thinks he has a brain even though he's obviously brainless, and he's so hard-hearted that he doesn't trust anyone 🤮

After watching a little bit, I found that the main character kept pretending to be a pig. If you don't like it, you can quit. It feels like one of the poisonous points. Anyway, I was so embarrassed that I dug my toes into the ground while watching it. Four stars first to see if there are any good things later. If not, it is my only courtesy to give three stars.

The subject matter is good, but the setting is not very good. It is a witch world, there are unnatural events, there are unnatural powers, and you still have to cook by hand? Do the laundry? And Granny Long, won't she be too weak as a principal? Logically speaking, the stronger you are, the more beautiful you can be. If this is not possible, then the world is too weak, right? Low fantasy world??? If ordinary people could live, grow old, get sick, and die, then they would all be witches, so their lifespans should be very long, right? It feels like writing about urban supernatural beings, but the subject matter is witches. "The House Witch" is well written, you can learn from it. I've read more than 50 of them, but I don't feel the feeling of magic at all. It just feels like the city plus superpowers.

The start is a bit discouraging. There is no need to hide it. Where will the hidden resources come from? Should I be the first to enter when picking the destiny star next time or will it be exposed? What should I do if I get selected from the next best place? I don't understand. Thank you for your hard work for three stars.