Blue Star*****

I comment directly to myself If you think it's a good read, start writing book reviews. Thank you for your support. Your support is my biggest motivation. If I don't feel comfortable making suggestions, I will definitely adopt them. ✿ヽ(°▽°)ノ✿(∗ᵒ̶̶̷̀ ˂̶́∗) ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧ I watched it again and it felt pretty good!

As a good classmate (father) who has a deep blood relationship with the author, I was very moved when I saw the author updating diligently every day. But I think the intensity of the author's weekly updates is a little too high? And sometimes I force myself to continue creating without inspiration. I think this behavior is undesirable. Having the desire to write a novel is not a bad thing, but I still hope that the author will not push himself too hard and give his brain a holiday, so that he can come up with more interesting and attractive plots. I hope your novel will be read by more people than ever before. (According to the author's reaction, the previous book review could not be observed by the author because the reading time was less than half an hour, so it was rewritten) I feel like the author has rushed the plot in some places. The adventures of the protagonist group are also a bit too smooth, giving people a sense of being taken for granted, and it is difficult to see the growth of the protagonist group. In the subsequent plot, you can try to set a great difficulty for the protagonist group, which is enough to subvert the difficulty of reshaping the three views of the protagonist group. This will help reflect the dangers of the game world and also help show the growth of the protagonist group. And I personally think that the personalities of the current protagonists are not outstanding enough, that is, it is difficult for people to tell the characteristics of a certain character at the first time. This problem is especially prominent for Lin Han. Characters that are difficult to impress will encounter many problems in subsequent shaping and emotional resonance. The above contents are all my personal opinions and do not need to be taken seriously. (The previous follow-up reviews are also written together)

It's really a good novel. How can I put it, I am new to Tomato, but this novel really convinced me and made me have a very good impression of Tomato. First of all, the plot concept and plot arrangement are very smooth. What's the point of laughter? What kind of jokes are there in endlessly? There are so many that it is overwhelming. The characters are very well drawn, and I was deeply attracted to it from the first chapter. But I don't know why so few people have read it. When I first read it, I thought it was a masterpiece and that it was written by an experienced writer. I didn't expect that it was a newcomer who was writing for the first time! Come on! Don't cut off the roots! Otherwise I will be very sad!

It's very fascinating, the author is so perseverant, Zhou Geng also followed him [laughs]

Come on, come on, come on! I hope I can keep writing, and I hope I can go up after reading. Tomato is a bit discerning, and good books should be seen by more people! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧(๑⁼̴ ꇴ ⁼̴)

The author writes well. I definitely play games a lot in my daily life. I am a sports student! There is a future! Come on! [Learned][Learned][Learned]

The setting is quite amazing, funny yet passionate. The plots inside are well connected and it's very refreshing to watch.

The characters are carefully designed, but the game text is actually not easy to write. It is humorous without losing its connotation, so it is worth reading.

Although the author is a child, it doesn't stop it from being interesting! There are all kinds of memes emerging one after another, which is really nb. I hope the author can update more!

The author can completely follow the plot of the closed beta game. It's up to the author to reduce the number of staff.

What makes a good book? That's what the author is like!

High-quality web articles with accurate data and humor. He knows how to compose risqué lyrics, so the author is quite talented [laughing][laughing][laughing]

[Face covering] The writing is rigorous yet humorous, with an interesting setting. It is recommended to use small expressions properly to add more joy [laughs]

It's really good. I came across it by chance. I just came to Tomato and saw such a book. The experience was very good! I hope it won't stop updating, otherwise I will be very disappointed!

The new book is coming soon, and I hope it will become a hit. If it does, I will become a long-time fan!

There are too many books nowadays, but not many good ones. This one is one of them. The plot arrangement is very reasonable.

The author writes very well, and the games he incorporates are generally well written.

The storyline is okay and the writing is good

Totally worth seeing! The author looks at me! No eunuchs!

Come on, I quite like it

Matsui Ye is so powerful, Lin Yuan was most seriously injured by him.

It's a very good book. I've read it all, and I still feel a little bit unfinished. I feel like I haven't read enough. The content is very exciting and interesting.

Very suitable for my taste

I feel like the protagonist is very brave and...

I really love it. One of the few authors who pay close attention to book fans (my perspective)

The author writes well with a novel concept, and I also like the description of Blue Star.