Blue Star, Wait for My Return

I comment directly to myself If you think it's a good read, start writing book reviews. Thank you for your support. Your support is my biggest motivation. If I don't feel comfortable making suggestions, I will definitely adopt them. ✿ヽ(°▽°)ノ✿(∗ᵒ̶̶̷̀ ˂̶́∗) ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧ I watched it again and it felt pretty good!

As a good classmate (father) who has a deep blood relationship with the author, I was very moved when I saw the author updating diligently every day. But I think the intensity of the author's weekly updates is a little too high? And sometimes I force myself to continue creating without inspiration. I think this behavior is undesirable. Having the desire to write a novel is not a bad thing, but I still hope that the author will not push himself too hard and give his brain a holiday, so that he can come up with more interesting and attractive plots. I hope your novel will be read by more people than ever before. (According to the author's reaction, the previous book review could not be observed by the author because the reading time was less than half an hour, so it was rewritten) I feel like the author has rushed the plot in some places. The adventures of the protagonist group are also a bit too smooth, giving people a sense of being taken for granted, and it is difficult to see the growth of the protagonist group. In the subsequent plot, you can try to set a great difficulty for the protagonist group, which is enough to subvert the difficulty of reshaping the three views of the protagonist group. This will help reflect the dangers of the game world and also help show the growth of the protagonist group. And I personally think that the personalities of the current protagonists are not outstanding enough, that is, it is difficult for people to tell the characteristics of a certain character at the first time. This problem is especially prominent for Lin Han. Characters that are difficult to impress will encounter many problems in subsequent shaping and emotional resonance. The above contents are all my personal opinions and do not need to be taken seriously. (The previous follow-up reviews are also written together)

The author writes well, but the settings must be adjusted For example, the overall structure of the game can be directly described as being similar to a super god gene. It is also recommended that the source setting should be changed to something like the national destiny (in fact, the national destiny is not good), rather than some poisonous point that invades the earth and kills it. If you are a civilian, are you willing to die? In addition, it is a bit bad to vilify people from other countries. You see, even if you spare your life, you do not vilify outsiders, so it can be written. Give it a private setting, don't let the player die, limit the level above to drop the level, limit the below limit to deprive the power and return to the earth as a lamb. Otherwise, just kill foreigners to upgrade?

It's really a good novel. How can I put it, I am new to Tomato, but this novel really convinced me and made me have a very good impression of Tomato. First of all, the plot concept and plot arrangement are very smooth. What's the point of laughter? What kind of jokes are there in endlessly? There are so many that it is overwhelming. The characters are very well drawn, and I was deeply attracted to it from the first chapter. But I don't know why so few people have read it. When I first read it, I thought it was a masterpiece and that it was written by an experienced writer. I didn't expect that it was a newcomer who was writing for the first time! Come on! Don't cut off the roots! Otherwise I will be very sad!

Come on, come on, come on! I hope I can keep writing, and I hope I can go up after reading. Tomato is a bit discerning, and good books should be seen by more people! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧(๑⁼̴ ꇴ ⁼̴)

It's very fascinating, the author is so perseverant, Zhou Geng also followed him [laughs]

If it is true, everyone is confused when I turn around. The writing is so strong (nods), but the words are a little short (shakes head). I don't like to leave messages. The author can just read it!

The setting is quite amazing, funny yet passionate. The plots inside are well connected and it's very refreshing to watch.

The author writes well. I definitely play games a lot in my daily life. I am a sports student! There is a future! Come on! [Learned][Learned][Learned]

Although the author is a child, it doesn't stop it from being interesting! There are all kinds of memes emerging one after another, which is really nb. I hope the author can update more!