Becoming the Man of Heaven’s Will from the Start

I suggest changing the cover. This cover is really disappointing. It cannot attract readers' interest in reading. I mainly watched it because I was really bored. The result gave me a little surprise, the writing was pretty good. Details and plot need to be improved. The details are a bit lacking. The plot is untrue. (Probably a new author) There could be more plots about the way of heaven (personal opinion) Keep writing! . Don't keep updating 🙂🙂. Generally speaking, it is still creative, but in addition to writing about daily life, you can also add something else. This will make it more flavorful. Anyway, I have collected it and am waiting for your update.

Is there anyone? Can you give me some advice?