Pirates: Grab the Barrier Fruit at the Beginning

Personally, I feel very good about it. It is courageous and resolute, decisive in killing, and the setting is novel. It does not lick the protagonist and does not save Ace. It is very good to kill Whitebeard and its affiliated pirate group without the Holy Mother. If you want to spend some time, you can read it. It is considered good among many pirate fanfics. Pretty good, but I don't understand what happened to Zoro? A lot of people criticized it, but they didn't lick the main character group wildly

. . The rating doesn't look high, but it still maintains the quality of the author's first two works. The content is pretty good among similar novels. At least it has a pirate flavor. It's not like other novels where pig's feet have a sense of justice as soon as they travel through time. The whole novel criticizes pirates. It's too tiring to read a fan novel that doesn't tell stories but only makes sense. , Lack of interest... PS. There is no messy Naruto ninjutsu in the novel, which can be regarded as an advantage. I have seen too many pigs' feet showing off ninjutsu and kunai in One Piece fan novels, and I don't know why they don't code Naruto fan novels. This chaotic spirit is very confusing...

A very nice pirate fanfic. IQ is online, there is no poison, no system.

Come on, author, I like this work very much. The character of the protagonist can be a hero, ruthless and cruel. It is quite different from other authors' protagonist Madonna. I really like it. I like it more and more. I can make the protagonist a pirate who surpasses Rocks🏴‍☠️.

It's very good. It describes a real pirate, one who is ambitious, accompanied by beautiful women, and accompanied by companions.

To be honest, the biggest highlight of this book is that the pig's feet are relatively real. He is decisive in killing and follows his own desires. As a pirate, he is not a virgin. Those who follow me will prosper and those who go against me will perish. He will rob beautiful women when they want them. He is a true hero. The plot is also relatively compact and reasonable, and it develops and strengthens its power step by step. Generally speaking, it is of high quality among pirate fanfics.

The protagonist is not a protagonist of the lawful good camp, but he is not a pure evil camp either. He is considered a lawful evil protagonist. For people who don't like this kind of protagonist, they may not be able to accept some of the plot. But for readers who accept this kind of protagonist, this plot is still good. Just because it was written relatively early, some plot settings were backstabbed by the original work, but these are minor issues and do not affect reading. Then, Systemless was praised, Harem was praised, Decisive Killing was praised, plot was praised, and Momonosuke's handling was praised. The summary deserves five stars. [Sinister smile]

It's so cool. It's very well written. I read it for several days in a row. It's so good. The world view is complete and realistic, and the battle plot is also very well written. The director's planning of the war is also very consistent with the setting of the time traveler. [Smile] I really couldn't help laughing when Straw Hat Luffy entered the naval base [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] It was very nervous, but I really couldn't help laughing [snickering] [smirking] [smirking]. I look forward to the author's next work. The author is so awesome [smile]

Very good, the emotional scenes are a bit flawed

It's a good read. The author is a sea fan and didn't write it randomly. Although I was put off several times by the awkward names in the first few chapters, but when I saw 96 Hours of Reading in the reviews saying it was good, I still calmed down and read it. It's a wonderful work. The unsystematic step-by-step process of becoming stronger is very interesting. The only criticism is the harem. If there were less female protagonists, the score would be very high.

It's a very good pirate story, with excellent combat kills, but I always think about the end of the wave. After the war, the enhancement is too powerful. The protagonist expands and fights Kaido's mother continuously, and then directly Im only takes three years from the beginning to the end of the sea, and does not give his subordinates time to grow. The thunder fruit was also wasted by Nami. It has little combat power and is just a power bank. In the later period, there were too many fruits and too many fruits under his subordinates, and they were not developed and used very much! ! ! [Laughing and crying] Excellent description of combat. He still grew up too fast. After the fourth fruit, he didn't exercise much, but he still grew up so fast. Whoever still exercises can just eat the fantasy beast type. Awakening is as easy as drinking water [laughing and crying] Of course, the two top combat powers still have to fight together. Unlike other novels, either I will give you a second, or I will give you a second and you will be resurrected repeatedly [laughing and crying]

[Chigua] In fact, this book is considered to have a large format and high quality among Pirates. The logic is not too confusing, and it is quite enjoyable. The author's performance is just average, a bit shaky, but the quality is still guaranteed. If the author's performance had been better and the author had done it every day, this book might have been the first one I read. [From Pirates to the Universe] It's a pity that the author is not very famous, otherwise the results would still be good. In fact, you can go to the Pirates book circle to promote it, otherwise the author may have no motivation [laughing and crying]

I'll give it five stars. It's okay. There's no bloody plot or brainless plot. Overall, it's a little enjoyable. Just don't have so many fighting scenes. One fighting scene requires three or four chapters. It's too long, so I usually skip it. There should be many people wondering whether this is a single heroine or multiple heroines. This is a multi-heroine story. It is a harem story, and it can be big or small, as long as it is beautiful. Like that big mermaid who is more than 20 meters tall, she dares to do it. This way of writing by the author can be used as a fanfic, unlike other fanfics where you need to give credit to the protagonist. It would be bad if you don't have any thoughts of your own. This novel directly robs the protagonist of his opportunities regardless of the protagonist. How cool is that?

Come on, follow the new speed, a rare protagonist in One Piece that makes people feel comfortable. I hope I can maintain my original intention [Like][Like][Like]

(163, More, 25➕) After reading more than a hundred chapters, this second creation is okay. Although it has multiple female protagonists, the protagonist still focuses on his own strength (I don't know if this will change in the future). There is no system, you can develop it by yourself and your imagination is still possible. Those who are interested can take a look. [You taste carefully]

It's a good novel. When I first read the introduction, it was relatively simple and I didn't have high hopes. I didn't expect that after reading it, I found it to be unexpectedly good. Except for the name of the protagonist's pirate group, which is a bit disappointing. The name of the Big Daddy Pirates is too frustrating. Everything else is good. The protagonist will not let go of his bottom line when he goes to sea to become a pirate. He will not kill poor people. He will never be soft on fellow pirates or navy, and he will kill decisively. It's very comfortable, and the protagonist's IQ is online throughout the whole process. He relies on the intelligence advantage of the time traveler prophet to make various calculations. When traveling to the East China Sea, he walked and flew, leaving Luffy with nowhere to go. After entering the Grand Line, he took Blackbeard's path, leaving Blackbeard with nowhere to go. He climbed to the top step by step, including the ending. I personally feel that it is better. As a pirate fan novel, it is still very good. Give five stars to support the author.

[Laughing] Alexandre Dumas, the plot writing is good and the opening ability is just right, without other messy golden fingers to interfere. At first I wanted to severely criticize this Alexandre Dumas novel [laughing]

When I first read the cover page, I thought that the protagonist could solve the problem of multi-fruit abilities by relying on barrier fruits alone, but it didn't have much impact because the protagonist also had multi-fruit abilities. The protagonist is a stallion and basically pretty, and the plot design doesn't have any major problems. Overall, it's a good pirate fanfic.

The characters in the plot are quite good, and the various fruits and characters in the theatrical version are all collected similarly, whether they are subordinates or confidants, but I just feel that the plot is advancing a bit fast. From the year before Luffy went to sea to the ending, it feels like the time span is a bit short, but it is really super good-looking Not bad, the ending is pretty good too, pretty good

It's a great book. I read it a long time ago, but it wasn't finished at that time. Now that I've finished it, I still feel very comfortable after reading it again. The logic chain is fine, the protagonist's character is also very good, and the harem doesn't take up too many fighting scenes. The big scenes are well written, and the final ending is decisive and not draggy.

Overall, it's pretty good. It's not Madonna, nor bloodthirsty. It's not brainless in terms of morality and humanity. You have to know that in reality, people are much scarier than here, so it's not suitable for Madonna, little fairies or little fairy men.

Just do it all in one day, okay? The writing is not bad. Although it has flaws, it is much better than the pirate novels on the market. Although it's impossible to satisfy everyone, I think it's pretty good. Must have perfect score. The author has great ideas and looks very good. This book will have an ending. I hope to publish more new books to maintain the quality.

A masterpiece! One of the top pirate fandoms! From the beginning to the end, it is very beautiful, with no flaws. It is rare for me to see the completion of a pirate fanfic. This book is great! Brothers, highly recommended! ! !

I've finished reading, Many Fruits, Green Dragon, Darkness, Barrier, Cruel and Evil, Many Women but They Are All Reasonable, They are all mentioned at once without constant description, unity, intelligence and force are all on the line, without being long-winded. Enough to read for two days.

I just recently got tired of reading pirate novels about being a marine. The novel about being a pirate is more popular. If you have the power, open a harem! Even Jesus can't stop him! Rise from humble beginnings and steal Blackbeard's script. From the Shichibukai to the Four Emperors, from the Four Emperors to the Master of the World. Let's watch the protagonist "Big Daddy" become the strongest step by step!

This is a pretty good pirate novel. Compared with the author's other pirate capital squeezing book, this one does not add other worlds. It is a pure pirate novel. Book friends who like pirates can read it. I recommend it. Personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

I've finished reading it, and it's pretty good. Although it's a harem novel, the emotional line is basically non-existent. It's even a little awkward but not serious. Everything else is fine. I haven't watched One Piece. I personally think there's nothing wrong with the plot and the quality is not low.

Talents, fruits, and beauties are all accepted. This is what a pirate looks like. By knowing the plot and setting up defenses in advance, you won't think that other books will be careless or miss a lot of treasures. It's great to be able to rise without plug-ins. The settings are very good, and the four-in-one of defense, attack, recovery, and restraint is very unsolvable. The ending is perfect. It won't end as soon as Im is defeated. There will be a follow-up.

It's very beautiful. I'm not very good at it. I barely managed to beat Im. The final battle was very exciting. Both sides tried their best. It's a pity that I didn't declare victory first. I explained a few words first and it pulled me out of the excitement.

It's a bit dark, but it's also very good. It's smart and not one-sided. Come on, update quickly.