Time Travel and Become a Passerby Hero in a Novel

It feels like the previous one is a bit like "Becoming the Top Hero in Novel", except that the author himself walks through the book. There is also a male protagonist, a male supporting character, and two women, but it is still very interesting!

I like it very much, but the ones I like seem to be niche works

I have finished reading all the updated ones, and the progress of the main plot is quite good. At least it is not easy for me to finish watching them all (I am the kind of person who just leaves after watching a little bit of thunder [face covering]). I would like to give the author a few suggestions. One is that the protagonist is a bit too weak. Although he knows what is going to happen, he actually has no ability to change the direction. The demons are all top-level elite monsters. The skills of the male protagonist are really not enough. The other is that the male protagonist is a bit too weak. You don't need to be so deliberate about the relationship. It feels a bit like the male protagonist of an ancient light novel. He deliberately acts like a love idiot. It's enough to let him be a normal person. There is no need to write this kind of character that is now eliminated. Finally, there is a kind reminder. The combat power of this book is actually quite confusing. The author can improve this aspect a little, at least not to cause the collapse of the combat power (although the current description is very vague). Finally, writing a book is not easy, come on [eat melon]

It's good to watch, but it just feels like it's not interesting enough. The main character is not brainless, and there's only one female protagonist. (After seeing the back part, it seems that the main character doesn't seem to have traveled through another world, but is like a person from this world, and there are also memory fragments. I don't understand it. I'll comment first. And I really love the setting and plot of this world, but the male protagonist is a little confused about the female protagonist.)

It's very interesting, I hope there is no female protagonist, I hope there is no female protagonist! There is a heroine, so I thought this rating would be without a heroine, which is uncomfortable, and I don't like the character of the heroine.

Very interesting, I hope the author doesn't hire a ghostwriter

Why does it feel like I've read it somewhere? It seems like the setting of a comic I read a few months ago has a similar beginning. That's not right. The comic is from Korea, and it shouldn't have been drawn before this book.

Not bad, keep up the good work

The book is pretty good, with some references in setting and early plot. I recommend that the author cite the source.

The writing is very good, it's my favorite type, but I always feel that the plot could be more fleshed out, and it would be great if the growth of the protagonist and companions can be more profound. I always feel that the protagonist's combat power increases each time without any real sense [Thoughts]

A passerby in the novel. But why isn't it original? Can't find [cover face][cover face]

Could it be a ♂ male?....

It's just that the writing is a bit naive. I hope to read the follow-up. After all, in this subject, I have only seen one Korean comic called Becoming the Top Hero in the Novel. The plot is similar to the author's, but it's a pity that it seems to have been discontinued. I am more looking forward to what the author will write in the future. (｢･ω･)｢Hey

You finally came back to update. Have you saved the manuscript? We really don't want you to suddenly stop updating again QAQ

The writing is good, and the dual-perspective narrative at the beginning is not overwhelming, but the plot always feels a bit familiar, so you can look forward to it. The male protagonist's character setting is very weird. It always feels like it's changing all the time. It's obviously from the perspective of an outsider, but it always feels very confusing.

Why do good books always have low ratings [crying]

Feeling good so far

The main plot line is well promoted, and the story line is okay, but the inner monologue still has room for improvement. I look forward to your next work.

The author, please give it a try

Lao Deng, you are finally back, I cao, I miss you so much

It feels pretty good, author, keep up the good work

Damn, can Chung Se-hyun have more roles? I really like the bond between the original protagonist and the current protagonist, and I really don't like the heroine's character. I still liked her very much in the early stage, but in the later stage, after getting together with the male protagonist, she became a spoiled woman. Many things began to be based on the male protagonist's perspective. She is not as independent and strong as in the early stage. If it really doesn't work, let's rewrite it as a double male [crying] [crying]

It looks pretty good, and I'm curious as to why both parties have suspected memory impairments.

It's pretty good, I hope the author will keep it up

Blindly guessing the rebirth of the protagonist [laughing] It's quite interesting to see it from the perspective ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

The Riddler dies

It's not simple. I forgot to add this book before and couldn't find it after searching for a long time. Now it appears in my recommendation again. The author is so awesome.

It's powerful, and honestly it's really good-looking.

How can I say it is really, really beautiful! The emotional descriptions of the characters are very detailed, and I think the main character's outlook on life is quite correct.

Very interesting, good luck to the author