That Year I Held a Knife and a Gun and Fought from Paradise into the Void.

The writing is good. There is nothing wrong with it so far. It smells like reincarnation. I still hope that the author can find his own way. Since you are writing about the sun, I suggest you focus on the soul type. You can write film and television works in the first few worlds, and the next ones will be the native world. As long as the combat power system does not collapse, you can write the latter ones. You can become a god in Tomato.

The rhythm and feeling are both good, and it feels like a paradise. Moreover, they have clearly developed a new power system, so why would anyone say that they copy the skills of the final spell? I am very much looking forward to when the protagonist enters the native world. As long as it doesn't collapse in the later stages, it will be an absolute masterpiece. It is also suggested that the author be tied to a small dark room to update five times a day. Now there are too few and it is not enough to read.

Okay, okay, it's still developing now, question Bai Ye. Understand the white night. Hope it can be surpassed later. White night. Even the authors I follow are not in good health. I hope you don't fall victim to them.

Oh, you have borrowed the model of Samsara Paradise.

Write less about the technical type and more about the sun type. Isn't the Master better than a warrior?

How should I put it? I feel that the sun is more suitable for heavy weapons. The knife feels a bit like a small fight. Emmmm. Small suggestions.

Come on! Nice! ! !

It feels pretty good, why is the rating so low😢

I haven't seen many pictures. The author's writing is very good, but the danger is not proportional to the reward, which does not conform to the equal exchange rules of the park.

Not bad, the civet cat is a bit funny, hahaha

As long as you don't suck, I'll keep chasing you

It's pretty good. The number of battle descriptions and the number of words in each world is a little more than in Paradise, but the quality is about the same, so: Big cheers to the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] The dual main weapons feel quite novel, um... A little bit watery.

Although there are some shortcomings, I personally think it is still very beautiful.

I hope there will be a female protagonist, so far it looks okay I feel like this book is not doing well. The author must not be a eunuch. Someone is supporting you.

The author is so short and praises the sun

The book is good but has some shadows. I believe it will get better and better. After all, Mosquito writes too slowly. You can take a look at this. It's very good.

Chicken, you are so beautiful

Very nice, welcome to join in

Very interesting, keep up the good work!

I think it looks good

I've been saving for a long time, it looks great [laughs]

It's great, cheers author!

Good looking, come on author

Come on, come on, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on, author, the writing is very good. The author pretended to be Serah, did he go into the paradise to do the mission like a mosquito? Why don't you update it soon? Is this book so unfinished? Do you still want to write it? Please give me a message.

Not bad, just a bit short

Very pretty hahaha

It smells like reincarnation paradise

Basically the same as reincarnation

Good, good, good