The Zombies Are Coming: Surviving the Apocalypse

I've read about 20% of the plot, and to sum it up, from a novice's perspective, the author's writing is quite good. Give me a five-star rating here, keep up the good work! Then, let me share some of my opinions as a reader. I think the most important aspect is the sense of substitution. This kind of novel requires a special portrayal of the protagonist's psychology, mind, and behavioral factors to highlight the growth. When writing, you cannot stand from God's perspective, otherwise it will seem easy to lose the sense of tension. Because your focus is on reality and there are no powers or systems, the highlight is the growth process of the protagonist and the portrayal of various human natures. I saw the protagonist killing his neighbor in just a few chapters. I thought this situation was a good opportunity to highlight the protagonist's growth. From the beginning, he was a naive student, and after a series of ideological struggles, he finally picked up the butcher's knife. This is not the Virgin, but a portrayal of a normal person. Many psychological descriptions, if you don't describe them, readers won't be able to feel it because they don't have a God's perspective. So I think you need to be particularly immersive when writing, imagine yourself as the protagonist, what you should think and do, and describe it clearly. By the way, judging from your style, could it be that the author is a girl? [Stunned]🍉👍👍

Come on author, it's great

Come on, develop your brain