Mixed in Kuangdang, the Yellow Moonlight in the World

This book is the top fanfic of Kuangbiao. As expected, the female authors who can write on male channels are all very good. I have met three of them, Yuyou's Single Press M249, The King of Qin's Da Qin, and this Kuangbiao article. They are all amazing, awesome! ! !

Come on, it looks good, Huang Mou feels weird.

I've finished reading it. It's a very good novel. Here are my comments: The content is pretty much the same as the name. Huang Yueguang in the World mainly highlights the word "yellow". The protagonist Huang really does it. I, Huang, have a sworn relationship with gambling and drugs. I guess this is the reason why I have this protagonist. And the content is not bad, there is nothing poisonous about it. Well, this is a harem novel with multiple female protagonists. , Those who like to watch single female protagonists should not read it anymore, it is quite a waste of time. Those who like to watch harem scenes like me, or are not against harems, I highly recommend you to take a look. It is very interesting and the car is very fast. The main reason is that it is old. It's great. I like watching this. The plot in it is narrative and messy. There is nothing disturbing and ugly. There is no abusive protagonist. It has a perfect ending. Overall, it is very good. I recommend reading it and give it a five-star rating!

I like to read it and hope the author will continue to work hard

It's very good, much better than that 9:00-ish Kuangzhou fanfic.

It's very interesting. When I looked at the cover and the name, I thought the protagonist was a woman. Then I clicked in and took a look. I found it was completely different from what I thought. It's worth a read.

I think this book is the best fanfic among Tomato novels, keep it up 😊

Dreaming is a great experience, unlike other things where you can't even dream, great author, come on!

I just like those novels such as variety movies, but don't rely too much on the system flow. Write the emotional line more delicately, Uncle Dong's evil and Zhao Ruilong's arrogance. You can also add some characters from the movie Anti-drug.

Come on, it's well written, I like it very much!

Good book! I feel that the theme of Cyclonus is one of the two or three best ones so far. Although there are some minor flaws in the writing in some places, other parts are really good. Many people say that Madonna, but you have to conform to the original theme of the book! The protagonist has feelings, not a completely brainless Madonna, and has principles for dealing with people. Don't say it is poisonous. Which classic work these days, including previous ones, does not have one or two pitfalls? At least in terms of the system, I think it is very reasonable. Dahuang is not directly resurrected or saved, but reincarnated. What a highlight!

The writing is very interesting. I have never read the original work of Kuangbiao, but I have understood it more or less by watching the videos. Kuangbiao written by the author is not a simple black and white fight. The protagonist's kind-hearted character is still very popular.

Really pretty! Ahhhhh! Finished reading the whole book! All I can say is, it looks so good and I don't think it's enough! The characters in the book all stood up, and after just a few words, I felt that the words should have been spoken by the original author, such as Xu Jiang... I could see Jia Bing cursing in front of him from between the lines. There is also the character of the protagonist, who is not Wei Zhengguang, but also has his own persistence, such as the matter of Lao Mo, Li Qing, Li Youtian and his son... The protagonist does not believe in the law, but he has his own righteousness, and supported Lao Mo and Li Qing when he attacked Li Youtian. However, just like his premise and background of the "God of Medicine", it is not allowed by the law, but he is a person who has not violated his heart, and is a very real and flesh-and-blood person. The more you look at it, the better it gets! It can be said that... There is also the arrangement of Dahuang. When he first appeared, he was obviously not a very important character. He was just Xu Lei's hunting dog. But later he took Xu Jiang to escape with love and righteousness. After getting behind it, he was a good dog and did good things. Then he was hit and died and went to nirvana, setting the stage for Gao Qiqiang... It really showed me! Absolutely! From a dog, I feel the charm of humanity!

The writing is quite good, evil will be rewarded, and good will be rewarded. The protagonist in this book has a very good relationship with An Xin, which I agree with. A police officer who is upright, just, kind, and has a good outlook on life should not have bad consequences. This book is very comfortable to read. Five stars

The writing is good. Among this kind of subject matter, your writing is the most alternative. The writing is good, neither black nor white. It is very good, consistent with reality and logical. However, you did not finish the story of Uncle Dong, leaving a hole, but overall it is good.

Basically follow the plot, no magic changes. It has the long legs in black stockings that men like, and it retains the original work of Gao Qiqiang's Sun Tzu's Art of War, weakening Gao Qiqiang's poison and reducing the damage to An Xin's white hair! The bad guys are basically punished severely and it makes them less arrogant. There are also funny elements, just don't make it too strong.

It's very beautiful. Xiao Moumou is so cute [laughs]

Advantages: Wonderful and humorous, Qi Sheng went to Savadika (Gao Qiqiang is still dead, but reincarnated again). The protagonist is not a traditional saint (? Demining: But if the male protagonist doesn't take the initiative or refuse, the sister-in-law, Cheng Cheng, Gao Qilan, and Meng Yu will all be accepted

It is a very good book. At the beginning, I thought there were no plot changes. Later, the plot became shorter and more compact. It can be seen that the author's writing level is quite high and the content is quite interesting. It is a good book. There are a few small flaws in it, but the flaws are not concealed.

It's so good to read. I've read so many fanfics about Kuangbao, and this one is my favorite.

It's the most interesting fanfic I've ever read.

The plot is very good and the logic is clear. Of course, the author is not an all-rounder, but it is already very good to be able to write like this. This novel by Tomato can exceed 90%. Those with the same model and plot are incomparable. It is recommended to read it.

It's so good, I read it in one sitting, it's sweet but not boring.

Whether it's the novel system that substitutes for Kuang Bian or the three-dimensional characters in it, it's great. The protagonist is also very vivid and makes people feel real.

The writing is quite compact, which is good, but I feel like there are still some holes that haven't been filled in. I think I can give it four and a half stars. The last half star is for you.

It's just that the early author's descriptions were not clear enough, and I didn't understand it well. The later author made up for this shortcoming. There are other issues, big and small, but innocuous. This book can catch up with the books with a score of 9 or more. The protagonist's characteristics are nonsensical and funny, but there is no lack of voice. It's good, I like it.

This book is good, give it a five-star support

This book is funny and good at the beginning but a bit tiring in the middle, but the ending is very good. Especially the last chapter made me laugh to death [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

My favorite book about Kuangbiao The characterization is perfect, but where did Gao Qisheng go?

Very beautiful, definitely a masterpiece among fans! It's over with a lot of regrets