My Name Is Shadow, Number One in the Sequence, Chief of King's Landing

It's very good. I just hope there won't be a harem and Su Xue can be the heroine. Please give it to the author [crying] because the author's description of the love atmosphere is so good that I almost fell into it [smirking] [blowing kiss] Come on, author~

After reading a little bit, I think it's a great book that I like. So far, the protagonist is not brainless and sensible. It has a single heroine. The author's writing is good. Come on.

So pretty! ! ! I hope the author can continue to write well. One update every day is fine. I really like this type of novel, and the author's writing style is also very good. I recommend it! ! !

It is especially suitable for secondary school students who are now prospective college students. The male and female protagonists don't know each other in the sequence game, but they are Qingzhu in reality. They all want to become stronger and protect each other. I really want to watch it. If you want to read it, click on the book! [Thinking] ps: The author is probably a woman😊

It is a book that I personally like; the writing is okay, the plot is okay, the protagonist subjectively has a loving girlfriend, but there are other girls who have strange feelings for the hero (on various levels), so please proceed with caution; the update speed is not very fast, but at least it is quite stable; I like the settings very much, but there is a little need to adjust the brainwave; the characters have different opinions, some are exaggerated versions that are more biased towards the two-dimensional version; The overall evaluation is that it is a book worth reading. It is a bit picky for readers. If you like it, the reading experience is still okay.

After reading a lot of fast-paced and refreshing stories on Tomato, I really felt a special feeling when reading this one. The transition between everyday and extraordinary is very smooth without any abrupt feeling, and the male and female protagonists are also very comfortable to read in daily life. If it were not on Tomato, it would definitely be a big hit, but it is a pity that Tomato is not very popular.

The main body of this book is quite good and has style. The sequence game level ranking is very unexpected. I thought it would be an ordinary defeat and occupation of the person's position, but the result is that it is calculated based on what you did and the time, strength, difficulty, etc. It took to defeat the person. This is very good. Yinghe Qingxian is also very sweet, and Lian'er's yandere attribute is also very good (personally I think it can be a little more crazy), but I can't stand Ji Yue being a dog, so I wear a collar. Author, I can understand your fetish, but it's a bit poisonous, because I have the idea of ​​abandoning this person. The plot is also okay, the emotional scenes are also quite sweet, except for Ji Yue, I really can't stand it if you let her be a dog. The maid is also okay, why does she have to be a dog?

The author's description is very detailed, and it feels like watching an anime. Currently, the IQ is online, and the emotional line is described very well in a male video. Anyway, it is not awkward, and it is quite interesting to watch. I just feel that the women are a bit confused, Su Xue has some scenes in the front, and the main scene is when the male and female protagonists tell each other's identities (166, anyway, it's the sunflower, the point!!!) Later, I feel that Luo Rou's scene is the main one, and Su Xue can basically be ignored. After joining Ji Yue's company, I feel that no matter where the male protagonist is, there is Luo Rou next to her. , Although I know that Luo Rou is paving the way for what will come next (of course, my subjective emotions are more serious. In the harem where I have appeared, I don't like Luo Rou a little bit.) The author was still very angry when writing the big scenes in the second volume. He just pitied Uncle Fujitani, I liked his image very much, but in the end he still died, and he was very angry. (I hope he can live even more) Finally, the author would like to encourage you to keep the quality and quantity, and don't stop or give up. If you book friends have similar books, you can recommend them to me, thank you! In the second chapter, the emotional line and the main text are integrated smoothly. The main character Su Xue's status is stable, her relationship with the male protagonist is confirmed, and she has a contrasting cuteness. However, he has ambiguous relationships with other women (Lian, Ji Yue, Luo Rou), and has a tendency to go to the harem alone. Original text: Su Xue stared at him faintly, even if he did that, she would forgive him... (This is after the two parties revealed their identities, Su Xue asked about the relationship between the hero and Lian, of course, it may be that I over-interpreted it) The setting of the sequence game is not very clear, and the way to advance the ranking is unclear and vague. Eg: It has A-level regeneration ability but has stayed at [D-level first] for many years. This is understood as a special card level; my current understanding is that [strength] and [ranking] are not equal. You can look at the ranking in the early stage, and the actual combat power in the later stage. Ranking is of no use (it just shows your identity if you ask). In my opinion, the biggest flaw of this book is the image of Luo Rou. She has a good job, but thinks she is not doing well; she wants to join the game when the relationship between the male and female protagonists is clear, and there is a feeling that she particularly wants to cross the line, which makes people uncomfortable; the treatment of Luo Rou when she transforms into a collection of fears is very abrupt. Personal suggestion: write less about Luo Rou, increase the length of Su Xue, and stabilize the status of the single heroine. Of course, if the author confirms that he wants to go solo to the harem, just pretend that I didn't say anything. But if I could please tell you, Luo Rou really can't stand it.

It's a really good book. The author's writing style is quite gorgeous. It has a strong sense of middle school without being embarrassing. Although it is a harem, the emotional line is quite sweet and it doesn't seem to be the kind of novel that dislikes the old. There are quite a lot of holes to be dug, but if you can fill them all in later without collapsing, it will definitely be a masterpiece. However, there are still some small shortcomings. For example, the author sometimes uses gorgeous words inappropriately, resulting in a lack of writing. Another very painful thing is that the author updates very slowly. Of course, this does not mean that you need to keep books. A good boy will not keep books. Maybe the traffic of this book will increase, and the author will become more diligent in updating. By the way, the protagonist of this book is a genius character

It is indeed a good book. It attracted me in the first chapter. Maybe it resonated with me suddenly. It was the feeling that spoke to my heart. I just finished reading The Powerful Shadow some time ago, and I felt a sense of déjà vu at first when I saw this. However, the description of this book from the perspective of the protagonist makes people feel even more similar to admiration? It's very fast, and there are some parts of the description that I can't understand, but it feels very strong. [Top post] The protagonist's timely second sentence made me feel no sense of disobedience, and I pretended to be in my heart. The foreshadowing in the plot is also well done. There are also daily writings that are so sweet [Adoration] Confession Porridge

This is the most amazing book I have ever read. It is by no means an exaggeration. The characters are portrayed bit by bit. This is something I have not seen in other books. I hope the author keeps this style and does not go downhill. I may not have very gorgeous words, but the author writes really well.

I would like to give some advice to the author. If you want to write it like Master Shadow, it is best not to make too many ambiguous female characters. Especially when you are pretending to be *, it is very unsatisfactory. In addition, in terms of look and feel, both harem and single are better than pseudo harem. I hope the author will take a look at it. In addition, one important reason why Lord Shadow is so happy to watch is that Shadow will not be unable to walk when he sees a woman. . .

Yes, the protagonist is a combination of two and passionate, calm and wise, and there are many adult jokes. The ingredients are very complex, and overall it is very good-looking.

The writing is very delicate, and the style is a bit depressing and gloomy, especially in the character description and emotional line. The character description in the emotional line always gives people a warm and leisurely feeling, but I don't know why I always feel a little regretful in it. Maybe I didn't read very carefully about combat, and I didn't read anything. The introduction said that Chapter 91 was the first in the sequence, but when I saw it, I realized it was the first in the E-level. I felt like I was cheated [I almost cried] Then there is the chief. To become the chief, you must lose the ability to advance, which is to be E-level forever. This may dissuade many people. There is also a later article where he hid his identity in the Ji Group and only confessed to Su Xue in Chapter 116. If you want to read a cool article about pushing the invincible, you can go. I skipped through the rest of the article and couldn't understand it. I'm sorry, my question (┯_┯) If I don't understand it, I won't read it. I will continue to pursue cool stories. After all, is the end of the novel a cool story? (~￣▽￣)~

It's pretty good, one point for the plot, although I don't remember the world view completely. One point is given to the fact that the protagonist's emotional line is not messy and it successfully integrates with the plot. One point is given to the characters, Luo Rou's innocence and hard work. Lian is a yandere. Although I personally feel that the reason for liking the protagonist is a bit far-fetched, Lian really left a deep impression on me (I really like this kind of yandere, can you post a character picture) of Su Xue's strength, beauty and contrast. One point for the author's writing style and description, which are among the best among the authors I have ever seen. I'll give you one point... If the author has a picture, I'll really give it to you. It's pretty good. Hehehehe, Su Xue, hehehehe... One point will be deducted for fear that you will be proud [laughing evilly]

The book is very light, not exciting, not depressing, very light. I haven't read much, there are only 20 chapters, but it has already taken the form of a light novel. This novel uses darkness as the foreshadowing and love as the lightness. Darkness is synonymous with purity, and the beauty of tranquility is synonymous with love. One waxes and wanes, the other grows, and both parties worry about each other. You can definitely feel the word beauty! But it is based on Shuangwen and draws on Japanese comics as the carrier, which more or less contains the word "toilet paper". Even so, as long as the word "light" in light novels is remembered, it can make readers feel beautiful, relaxed and no longer depressed, then this novel can also be included in the list of successes, and can also enjoy the name of a master. (I would also like to declare to other readers that it is best not to leave comments when reading this novel. Just like you read Japanese comics, you will leave comments just like you read Japanese comics. I think most of them will not. If you read light novels and seek relaxation, don't read comments.) The book is very interesting. I will continue to read it and hope we can encourage each other [OK]

I have read it n+1 times (the actual reading time is 67 hours). The storyline is relatively compact and the characters are well depicted. It is worth reading... Although it has been discontinued for thousands of years, I still believe that this "Legendary Interrupted King" will come back... I want to send some pressure.

I have one thing to say, this book really suits my taste. The elegant, calm, smart, and confident male protagonist simply doesn't fit my fantasy. Like, like, like. Also, let's start a harem. Every female character that appears in it is very good, and the plot is also very consistent with the harem route, so (seriously) I'll read them all. Sweeping the tomb... It's July 2024. Is the author still updating? I really like this style of writing. Please, come back soon.

I feel like the writing is very good, although it feels a little too average in some places, but it's just right for me [smile]

Now that I see it, I feel pretty good. It's not easy to see such high-quality articles. It's not that I can't accept a female protagonist, but I can't stand it when the male protagonist has a girlfriend and is a bit ambiguous with other girls. For example, the agreement between the male protagonist and the eldest daughter of the Ji family to pretend to be a pet dog. Although it is a willingness to admit defeat, it feels a bit like the beginning of their relationship. (If the author did not mean this, then I am over-interpreting it, and I am very sorry). Does the author want to have a harem? I like Su Xue very much, and I really hope that this couple is the only one for each other. 😣😣😣 (Just a suggestion, the author can just follow his own pace)

This book really has a lot of details. Characteristics should be present to everyone. The scenes are also described very thoughtfully and clearly. Secondly, there is almost no sense of inconsistency in the characters' emotions. Summary evaluation: It is an upper-middle-class novel. Most of the controls are very good and there is almost no sense of violation. I also read most of the comments. But I didn't see that this novel might have some reference. It's based on an anime. Um, I forgot about this anime. I remember it was an anime I watched 56 years ago. It's been so long that I've forgotten everything, even my name. I'll see if I can find it if I have time to search. I originally wanted to tell you the general plot, but due to confusion in my memory, the two animes were a bit confused.)

Four stars for encouragement. The author's writing is very good, but it made me feel uncomfortable after reading The Shadow's Powerful Person [laughing and crying]. After all, The Shadow's Powerful Person is an invincible stream, and you are a growth stream. I look forward to seeing you in the next book.

It is a very good book. The author has a very good grasp of the main line of the book and the emotional line of the protagonist. They do not conflict with each other and make people feel comfortable to read. The protagonist is very aloof to the outside world, but he is very gentle towards his girlfriend, and the portrayal of all aspects of the character is very good. The protagonist is a bit like the male protagonist of "Shadow Power", he is very good at pretending to be 13, each character is very unique, even the swordsman is comfortable and does not violate the rules. Personally, I like this book very much in every aspect. It is a great book by a man that I will never tire of reading!

The writing is very descriptive, I like it very much, I just like this kind of meticulous author, it doesn't matter if he writes slowly. Some people say they are too middle-aged. I can only say that they are too old. They are so old. If you can't read it, quit quickly. From the first glance, the author has a young man who has just grown up or has just reached level 20. He has the heart of a teenager. If you old people can't stand it, just leave quickly. How can there be someone who is not middle-class in the second dimension? Really, which anime nowadays is so hot that the second grade is nothing at all? Why isn't the protagonist allowed to be a secondary character? This kind of description is perfect, and has a sense of instant visibility like comics and anime. People like them don't know it. They probably like to read those real-life cuckolds and other sand sculptures, and don't care about them at all. By the way, when did the heroine and the protagonist recognize each other and expose each other? I'm very curious, I just read the first few dozen chapters Quick, can anyone tell me when the male and female protagonists confirm each other's identities in the sequence game? Really, I really need to know. I just finished reading the first few dozen chapters. The writing is very good and I like it very much.

This novel is more of a secondary type. There will be a lot of speeches in this area in the early stages, but it is basically within an acceptable range. This is a semi-growth story. In the early stage, the male protagonist will use the ability "Blank" many times to make himself stronger, but later on, he will increase his strength by constantly honing his existing abilities. The heroine should be a pure fairy, and other women are also somewhat depicted but not in the harem. Of course, I personally prefer no heroine. The article mentioned many times that "Chief" refers to the title that can only be obtained by the first E-level player under special circumstances, and I think its mission is to clear the "Sequence Game" Overall, this novel is quite to my liking. After all, my friends often say that I am a middle school student [please read carefully] So I gave it five stars [laughing]

It looks good, but I can't interact with other girls. It's so ambiguous that I can't stand it. If I didn't become boyfriend and girlfriend with Su Xue at the beginning, I wouldn't think it would be a problem, but seeing them together with other girls makes me so uncomfortable. I hope that the single heroine [sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart]

Not bad, it smells like a light novel, which is good for relieving boredom.

I think the writing is one of the best among the novels Tomato, and the plot is also very outrageous. It's a pity that the update has been discontinued. The part about the Pacific War was directly crowned a god.

After reading it, I found that the author is a college student, and the environment in the first dozens of chapters is very well written. The opponent has thinking. There is no absolute villain yet. I hope it is not an invincible article, only a growth article can be written for a long time.

The author's writing style is very delicate and his perspective is very well controlled. Reading along the way, I have a prose experience, a very novel and unique way. I like it very much, and this is one of the few comments I've ever made. I hope the author will continue writing. After all, writing a book is difficult, let alone creating an art!