My Name Is Shadow, First in the Sequence, Supreme Leader

It's very good. I just hope there won't be a harem and Su Xue can be the heroine. Please give it to the author [crying] because the author's description of the love atmosphere is so good that I almost fell into it [smirking] [blowing kiss] Come on, author~

Author, I hope you can continue writing, believe me, it will definitely become popular This book really suits my taste, very nice

After reading a little bit, I think it's a great book that I like. So far, the protagonist is not brainless and sensible. It has a single heroine. The author's writing is good. Come on.

So pretty! ! ! I hope the author can continue to write well. One update every day is fine. I really like this type of novel, and the author's writing style is also very good. I recommend it! ! !

It is especially suitable for secondary school students who are now prospective college students. The male and female protagonists don't know each other in the sequence game, but they are Qingzhu in reality. They all want to become stronger and protect each other. I really want to watch it. If you want to read it, click on the book! [Thinking] ps: The author is probably a woman😊

It is a book that I personally like; the writing is okay, the plot is okay, the protagonist subjectively has a loving girlfriend, but there are other girls who have strange feelings for the hero (on various levels), so please proceed with caution; the update speed is not very fast, but at least it is quite stable; I like the settings very much, but there is a little need to adjust the brainwave; the characters have different opinions, some are exaggerated versions that are more biased towards the two-dimensional version; The overall evaluation is that it is a book worth reading. It is a bit picky for readers. If you like it, the reading experience is still okay.

After reading a lot of fast-paced and refreshing stories on Tomato, I really felt a special feeling when reading this one. The transition between everyday and extraordinary is very smooth without any abrupt feeling, and the male and female protagonists are also very comfortable to read in daily life. If it were not on Tomato, it would definitely be a big hit, but it is a pity that Tomato is not very popular.

The author's description is very detailed, and it feels like watching an anime. Currently, the IQ is online, and the emotional line is described very well in a male video. Anyway, it is not awkward, and it is quite interesting to watch. I just feel that the women are a bit confused, Su Xue has some scenes in the front, and the main scene is when the male and female protagonists tell each other's identities (166, anyway, it's the sunflower, the point!!!) Later, I feel that Luo Rou's scene is the main one, and Su Xue can basically be ignored. After joining Ji Yue's company, I feel that no matter where the male protagonist is, there is Luo Rou next to her. , Although I know that Luo Rou is paving the way for what will come next (of course, my subjective emotions are more serious. In the harem where I have appeared, I don't like Luo Rou a little bit.) The author was still very angry when writing the big scenes in the second volume. He just pitied Uncle Fujitani, I liked his image very much, but in the end he still died, and he was very angry. (I hope he can live even more) Finally, the author would like to encourage you to keep the quality and quantity, and don't stop or give up. If you book friends have similar books, you can recommend them to me, thank you! In the second chapter, the emotional line and the main text are integrated smoothly. The main character Su Xue's status is stable, her relationship with the male protagonist is confirmed, and she has a contrasting cuteness. However, he has ambiguous relationships with other women (Lian, Ji Yue, Luo Rou), and has a tendency to go to the harem alone. Original text: Su Xue stared at him faintly, even if he did that, she would forgive him... (This is after the two parties revealed their identities, Su Xue asked about the relationship between the hero and Lian, of course, it may be that I over-interpreted it) The setting of the sequence game is not very clear, and the way to advance the ranking is unclear and vague. Eg: It has A-level regeneration ability but has stayed at [D-level first] for many years. This is understood as a special card level; my current understanding is that [strength] and [ranking] are not equal. You can look at the ranking in the early stage, and the actual combat power in the later stage. Ranking is of no use (it just shows your identity if you ask). In my opinion, the biggest flaw of this book is the image of Luo Rou. She has a good job, but thinks she is not doing well; she wants to join the game when the relationship between the male and female protagonists is clear, and there is a feeling that she particularly wants to cross the line, which makes people uncomfortable; the treatment of Luo Rou when she transforms into a collection of fears is very abrupt. Personal suggestion: write less about Luo Rou, increase the length of Su Xue, and stabilize the status of the single heroine. Of course, if the author confirms that he wants to go solo to the harem, just pretend that I didn't say anything. But if I could please tell you, Luo Rou really can't stand it.

The main body of this book is quite good and has style. The sequence game level ranking is very unexpected. I thought it would be an ordinary defeat and occupation of the person's position, but the result is that it is calculated based on what you did and the time, strength, difficulty, etc. It took to defeat the person. This is very good. Yinghe Qingxian is also very sweet, and Lian'er's yandere attribute is also very good (personally I think it can be a little more crazy), but I can't stand Ji Yue being a dog, so I wear a collar. Author, I can understand your fetish, but it's a bit poisonous, because I have the idea of ​​abandoning this person. The plot is also okay, the emotional scenes are also quite sweet, except for Ji Yue, I really can't stand it if you let her be a dog. The maid is also okay, why does she have to be a dog?

It's a really good book. The author's writing style is quite gorgeous. It has a strong sense of middle school without being embarrassing. Although it is a harem, the emotional line is quite sweet and it doesn't seem to be the kind of novel that dislikes the old. There are quite a lot of holes to be dug, but if you can fill them all in later without collapsing, it will definitely be a masterpiece. However, there are still some small shortcomings. For example, the author sometimes uses gorgeous words inappropriately, resulting in a lack of writing. Another very painful thing is that the author updates very slowly. Of course, this does not mean that you need to keep books. A good boy will not keep books. Maybe the traffic of this book will increase, and the author will become more diligent in updating. By the way, the protagonist of this book is a genius character