When You Turn Around

I feel like the heroine is okay. They reconciled so quickly. Bai Yueguang is also obsessed with the heroine and is engaged. Can she still pursue her husband in the crematorium? Is it necessary to add a new character to let the heroine empathize with others 🤔 It is estimated that the heroine found out she was pregnant and broke up with the hero, beat the child, and did not get married. The hero was so disheartened that he gave up completely.

Three stars is the intention, four stars is the encouragement. A licking dog and a lotus are quite realistic, but this is a novel. It really makes people uncomfortable, but in reality, this kind of woman will not regret it, she will only make it worse.

It's quite good-looking, with delicate emotions, but it's really a bit cheesy in the early stages, and we'll see how it gets better later on.

The author's writing is quite good. I strongly hope that Senior Yunyao will be promoted to the top. The characters are well-written and she is more affectionate than the male protagonist. I like her very much. The highlights in the later period should be the male protagonist's heart-broken Chi Yue chasing her husband and the male protagonist slowly falling in love with the senior. Do not arrange for the senior to suddenly fall in love with someone else (you also need to write a second male lead who is better and richer than the male protagonist), such as If you really write about the love affair in the early stage, you can't stand it (the diary is very touching and not enough), and there are two endings to this kind of story. The first one is that the male protagonist or the female protagonist dies and the other party regrets it (the key point is that there is no fatal disease, suicide and car accidents are too bloody, unrealistic), the second one is that the male protagonist marries his senior sister and the female protagonist regrets it (if the senior student doesn't fall in love, you have to write a plump female third) If the senior sister finally kicks the heroine, five small accounts will be opened to give you five stars 🤭

As of Chapter 111, the male protagonist has chased, licked, and loved the female protagonist, but the female protagonist has indeed hurt her. She betrayed, went to jail, had a miscarriage, and indirectly killed her grandmother. You can't just recover from amnesia and just pretend that it didn't happen. The school sister's emotional companionship with the male protagonist seems to be much cleaner and pure. She stayed with him during breakup, started a business with him, and the female protagonist lost her memory and got divorced. If I were to put it bluntly, it ends with the male protagonist feeling indifferent and alone, the female protagonist having to chase her husband without feeling guilty for the rest of her life, and the senior sister having a long-distance relationship with her for the rest of her life. Cut them all with one knife. In the end, I concluded that this book is not a good read. The minor flaws do not hide the carelessness, and it can be read by a small audience.

One person wrote in blood, the second woman wrote in superiority 👍

Support the senior sister's rise to the top and give the poor a happy life. If she doesn't rise to the top, she will be given two stars later 🤭

I read a little more and found it to be okay. The writing is not bad, but it is a bit uncomfortable. In the early stage, the male protagonist was too licky, but in the later stage, they were together after chasing the husband. This kind of writing can actually be a bit sadistic. In short, I would like to encourage you with five stars.

A piece of advice to authors, never write articles based on readers' comments. I remember a great writer said that the characters in the novels he wrote were initially described according to his writing outline. However, as he wrote, these characters would escape the author's control. They would start to act out of their imaginations and not follow the author's routine. To put it bluntly, the characters had their own thoughts and behaviors, and the author only recorded their thoughts and behaviors, but could not control them. This is what is called bringing characters to life!

At first it seemed quite disappointing and I didn't really like it, but after reading 100 chapters, I started to feel a little bit tired of it. Overall, this book has a few flaws (the male protagonist goes too far in licking the dog), but the writing is delicate, the emotions are rich, and the plot is fascinating. I hope the author will keep up the good work, support you, support you.