Great Ming: Zhu Yuanzhang Personally Appointed Me Military Advisor

There are a bunch of typos and the sentences don't make sense. Can you review the manuscript and send it to me?

My head hurts when I read it, there are a lot of typos, I wrote one sentence here and there, and I can't even understand it.

Trouble with typos and incoherence

What the hell are you writing?

It's all typos and I can't even read it.

Al copied and pasted it somewhere, but there was nothing in the review [what]

No matter what he writes, he is a systematic person, and he still lives such a miserable life.

It's so confusing, it's all guesswork

What are you writing about?

There are so many typos that it's unimaginable and I don't even know how to read them.