Fight for Immortality

It's so beautiful. This depressing feeling is the feeling of cultivating immortals. Since ancient times, all the great masters in cultivating immortals have not gained it by stepping on countless bones. [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

At present, the writing is good, the plot is smooth and natural, and it is not toxic. I will keep it first (✿＞◡❛)

It's very interesting. The protagonist relies on himself step by step [laughs]. I wouldn't say that the plot is exaggerated.

It's well written, but I don't plan to follow it anymore. It's a bit boring, but exciting fighting.

Write from another perspective! Find a new way! Not bad!

As of Chapter 136, this book is, in my opinion, the most exciting novel about mortals cultivating immortality since The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality. I hope the author will keep it up!

I especially like to read novels about cultivating immortals like this one. I just hope he can be more ruthless, like Xueyunzi's human flesh foundation. Most people would be shaken when they see it. Overall this book is quite good. Profit First is written just right. Not too gory, not too Madonna. This book is very well written in the early stages, and I am waiting for updates every day. I have been following it for a month, and the author will not update it later. The next dozen chapters are really poorly written, but I like this novel very much. A filter was added to my eyes, allowing me to read every chapter. I only now know that he has finished it. When I was reading it, I felt that the author had run out of inspiration. The writing is often flimsy, and the protagonist of the plot is always overwhelmed by others, and is chased back and forth by others. I remembered that when this book was still updated, when I was reading the comments in the circle, someone complained that the protagonist always got ignored. I felt at the time that the protagonist was so powerful that it wouldn't always be like this. I picked up the keyboard and refuted it, but I didn't even wait until it was finished. The above are my personal thoughts and I am not criticizing the author.

The writing is very beautiful, and the human nature of cultivators is very realistic.

I found a novel on cultivating immortals that I could read on Tomato.

The writing is really good, unlike other mortal genres that only follow formulas, and the pace is relatively slow, but the description of the fights is quite good, and the arrangement of various exciting points is also pretty good. It makes people want to continue watching, and it is worth watching.

This book is very well written! ! The villains in the fairy tales I read in the past were all brainless people. They talked too much nonsense and their brains were not easy to use. The protagonist would offend the rich children by doing anything trivial. However, in this book, I saw that the protagonist and the villain are both intelligent. They are all scheming and fighting openly and secretly. The fight scenes are very exciting. Nowadays, there are not many fairy tales with this kind of wonderful writing. I highly recommend it!

The protagonist has no backer and no power, so he is cautious and cautious in the world of immortality. But without enough information, even if you make what seems to be the right choice at the moment, you will often fall into a near-death situation. Because of the double-sided bronze mirror, Wang Zheng tried his best to fight as little or as little as possible, but he was always dragged into the situation by various factors. It's a good book.

It's well written, the jungle is strong and the jungle is strong, and every step is cautious. This is a required course for those who are weak in the law of the jungle. Great!

It's well written and feels like a mortal [sending my heart]

A good book. The plot of this book has ups and downs. There is no plot where the protagonist beats others up. Although there are golden fingers, it is within a reasonable range. It is a rare good book. It is a pity that I did not get to see Earning Immortals in the end. I still recommend it. I wish all my fellow immortals a long and prosperous journey to immortality, and we will meet again if we have the chance.

The ideas are clear and the story is wonderful. Like it.

The writing is quite good, the writing is smooth, the plot is compact, and the story has ups and downs.

It feels like a real journey of cultivating immortality and seeking immortality. The process is tortuous and dangerous, and human nature is the most real thing to grasp. It's not like some protagonists in some fairy tales who refuse to accept and just do it all day long. They are invincible in the same realm and jump levels to fight back. The whole protagonist can't be beaten to death and is not afraid of death.

The most attractive part of this book is the three-person fight in the early 60s. Without that section, I might have given up on the book. I would like to write more about intrigues, multi-person melee, and mutual checks and balances. I was careless and the halo of wisdom was obvious later. The main character's meridians were damaged but he didn't take the Golden Marrow Pill that could repair the meridians. Run to buy other elixirs to repair meridians. I can understand what you are talking about about the elixirs for training or the elixirs for improving combat effectiveness, but why does the protagonist suddenly need to use higher-level elixirs to repair the meridians when his physical fitness has been improved to 0 when they are not conjoined? His physical fitness has improved so he needs better elixirs? It has never practiced physical training, and its DNA has no mutations and is still within the human range. It is known that the physical fitness has not changed, so taking the same medicine will have no effect. Unless he practices or breaks through to strengthen his body. But the setting of this book is different from other books. It does not break through the setting of strengthening the body, so you are just eating the setting.

It is well written, with many new ideas. I would give this book 5 stars. [Like][Like][Like]

I give top marks! Although it sucks, it's well written! Especially when the maid is being sucked out of her soul to refine her soul, that last shout of "Young Master..." Is worth a thousand words of love! I really hope that if I continue writing, the resurrected maid will take her to the upper world with her!

I just watched the end, and I didn't expect it to suddenly disappear. I didn't feel that it was because you, Taoist friend, said you couldn't write anymore. This book is the best one I have read in recent times. First of all, it is not a brainless and cool text. Secondly, it does not rely too much on cheats. When you get the treasure, you don't dare to use it crazily because of the crime of having a treasure. Everything is more reasonable, so that the writing can be smooth and smooth. The story is also very exciting, with various battles of wits, life and death, bizarre encounters, etc. The protagonist is also cautious and calm, which is very suitable for my taste. I originally thought he was too rational, but I didn't expect that in the end, his attitude toward Zhang Xiaoshu turned out to be a flesh-and-blood person, no longer the indifferent training machine in the early stage. This feels good. It would be better if there were more bonds like this between the characters, but it is a pity that there is no future. A slight shortcoming is that when describing the sect, it is written that the children of the sect have no cohesion at all. So how could such an organization be created and exist? Even the Demon Sect should be a group of like-minded disciples who have mutual trust, or the sect will effectively limit internal strife. Otherwise, why would you organize such a sect if it is scattered? Isn't it better to be a high-level casual cultivator, and allocate resources to the disciples who have no centripetal force towards the sect, which is obviously a loss. Of course, this is only a small shortcoming, and the whole book is still great. I wish the author all the best in his career and family, and look forward to his next work [Like]

Super recommended! This is the second orthodox book on immortality that I have read after many years. The calculations and emotions in particular are beyond ordinary people! I don't know if there are any other themes about cultivating immortality that I can finish reading. Some Taoist friends recommend it!

I think this is the path to immortality for ordinary monks. They don't have a big background or good spiritual roots. They have to think about the pros and cons when seizing opportunities. They must always be vigilant about the people around them. They must be fully prepared for everything they do. Put their lives first. Fighting with heaven and others. This is not immortality, this is striving for immortality.

I have read the whole book and found it exciting overall, but sometimes a bit boring. The climax of the plot is the fight before entering the Ancient Immortal Palace. The plot is full of twists and turns, and Zhang Xiaoshu died after someone refined her soul. Many Taoist friends should feel the regret. The interest relationship between cultivators is quite scheming. Compared with watching the relationship between ordinary people and Xian Ni gives people a natural feeling, but I personally think it's not that interesting. In view of the author's pioneering work, and the basic plot has been written at the end, although the ending is hasty, it is regrettable that it is a profound experience. I originally wanted to give it nine points, but it seems that I can only give four or five stars, so I will encourage the author with five stars [smile] [smile]

The story is not bad, the plot is okay, I was fascinated by it, but the ending is too rushed.

The idea is very good, the process is full of games, there are two people playing games, there are many people playing games, the plot is compact, and there are many twists and turns. However, the protagonist is relatively weak and fails to develop and expand his own power based on his strengths. His followers also fail to protect him well. They wander around for a long time and are attacked here and there, which is also disappointing.

It's quite novel. The highlight is that the male protagonist is a demon cultivator who started to cultivate immortality. The master is a pig farmer (the male protagonist is the pig that is being raised, waiting for the time to be used as a medicine to introduce evil skills to build the foundation). The golden finger is a mirror that can copy spiritual items with spiritual stones. None of the demon cultivators in the whole sect are good people. They are all connected by interests. This is indeed the first time I have read a fairy tale from this perspective. But I still can't stand it. The biggest drawback is that the map changes too slowly. I'm impatient to keep doing the same thing in the same place for dozens of chapters without moving. The flaws outweigh the highlights, making it a bit tiring to read. I haven't finished reading it. The comments are biased and are for reference only.

The male protagonist's interests come first, he is easy to kill and not easy to kill. The villain has clear ideas and many tricks. The plot is full of ups and downs, and it received full praise. The only pity is that there is no ending plot.

At present, this book about cultivating immortals is the most beautiful book I personally think. The inner activities and scheming of the protagonist are really the best I have ever seen. I really like it. I hope the author can continue writing. I have read many novels. If this book had not ended so hastily, I think it would be better than the masterpieces such as Swallowing the Starry Sky. I don't know why the author can't write anymore. I hope you can continue writing and read more readers. I wish you well.