Quick Wear: Male Protagonist, Please Wake Up, I Am the Second Male Lead

Author of hellohello I would like to give some little suggestions to the author. Since the male protagonist will be with the second male lead, why not write more emotional scenes at the end? I really want to watch it. I want to watch it even if I don't have a car [I'm about to cry]

Yysy, it's really good-looking, but... . Please come up with some extra stories or short stories about us together [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] It's not enough [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] Wow, the ending is too sloppy! ! ! But it's still pretty~

It's very interesting, but the ending is a bit too sloppy [thinking] [thinking], well, actually I just want to see Cheche [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's really good-looking. For a protagonist like me, this is the best. I hope the author will do more [Adoration][Adoration] It's so beautiful, ah, even though it didn't say whether the protagonist likes the hero or not, in the end the hero still liked the protagonist, and the protagonist was still with the hero. I really like to watch this type of thing [Send my heart][Send my heart]

The plot of Small World is good and very novel, but I feel that each small world is a bit unfinished (personal feeling). The author is irresponsible. I suggest you not solve it in one or two sentences at the end. You can write more and want to follow up [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] (Also note that I only watched two worlds, and I feel this way about the first two. It may also be the author's foreshadowing. I look forward to the subsequent plot.) I think it's better for the author to write more [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's nice to read (○｀ε´○), but the ending of each story is a bit hasty [grieved] [grieved] Can the author write more about what happened after they got together? I want to eat meat [grieved] [grieved]

I really love this article. It is a Qingshui writer and people are really Qingshui! ! ! ! But the writing style is really good, I gnaw gnaw gnaw [note] After reading the result that I thought was (?) At first, eh? Shocking but not much. The emotional line of the protagonist, Emmm. It was really inexplicable when they were together, but in the early stage of Lenovo, I thought it was inexplicable and reasonable, which was enough [full]

It's a good read, and the end of each chapter can arouse suspense and make people think. Is this false happiness or an illusion? How did they eventually die? What happened to them? Will they end up being wiped out by the system when they are happy? ! ! A large-scale reasoning scene! ! Suspense: They have been together for a lifetime, a very happy life. This is an illusion, this is a lie, but they did love. What exactly did they go through later? ? ! ! Why does the male protagonist lose his memory in every world? Why do shy teenagers in every world fall in love with him. Is this love? This goes beyond a direct fate with the heroine! ! Beyond fate! ! ! ! Back to the topic, reasoning about the suspense left by the author. Author: They have been together all their lives, a very happy life.

It looks great, please give the author a thumbs up!

It's wonderful. The story is engaging and not draggy, but the ending is really too rushed. I hope the author writes more about different world planes. If the world types overlap, the plot identities should be obviously different [laughing]

He is mesmerized, extremely beautiful and powerful, yet extremely well-behaved and vulnerable in front of her husband. She is extremely possessive of her husband and loves her husband so much. He is also extremely handsome and a straight man. Every world will be conquered by his wife, and he is so sweet.

It's a genre I like. Overall it's good, and the character description of the protagonist is normal and realistic. It feels pretty much the same as what I had in mind. It's just good. The most important thing is to remind you to update! ! ! It's so pretty, but it's not enough

That's right, it's well written but (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) why does the ending ಥ_ಥ… It's really 🥲It's really 😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨 I hope the author will write more and better (✪▽✪) works (๑•॒̀ ູ॒•́๑)(▽^)

The plot of this book is very novel. However, it also contains a traditional plot. Each small world is very fast. The two protagonists only get together near the finale. The character setting is a bit weird. I don't like that the protagonist will erase his memory every time he goes through a world. The last world is too cruel. I was drunk twice. But luckily we are together in the end. Although the endings of each world are very messy, I still want to express that I quite like this book and recommend it. The author is great. I hope you can create more excellent works in the future. The ending should not be too messy🌝Otherwise I will really thank you🌚Come on!

This book is generally very good. In particular, the world of the post-apocalyptic heroine is very much in line with my taste. I have read it many times, but the updates are a bit slow. However, good books also require the efforts of the author, so I won't rush you. I hope the author will work hard and work hard to create better works.

It's really good-looking, but it's just that the crest is invisible and the ending is bad🚬🚬It's like the beginning of the writing was very good, but the process didn't last and I ran out of time and scrawled the ending, but it's okay after you get used to it🚬🚬🚬After all, there are really few tomato attack and control articles🚬🚬🚬But it really suits my XP

The literary talent is very nice! The logic is clear, but the writing is really clear and clear [I almost cried] [I almost cried] and it is all said in one stroke. Every beginning person in the world thinks that he is a straight man.

Really great! Overall, it's a sweet story, it's really good, but I read several chapters and couldn't figure out who is the attacker or the receiver. The main god is easily shy and pokes me. Who in the family understands this?

Except for the ending which was a little rushed, everything was very good to watch. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's so beautiful that you won't forget it after reading it. I haven't found a book that is as good as this one. It's really very good. I think the plot is very interesting. If I write again... If it's not this type, I think if... I can give it a try.

The more such literature, the better. No matter how tortuous the process is, they will eventually be together. I like he literature, and it is not abusive. Abuse is one of the things I hate most.

The author is great, it's okay, it's very beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, it's so sweet, the little couple is so sweet, I wish you a happy day, I watched it for a long time [crying] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] Goodbye by fate, [almost crying] [sending my heart]

It's very beautiful, but it's just right when you look at it. Just chirp, it's gone [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] Could you please update it faster [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Come on [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss]

It's really good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking! (I ended up without a car... The only regret)

Ok, it's very nice, and the ending is also [currently in development] [currently in development] Lu Qinmo finally got together with Chu Nanxing and was very happy. This kind of happiness lasted a whole life. [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

I love reading it. The style of this book is a bit like a fairy tale. It has the feeling of a narrator telling a story, a calm narrative, and the plot is also very interesting, but there are too few, and the protagonists in each plane end together. It is a classic ending of a fairy tale. They live happily together. I really like the plot in it, does anyone recommend something similar? Really few

It's good to watch, and the ending leaves a lingering flavor. I want to make a sequel [laughing and crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [sending heart] [shy] [admiration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

It's a very interesting book, very interesting. The ending of each world is almost a fixed happy template, and then the story progress is a bit fresh and refined, and then the protagonist is a real straight man hahahahaha, it's very interesting, and he is also a male protagonist who sticks to the setting of a straight man from beginning to end. I like it very much. Then it is more suitable for viewing with an emphasis on offense and control. However, if you want to watch it with an emphasis on offense and control, I recommend turning off the segmental commentary, otherwise it will affect the viewing experience to some extent.

The author's writing style is very delicate, and I really like their flowing emotions. The rain slowly fell silently. I wish the two protagonists happiness, health and longevity. I also wish the people of One Yuan have a wonderful present, past and future. (If people in one dimension are dissatisfied with their endings, I support them in changing their endings. Provided that they are real victims, if they are bad people, I wish them consequences!) The reason why I gave it four stars is because after I finished writing the emotions, I just said "They are very happy" and it was over. My suggestion is to write a final autobiography of attack or failure. I definitely give this five stars (personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.)

It's very fast-moving, with no specific description of things, and a purely emotional line. However, from the self-imagining of the text, it makes people feel that it goes very smoothly? ? And I can't stop watching hahaha