Red Mansion: Who Dares to Touch My Sister?

The five stars promised to the author are given to you. Come on.

As long as the author has ideas, has correct views, and doesn't write blindly, he deserves five stars. Whether reading a book is enjoyable or not depends on whether it suits your taste. If you kill people indiscriminately, all anti-social elements will read it. Normal people still have correct concepts of right and wrong. Come on, author, work hard to code, I will send you electricity [laughs]

It's really good. I quite like the character of the protagonist. It would be better to write more about the protagonist's achievements and accomplishments and less about the love between men and women.

The writing is really good, but there is a small problem, that is, since the protagonist has brought Dahuang Ting, there are very few scenes worth of this force... But the writing is very good! It's just a little bit missing, please update it~

There are no other faults except for the lack of updates. If there were no jumping at the end, it would be a very good Red Mansion fanfic.

5 Points. The character of Baochai set by the author is very interesting. The description of Daiyu is okay, at least at this time Daiyu is still facing Baoyu. I hope the plot of "Yingchun" can be written in a more dramatic way, so I'll collect it together.

Relatively speaking, it's pretty good. I like the single female protagonist, and I also like Baochai and Yishi IKEA. Red Mansion doesn't necessarily have to have multiple female leads. Wouldn't it be nice to help other beauties find a good match? Those who have a harem can only say that they treat them as playthings. As a man, I never believe that a man can fall in love with several women at the same time. Suggestion, I wish there were more emotional scenes, but the writing here is a bit sparse and bland. Baochai and Daiyu are close friends. Even Daiyu, who is sensitive and transparent, thinks that Baochai is good. She just wants to run her own life well, and at the same time, she also helps the people around her within her ability. Such a perfect person is praised in the original book's judgment and the crystal snow in the mountains. If the heroine of the Red Mansion is someone else, it doesn't matter if she has a harem. If she is Baochai, there is no need to have a harem. She is the most perfect wife and deserves to be together for the rest of her life.

The logic of the plot is very complete, and the characters are well-developed. Of course, I still have a suggestion, which is to try to write as little as possible about issues related to the West and religion. After all, there is a big gap between Eastern and Western cultural ideas, and the West is medieval Catholicism. Changes in ideological and cultural changes may cause loopholes in the plot. It is not recommended to write it. On the one hand, it is easy to break the plot, and on the other hand, there may be many people complaining about it. But other aspects are quite good, and it is completely in line with my thoughts on the "Dream of Red Mansions" fan fiction. However, this book has a shortcoming, that is, I couldn't sleep after reading it every night, which made me doze off in the self-study class the next day [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Good luck to the author, the writing is good, but I am afraid of siblings

Come on, author, your writing is very good, don't listen to those nonsense, and just ignore it if you don't read it carefully. Personally, I feel like there are a lot of water friends who want to blackmail you?

Not much poison, relatively smooth. It's just that the plot is a bit flat, with little ups and downs, the description of the immortal fight is too brief, there are no thrilling scenes and the magical sword is a little less magical. It may also be because there are not many chapters and it's not time yet. I look forward to the follow-up.

This book is very well written, and I enjoyed reading it personally. What the author said is also correct. I have long been displeased with those ** who comment on the human righteousness and morality that they talk about every day, but it is a waste of time to argue with those **. I give this book five stars and I support the author [please update]

I came to comment after seeing Chapter 102. The author is a talented author with a rich knowledge reserve. His writing is sharp and the articles are well connected. Personally, I feel it is perfect. Judging from my reading time, I can be considered an old bookworm. I have read a lot of books, so I am very picky. I almost never give a five-star review before I finish reading. Of course, the keyboard warrior has nothing to do if he insists on making a point. The author of the novel must have a full reserve of knowledge, and he must be able to write it, right, and the connection must be reasonable, right, and it must be more fascinating, right. So it is not easy to write a good book. Otherwise, if the four classics can be passed down forever, I am an ordinary reader and I don't expect the author to write a masterpiece that is passed down from generation to generation. No matter which reading software is used, if it is written reasonably and has a few minor flaws, it is already quite awesome. Feng Bu Feng Shen's personal opinion is that thousands of people have different preferences.

Compared to other Dreams of Red Mansions that I have read, I think it is very interesting. Unlike other Dreams of Red Mansions, which are all people who have traveled through time and space, the author has completely created a new character, which is much better than other articles.

The first time I read Houlou fanfic, it was quite interesting. Although it gradually went off track later on, I don't hate the kind of articles that expand territories, so it was okay. But based on the writing, I thought it was a multi-female protagonist, at least Sister Lin and Baochai, but later I found out that it was a single female protagonist.

The story is very good and the subject matter is very attractive. The shortcoming is that the writing style is relatively immature and the characters' personalities are not well sketched. In the first few chapters, it can be seen that the effort was made to write with literary talent, but it failed in the later chapters. I hope the author can improve. Overall, this book is good.

It feels like there's still more to it than that, but it's not impossible to have more female protagonists. But the author's single heroine has been very successful, with outstanding literary talent and well-drawn characters. Although it is a bit noisy, it is overall touching. Jia Huan didn't appear, which is a bit regretful, but I understand. The emperor has a distinctive personality and is satisfied. Xue Baochai is perfect, Lin Daiyu is perfect, Xue Pan is unexpected and satisfied, several Wang family aunts are good, Wang Xifeng is perfect, and Jia Baoyu is okay.

I feel like this book is underestimated. It's quite funny. The author doesn't engage in mindless plots. It's one of the better novels in Tomato. But I have some doubts about how the author will write in the future. I would make a bold guess that he might become an immortal and then leave the world of Red Mansions and go somewhere else [Thinking][Thinking]

I really have nothing to say, the author is so good. I am a person with no literary talent. I can no longer describe it in words. It is profound in memory, long in aftertaste, lingering fragrance, fascinating, exquisite, exciting, endless charm, splendid, endlessly readable, unable to put it down, immersive, ups and downs, complicated, interesting, and enjoyable. Relish the taste, Wei compiled the three masters, studied hard for five cars, forgot to sleep and eat, worked hard, worked hard and forgot to eat, burn ointment to follow the sundial, get up when the rooster crows, will work hard to make up for the weakness, hang the book by the horn of the ox, burn the chaff to look at myself, never let go of the scroll, stay up all night, work tirelessly day and night, work day and night, work tirelessly, work in the morning and night, plow day and night, lead the awl to prick the buttocks, read according to the saddle, read the Sutra in the morning and evening history

The red light doesn't stop, flying close to the ground. Hard shell, Chinese style Iai. Four in front and eight in back, crushing repeatedly. Fully insured and buried in a coffin. Life is like a play, I didn't pay attention. Blind spot collision, acquittal.

It's so pretty, the language is reasonable, not embarrassing, and it's also a bit fun. The control is just right, but there may be some adaptations of Dream of Red Mansions, but originally some aspects of Dream of Red Mansions are controversial, and everyone has different opinions.

I have looked for many writers who write about Red Mansions, and there are not many that have various settings that perfectly fit the value pursuits of modern people. Moreover, the heroine is Xue Baochai, not Daiyu, who is often written about, which can also be called a breath of fresh air. After all, who can not love Sister Bao, who is knowledgeable and courteous?

A good book, much better than the books on the market. I would like to ask: Is the author from Hongxue?

Overall, this book is pretty good. There are no major flaws in the plot. The whole book seems to run smoothly. Various details are written well or poorly, but there are no major problems. The only regret is that the ending is not very good. There is no need to write about another world.

I read it all night until four o'clock in the evening. A good book is like rain after drought to readers. The plot relies on Dream of Red Mansions but has the author's own innovation and understanding. It feels quite like the first time I read "The Great Butler" when I was in junior high school. It is shocking, the characters are vivid, the plot is humorous, but it still has a sense of history, which can be seen from the author's writing style. I hope I can keep writing at a high level and present us with a colorful world.

It was my first time to read The Dream of Red Mansions, which also helped me clarify the relationship between the characters. I recommend it to those who want to read Dream of Red Mansions in high school Chinese. I came to read the fanfic because I didn't really want to read Dream of Red Mansions. After all, reading electronic novels is much better than reading paper novels. But later it is of no use in clarifying the relationship between the characters. Also, you must read the original work to read this book. If you want to have your own opinions about the characters in the book, you can't just look at the fans.

This book by Zhu Jiahao is indeed. According to this development. Indeed, 1,000. People have 1,000 Dreams of Red Mansions. Just like the saying that for 1,000 readers, there are 1,000 Hamlets. But I think this fanfic you wrote is. It's indeed okay. I have read tens of thousands of novels. Look at it with perspective. Although not outstanding enough. But it's okay.

The overall story is well written, but some details still need to be worked out.

The writing is quite good, but you must pay attention to the intensity of the background. Don't write the Red Mansion as a martial arts flourishing and a battle between immortals. It is just right now, especially in the research and development of firearms. I have to say that the author brother, you are someone who understands firearms. I am optimistic about you! [Like][Like][Like]

Before, everyone had a good time watching the excitement, and the story was also very interesting. It looked good, and it was written around the characters in the Red Mansion... Slowly, there may be nothing to write about, and the results were not bad. I started to test it out, and now everyone has begun to compete for hegemony overseas... I am constantly being disturbed by it.