I'm Changing the Plot of "Quick Time Travel" in the Time Travel Bookstore

The author's new book is very beautiful and is a quick-running chapter. I just finished reading the first world. The first world is well written. The author's writing style is logical, no nonsense, and sweet. Everyone, feel free to enter.

333 Quietly took out things: the zombie crystal cores given by Zheng Bingxuan and Qin Suizhu, the paintings given by Song Jingchuan and Yan Zhiyi, the gemstone statuettes given by Yin Hezhou and Shen Yutang, the Chi The best spiritual stones from Yang and Su Xianjun, a series of "lychee" brand brochures and dolls from Yan Lanxing and Bai Qingshang, jade carvings, amulets from Yan Zhi and Shu Wang, Meng Zezhi and congratulations The whole set of toy guns given by Zhizhou, and the book "Original Work Adaptation Plan" that Xu Can and 333 finally completed together and modified by Fussard, are full of memories. 333'S presence is not strong, just like a reader, quietly reading their story. I like this ending very much. It would be better if there were more extras.

It's a very interesting unit to go through. The plot and characters are very good. The reason for missing one star is that each world is a bit too long and the rest is a bit boring. I feel that about thirty chapters per world may be just right.

This book is about sweet pets, not aggressive at all. Attackers also respect recipients and consider recipients' feelings. The same applies to recipients. The special sweet person is an attack and control person. He doesn't like the kind of mindless abuse, and he doesn't like the label that says "sweet pet" and then it's all abuse. This book does not have this situation. Moreover, the author is very fond of attack and recipients doting on each other. Any misunderstandings will be solved directly, and he has a mouth! Moreover, the three views of this book are particularly enjoyable to read, and there are no mindless plots. The author's writing style is also very good. Although the author writes very sweetly, it will not make people feel tired or bored. This is a test of writing skills. Of course, whether you like it or not depends on personal preference. I really like this article, it is sweet but not greasy. I hope the author can open another quick-throwing book next time. Of course, it is not a quick-throwing book. I will continue to support the author! Finally, I really like this book. I have already re-read it. It is one of the few texts and authors that I like! Yue people song Spring and Autumn Period·Xia Ming This evening, what evening is coming? The boat is flowing in the middle of the river. What day will it be today? I will be in the same boat with the prince. Being humiliated and treated well, not ashamed My heart was troubled and unstoppable, and I learned about the prince. There are trees in the mountains, and the trees have branches. My heart is happy for you, but you don't know it.

Every couple is very sweet, and no one is in trouble, but they all have a happy ending. Although 333 does not have a strong sense of presence, it is really the most emotional system I have ever seen. It has become a good friend with its host [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

It's very nice, but I skipped the world of veteran stand-in attack. Mainly I like the synchronization of emotions. I don't like this kind of licking one by one with peace of mind. I don't like it even if I know that the next licking will have everything you need until the end. It feels like it's for the attack to help the poor, and he has to devote his feelings and resources, and it's a pleasure. I didn't like attacking at first, and my attitude was not good. Instead, I accepted the resources with peace of mind and felt that I deserved them. Therefore, this was the only world I skipped. The other worlds were all good. Even if they had a crush on each other at the beginning, they always liked each other, or they just fell in love with each other at first sight.

The novel is very interesting and novel. It is not the kind where a host constantly enters new worlds, but uses a system to connect different worlds. Each world has its own protagonist. However, the author may have made some world lines a bit long for unknown reasons. In fact, some worlds do not need to be so long, but overall it is still very interesting.

The matchmaker chased me, the writing is good and the content is great! This is my first time reading a story about one world and one host. It's great and interesting! Dear author, please update 10,000 words every day, thank you! (It is now 10.18 And 2:35 in the morning. I stayed up late to finish reading it)

333 Is so cute [admiration], and there is one very special thing that I have not seen in other novels, that is, the hosts in each world are different, and the cp is also very sweet. I like it very much (except for the fourth world, which seems to be the world that will die after three chapters. I can't explain why I don't like it, but I just don't like it inexplicably). I thought about it for a moment, maybe I don't like the fourth world because the author overwrote it too much? In the end, it was obviously the money I earned, but I saved a little and used it all to buy snacks for Shou. If he accidentally let it slip, he would be stared at. It's still weird that the difference between Shou's before and after characters is too big, but it's not overly weird, and I feel like he accepts Gong very calmly without doing anything for Gong. Later, when his parents showed up, he didn't hesitate to use the money he earned from selling magic weapons to buy them a lot of things. Even the things his parents thought were too expensive and they didn't want to buy them he didn't hesitate to buy to his parents. Although I don't think it's necessary to separate the money clearly when we are together, but this is a bit too much, right? Shou's mother even thought that it was lucky that Shou was her son and not Gong, otherwise Gong would have been beaten by her.

The attack and punishment in each unit are well matched, the main character is rich and special, and the ups and downs of the plot are very popular with me! Come on author! Be sure not to abandon the article! ! Urgent update! ! ! Up!(˘•ω•˘)ง

It looks good, I think he is a slow traveler, and it is also a small world, a type of host. Each world has at least 60 chapters, which is long, so it is not all about the protagonist's emotions. The background of the small world is also very complete. Except for a few typos, the overall story is pretty good [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [I learned it]

The author's book is very well written [like][like], I like it! ! I started to notice it from Dada's last book "The Boyfriend I Found Turned Out to Be the Lord God". I am a big fan of sweet articles and never care about sadistic articles. For those who like to quickly wear sweet articles, follow [Please follow] [Please follow] Dada. You can definitely [Like] [Like]. You can't go wrong. I recommend it, highly recommend it, and especially recommend it! (Say important things three times)

It's okay, each world has a different CP, and the length is quite long. I listened to the advice and skipped the second and third worlds (some readers may have commented that they are unclean). The first world is more beautiful and complete. Involving spoilers (to avoid lightning): There are many plot lines in the world of immortality, the emotional lines are sloppy, and the ending ends abruptly. The world of the CEO seems to be more feminine (the name, I liked skirts when I was a kid, my body and personality are weak, and the later setting is similar to the setting of the ancient heartthrob heroine, versatile and capable of everything), I don't like it very much, and after 50% of this world, it has nothing to do with the original plot, it is all about the industrial saccharine love between two people. The plot of the supernatural world is the main one, and the emotional line is about two people secretly falling in love with each other, entangled with each other, and about 70% directly confessing that the speed of light is certain (a bit of a bicycle). (Retired) The world of AO is that in the entertainment industry, people get married first and then fall in love with each other, so there will be barrage interactions and the like. In the last world (Zerg), the character of the attacker is very stubborn and slow_(:з∠)_I can explain it clearly in two sentences, eh ~ he just doesn't have a long mouth.

This can be regarded as the first time I have seen such a unique fast-traveling article. He is different from the ordinary ones. The person who time-travels is no longer a human being. The author really opened a door to a new world for me. I'm very grateful that the author didn't give up or make me miss this book. If you like reading fast, you can read it. It's really good. There is no deliberate attempt to change anything. Problems can only be discovered in the long run. The system is no longer a necessity and you can change it by yourself. Finally, I hope everyone can be the protagonist of their own world [blowing kiss]! !

Well, how should I put it? The writing is still as beautiful as ever!

Nice! I read the author's new book as soon as he opened it. It's very good.

I really like the first story, I like sweet pets! The hero dotes on his lover very much!

It's really beautiful. I especially like 333. I think it's so cute. [Shy] After reading it, I suddenly discovered that I've also finished reading another novel by the author. [Face covering] The author of Treasure Novel has paid attention to it. [Laughs]

A very nice book! This is the first time I read this kind of unit text, it feels very novel! [Laughs][Laughs] The author's writing style is also very good! Every pair is so sweet! Full of redemption! There are also quite a lot of cars [Aimu] [Aimu] 333 is even more adorable and very professional! If we can help, we 333 will definitely be there [Like][Like]

I have read almost every story in this unit, and most of the settings really impressed me. The protagonists get along very well, with some biases and some biases, and the emotional contribution is generally quite balanced. I didn't expect that my favorite would be the world of Taoist priests. Maybe because I didn't have high expectations when I first read the title, but it turned out to be surprisingly good-looking. This article is very innocent, and I was taught [shy] the first time. The disadvantage is that each unit is too long, and the end of Chapter 60 is somewhat weak.

I like it, I like it, I really like it very much. Not only do I like the works, I also like to be the author [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] I have read both of DaDa's books. I will publish a book in the future. Remember to kick me.

Except for one or two themes that I don't like, I [enjoy][enjoy][enjoy] all the other content. It's great! I love sweet novels

Mainly focus on unit articles, every CP is very sweet 1. Zheng Bingxuan and Qin Suizhu 2. Yan Zhiyi and Song Jingchuan 3. Shen Yutang and Yin Hezhou 4. Chiyang and Su Xianjun 5. Yan Lanxing and Bai Qingshang 6. Talk about knowledge and hope 7. Meng Zezhi and He Zhizhou 8. Xu Can and Fussard

Wow wow wow, it's so beautiful. Each small world is not only the perspective of the characters in the book, but also feels like a systematic memoir. The protagonists of each small world are different, and it is not very cliched. All the original male protagonists or female protagonists have character problems.

It's very interesting, the writing is very good, but too few people have read it and the ratings are not high enough. I like the first world the most, it's beautiful and beautiful. Personally, I think it would be nice if there were more worlds, and each world could be shorter. The last two worlds feel like they have too few highlights and cannot leave a deep impression after watching them. Of course this is just a personal suggestion, just my humble opinion, the article is still great!

The writing is very good, and it can be said that it is at the top of the tomato unit essay pyramid. The writing is gentle, the characters are fleshed out, and the ending is star-studded. Each pair of protagonists are very good people. Their lives may have been devastated, but they still have hope in their hearts. Everyone lives like light. On the whole, it seems to prove the saying: gentle people should also be treated with gentleness.

The overall story is very sweet, and there is no particularly sad world. The stories in each world are quite exciting, and each world is quite long. After confirming the relationship, there will be a long segment of the attack and the recipient wanting to get along. In fact, the next few worlds are a bit more clichéd, with slaps in the face and displays of affection, but overall it is good and worth watching [Blow Kiss]

Very good! ! ! There are no fancy words, but it allowed me to read a chapter without skipping, which in itself means that this article is very good! At least it's to my liking~ There's nothing I can't accept, the writing is also very good, the plot is quite attractive, every unit is interesting, and 333 is also very cute~ I like it [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's super good-looking, each story is independent, and System 333 runs throughout. Moreover, every story has a good ending, and the system is also very cute. In short, it is really beautiful. There are those from the Zerg tribe, those from the entertainment industry, and others.

It's very beautiful, the relationship is very smooth, and sometimes misunderstandings are resolved quickly. The key is that there is no main line, they are all small world unit stories, so you can skip the settings you don't like very much, and it will not affect your viewing.