Is the Kaleidoscope Useless? Then I Can Only Change My Job to Become an Immortal.

Dear readers, please give me a five-star review! Nearly 30 five-star reviews can't add 0.1 Points? This mechanism is really fascinating! It's not up to readers and friends to decide how many points you get!

Very passionate, I really like this kind of power-oriented literature

The writing is super exciting, super exciting, but I don't want to have a harem. This will affect the performance of the protagonist and be a burden. The protagonist cannot better display his own strength. If there is no harem, the protagonist will be invincible. There is no need to think so much.

Guys, please stop lowering the score. This book is non-toxic and does not have the shadow of Tiwat's madness or the yellow-haired Taoist priest. It has been raised high. Let everyone enjoy the book and be more good at urging people to come [smile] The trenching is getting more and more exciting! Bibo is burning

I like to see it, it looks good, I just want to see it, I am willing to see it Is this the author's first time writing? The characters are well described. I like reading it. It has the flavor of "Naruto's Scourge", promise us, don't finish it, and must stick to it. There are not many such delicate Naruto stories. Isn't it more comfortable to read with a brainless system? In addition, I saw a flesh-and-blood Uchiha who bowed his head when he was weak, took revenge when he was strong, had someone who cared about him, laughed for him, cried for him, was aloof, and walked alone, but truly lived in this world, for the sake of bondage, for the people in his heart, and his true temperament. This is the Uchiha in my heart. Come on, author!

The level is very top-notch. He writes the protagonist's emotions, story, viewpoints, and three views. He is a person who just wants to go home and works hard for it. Cheers, author.

The early stage is a bit mediocre, and the author's excessive pursuit of rationality leads to a lack of excitement. This may cause impatient readers to find it difficult to read. However, this is also one of the advantages of this book, and it is not unintentionally strengthened. The beginning of World War II is really exciting, especially the battles, which are full of visuals and excitement. Every battle is hearty. There is really no reason why this book is not popular. Gongdouwen, Quandouwen, harem article, and brainless cool article can all be popular. However, a serious writing about Naruto fandom cannot be popular. It is a pity... In the end: it is not enough to read, so there will be less comments and more words. There are many primary school students in Tomato, and fewer birds will lead to less being messed with. Why did it disappear so soon...

The writing is okay. Suggestion: In the follow-up plot, we will definitely have to face a lot of darkness in Konoha. I hope the author will never be a licker! Kill decisively! Don't be a holy mother! Stop talking and run away! [Think]

The author of this book not only has a good grasp of the plot, but also has a very good description of the characters. The protagonist is also a very individual person. From the previous description, I have always thought that the organization is a rational and aloof person, but until he was willing to speak for Lao Dai, even at the expense of disrupting his future plans, I saw that it was also true. He is a person who attaches great importance to love and justice, which makes the character of the protagonist closer to a living modern person. Moreover, this book is very close to the original work, without any magical modifications, which makes me feel comfortable reading the original work. The author analyzes and polishes each character from multiple aspects. This book can be regarded as a masterpiece among Naruto fan fiction.

It's nice to read, it's a good book, but Susanoo should only be able to use the half-body form during the Mangekyou period. Your full-body form is a bit exaggerated, but overall it's okay.

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The plot is very innovative and well-written, especially the various new techniques and new immortal spells, but there are also some minor flaws. I was also an author before, and I have written a little bit and made some small suggestions, which can give full play to the innovative plot aspect. After reading it, I found the plot and fighting more attractive. I think it's a little bit abrupt, that is, the protagonist's innovation of immortal magic is not paved enough. It was introduced by others, which makes the protagonist a bit not very smart. There is no implicit indication. After all, the method of absorbing pupil power covers up the new immortal magic. It would be better if there are some foreshadowings. There is also the fact that the protagonist does not have too much training, and some of his strengths increase too quickly and too much. It is a small flaw, but overall it is good. There are also supporting characters. There is no use in highlighting some supporting characters, and they are not used to introduce some things related to the protagonist. Some of the more powerful people in the original work are not shown in words, such as the appearance of Senju Hashirama. Although it was described before, it still feels a bit strange after he appears. That's all I can see, come on, I hope I can finish it

You should update it faster. The timeline is stretched and the word count is 70k. I feel that there are few books as good as this one. Don't talk about reasonable and unreasonable settings. The main thing is that the protagonist is like this. This character is fierce and has no ink at all. If you can't go to Douluo to bully Tang San, the word count should be longer, the protagonist setting is too likable.

It's a good Naruto novel. The only flaw is that Jiraiya's portrayal is not good, and there is no sense of heroism. Jiraiya is not strong enough about the ownership of Mt. Myoboku. In the anime, Jiraiya died for Konoha. The protagonist stole the spring water from Mt. Myouki. Jiraiya would only ask. After the protagonist's strength failed, Jiraiya would only be relieved and helpless, instead of holding a grudge against the protagonist. For Jiraiya, "Tsunade", "disciples" and "the village" are everything to him, not Mount Myoboku. Jiraiya is more responsible and grateful to Mount Myoboku.

The content is still very good, and there are many plots that give people a unique flavor. How to say it? The author will continue to work hard and strive to write better and more works, so that we readers will have better books to read. Fortunately, others have been injured. I hope you can work hard and make progress every day.

Yes, this book is considered a good Naruto story, because he is the story before the plot begins, and he is in the same class as Namikaze Minato. It is not written according to the plot of the anime, and it will not make people feel too boring with the plot. Moreover, the protagonist is talented and uses his brain to become stronger. The emotions are also written very delicately. In particular, the previous protagonist thought that since he had traveled back in time and fantasized about becoming stronger, and Naruto's parents were dead, he longed for power even more, and then strengthened his will to become stronger during the exchange with Matt Dai, and after three years of training, he learned that the medicated bath formula given by Matt Dai would deplete the body's potential, overdraw the body, and may not be able to continue to become stronger in the future. The plot is also well written. The emotions are well written. It's just that the title of Zhutian is a bit... When I looked at the table of contents later, it looked like Pirates. Moreover, this book has no system, nothing, only mental strength is better. I also knew a lot of secrets, and then they disappeared. The main reason is that I've been reading a lot of Invincible Cool articles lately, and I can't stand this one. Save it for later. .

I heard that the author wants to arrest people who don't give five-star reviews (this book is very well written, and it is one of the few good Naruto works. I like this book very much. I personally tested it, so feel free to eat it, add it to your bookshelf, and feel free to give it a five-star review) By the way, I am an office worker and I have always listened to books. The reading time is only four hours, but I listen to books for a whole day.

After listening to this book, I think it's okay. It's better than most books written by Naruto fans. It doesn't have the feeling of a direct collapse in combat power. The heroine can be counted as four Uchiha Mikoto, Uzumaki Kushina, Konan, and Otsutsuki Kaguya. Tsunade can be considered half. I think the character of the protagonist is very good. If not, the Holy Mother should be killed.

Overall, this book is considered a masterpiece among Naruto fans. I have read about a hundred chapters so far. I was attracted by the setting of this book. You need to cultivate immortality, but the transition period is a bit long. It takes about a hundred chapters to start cultivating immortality. Impatient readers may not be able to stand it. The early stage is okay, not too verbose, he is a real genius, he is really decisive in killing, and he is the sixth one. Moreover, the author is very active in the comment area, respects the opinions of readers, and does not engage in content that is too outrageous. The pace is quite fast, the writing is okay, and the combat power is not compromised. The protagonist is betrothed by three women. I think it can be read even if you don't read harem stories. There isn't much emphasis on the heroine. I hope future episodes can maintain this quality.

It's very good. I can only write it if I know Naruto very well, but it can't be perfect. I think the current plot is a new breakthrough, but for avid Naruto fans, it will feel unrealistic.

Yes, it is a breath of fresh air among Naruto fandoms! It's not easy for this author. The ratings finally came up. I remember the rating was around six o'clock at the beginning. It's so miserable [face covering]

I read this book in one sitting. To be honest, I felt a little bored in the middle section. But I finally finished reading it, and I felt that the setting of the entire book was quite good. I think one thing he does better than some other Naruto stories is that he doesn't end in a mindless way. The writing is still very good. I hope the author will publish some new books soon. [Learned]

From my point of view, this book is still well written. In particular, he killed thousands of people in Konoha and forcibly appointed Minato as the fourth generation. Later, Minato was passed to Naoki. Naoki and Minato's shouts of "Big Brother" were not in vain. Kill Fugaku and lead Uchiha to break away from Uchiha and become a new Uchiha. Killing Shisui later and wiping out Erwuzi are both very eye-catching.

This kind of fan fiction with new characters drawn from the Uchiha clan has always been in line with my taste. They kill decisively, the protagonist works hard, the story timeline and background are pretty good, and there are no problems with the characters corresponding to the timeline. I am very happy to see it now, 5⭐

A very good Naruto novel. Although some parts are not handled very well, overall it is still very good, but it is a bit too short.

It's quite good to watch. Except for the inexplicable part about the Chuunin Exam, which is different from the previous ones and the protagonist's character suddenly changes, everything else is pretty good. I really, really like the part about the invasion of pirates.

The writing is still very good. Except for Sister Juan and a few other good books, they can be ranked in the top 20 in my opinion.

Compared to most Naruto fan fiction, the connection between writing and plot is already very good, and I hope it can be maintained.

Yes, the feelings of the main protagonist are very real. Unlike other protagonists who forget about another world after traveling through time, this protagonist's homesickness is very real.

There are almost no poisonous points in this book. It has its own opinions. The protagonist's style is a bit like Chen Xun, who has carved out his own path. He is never invincible, there will be times when he is on the verge of death, and the world view is very grand, basically including everything that Naruto has at the moment. The character description is very good! The protagonist's character has always been as he pleases. The creativity is also very good, and there are various good eye skills. The combat power is a bit weak, but it's not bad.