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Super pretty but so little

Let the author change the cp for the heroine [crying][crying][crying]

Nice to read, this is Tomato's first Douluo fanfic, right? It's so damn good-looking [Blow kiss] I hope the author doesn't stop updating [Adoration]

This is my first review and I gave it five stars because I appreciate people like Song Jue who work hard, but I still want to say it. Author, please take a look at the comment area. So many people hope that Song can change CP, including myself. Song Hexue seems to be really inappropriate now, so let's change it to Song Heyan. It's a lot easier. This setting really makes me happy. People don't have a good impression of Song Hexue's CP. I can only say that if there are no very good changes, the final ending will still be the same... Then I can only give one star to Qiwen... I rarely give so many comments to a book, but I really can't bear to see a Dou Luo fan with a good plot ruined by the protagonist's emotional line. Author, please listen to our advice and change Song's CP to Yan, and also change the introduction, otherwise it will be easy for people to misunderstand. If you really change it, I will pursue this book to the end no matter how many chapters there are, and I will do what I say.

I think otherwise there is still no cp, or cp is changed. If they are really together, won't the protagonist think of Xue Shebao, who is almost the enemy of his father's murder? Is this really good? Maybe I only watched it for a short time, but I also used another account to watch it If I don't find a suitable change later, I will probably lower the rating.

Ah ? 3 Updates a day 6 I really like it ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

The writing is very good. Let me tell you why I gave it four stars. That's because Douluo is the weakest book among fantasy novels. The protagonist, who is in the early stage of practicing virtual reality, actually met someone who was more powerful than him in his previous life in Chapter 33. I think it is completely possible to adjust the protagonist to a golden elixir or a transformed god. You must know that transformed gods can already move mountains and seas. One more thing to add. We can't make do with his CP, so we shouldn't make do with it and just replace him. The more we look at it, the more awkward it becomes. This is my review from chapter 50 onward. I haven't read it since chapter 50, so I say I don't know. If anyone replies to me after chapter 50, don't reply.

I want Song to be with the Saint, please.

It looks good, but I hope the final ending is that Yan and Song are together

Very good, I suggest changing to a female protagonist, or it would be better if there is no CP at all

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It's really beautiful [admiration] [admiration] but I feel so bad for the heroine [almost crying] [crying] Big! I want Yan and Jue to be together! Don't force me to write three thousand blood books, kneel down and beg you [I'm about to cry][cry]

What will happen to Lan Wangxi? Will she disappear? [Crying] cp because it can't be Song Helan

Good book, why is it gone?

The author really doesn't consider changing the cp to a saint [I'm about to cry]

It's hard not to love Douluo's fanfics. There are so few fanfics [crying][crying]

This book is very nice

Very good-looking, it's Song Yu and who is the CP [what] [laughing evilly]

It's beautiful. I love it so much [love]. I'd rather see more love lines [learned] hhhhhhhh

Come on, come on, come on!

Really good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I want Yan'er and Song Yu [Thinking]

It's a bit uncomfortable, why not he? It feels a bit cruel from the back! I feel like I can't let go, I can't love you

Tomato actually has such a beautiful book [Admiration]

The author is big, come on, come on, come on, come on [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

Vocal, it's simply not that good-looking

It's very beautiful and has its own worldview.

It's very interesting to watch, and the relationship between Xue and Song is also very exciting. Good luck to the author.