My Little Pony: Beyond the Bounds of Order

I really like it, it's the second best My Little Pony tweet I've found besides Sen Yu [Adoration]

It's very good. This is the best book I've read besides Senyu's book.

Hey friend, keep writing, your book will definitely beat Tomato's My Little Pony in terms of quality, and it will be in the top five on the entire internet! Besides! My Little Pony is a niche game, so don't abandon it because of data issues. After all, 50 pony gangs out of a thousand people, 50% of them have hidden merit and fame, and 23% of them have gained weight. In the end, I didn't see many comments after reading it. So be sure not to abandon it. I regard your book as a 15-year-old bookworm and a pony fan. It is definitely a top-notch wine in the pony circle.

If there is no long review, I will be the first one. First of all, in terms of plot, it is mostly plot-oriented rather than daily-oriented. This is conducive to continuous reading. If there are too many daily-oriented plots, it will lead to boredom. I will criticize the next door, "Pony in Destiny" by name, but I will not say that it is bad. I just feel that the book is a bit boring recently. I will comment there later. In terms of characterization, the protagonist is shaped into a rather witty OB player. He is the kind of character who wants to watch a show, but when he sees a deviation from the original plot, he must intervene. At the same time, as a sixth child, Candice has no temper, which is true. I like this. After all, who doesn't like a cheap protagonist, but my own idea is... Um... I want to use more knives |ω) I hope that when I write about Starlight Glimmer later, I will add Miss. After all, I have read so many Pony fanfics, and no one dares to add Miss. (Of course, those who have read Pony must have read the Missing fan animation.) It's okay to occasionally go lyrical. In Anne, it can be used a little bit, such as homesickness, or why did the conflict between the two countries occur? So far, I should give the actual overall rating 3.5, But giving it a five-point rating is a sign of respect. I hope the author can maintain the efficiency of updating once a day, come on!

The author... Didn't he say one chapter with five stars? [Thinking][thinking] Let me tell you a story My hometown is in a rural area and I have a donkey. This donkey is very talented and very good at grinding. He is very creative and the noodles he grinds are loved by everyone in the village. Even wealthy people from countless big cities come here to buy the noodles it grinds. This donkey has extraordinary intelligence and works hard every 8 days. He has been working hard and grinding countless high-quality flours. Among them, the highest quality flour even won the world-class "Best Flour" award. All of us love this donkey, he is our divine donkey. But now he is slacking off and no longer grinding dough. We try to coax it and give it delicious food, hoping that it will continue to grind flour. But he was unwilling to continue working. It said, "It's tired and wants to take a rest." As a result, it was dragged to the entrance of the village by the village chief and the villagers who were angry because they couldn't eat high-quality flour. They killed it and made it into donkey meat and burned it. By the way, when are you going to

It's so good, this is my favorite besides Senyu! [Laughs] I like the heroine's character very much, the plot is also very good, and the characters' personalities are also true to the plot. It's just that the update is too slow, I can't get enough [crying]. I hope the author will update more and more. Come on, author!

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This book reminds me of the whimsical thoughts I had reading it when I was a child, but I was still young at the time, so I wasn't exposed to them. Your work is very good and the characters are very fleshed out. I will always support you.

It's super good. I love the author so much. I read 70 chapters in one night, and the characters just want to be messed up. If the author sees this comment, he should hurry up and type. I can't wait. Today I am here to review From the character point of view, I feel very good about myself. Yue Ran gives me the impression that she is the image of a funny girl, and she has the kind of thinking of modern young people who can be put off and never move. The author is very considerate in sending pictures. In addition to Yue Ran, other characters are also described in great detail. In addition to the original characters in My Little Pony, the author has also added many other protagonists. Although they seem to be many, the novel does not make people forget who they are, as if every chapter is related. In terms of plot, the author is also very thoughtful. Unlike some fan fiction that almost completely changes and cuts out the plot of the original film (there is no author of Yin and Yang), the author writes the development of the plot in detail, starting and ending, so that people will not be confused about what each chapter is about. The author is also working hard to innovate new plots. The author is also trying his best to improve. Many fanfics simply cannot attract me. In the past, I would not read Tomato once a month or two. After reading this novel, I wanted the author to update it as soon as possible tomorrow. Now I have calmly accepted the author's decision not to update. If you don't agree or think something is wrong, you can also go to the author. The author is very gentle, and I hope everyone can be merciful. Moreover, the author is really the best in the universe! ! ! I admit that this is the best author I know (of course it doesn't mean that I don't like other authors, it's just that this author is my number one [love]) The final hope is that Dudu will be happy, happy, safe and healthy every day! ! ! @ Duian Dudu, I love you forever

This book is the most exciting one I have read in My Little Pony of the Forest. It is great.