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I really like it, it's the second best My Little Pony tweet I've found besides Sen Yu [Adoration]

It's very good. This is the best book I've read besides Senyu's book.

Hey friend, keep writing, your book will definitely beat Tomato's My Little Pony in terms of quality, and it will be in the top five on the entire internet! Besides! My Little Pony is a niche game, so don't abandon it because of data issues. After all, 50 pony gangs out of a thousand people, 50% of them have hidden merit and fame, and 23% of them have gained weight. In the end, I didn't see many comments after reading it. So be sure not to abandon it. I regard your book as a 15-year-old bookworm and a pony fan. It is definitely a top-notch wine in the pony circle.

If there is no long review, I will be the first one. First of all, in terms of plot, it is mostly plot-oriented rather than daily-oriented. This is conducive to continuous reading. If there are too many daily-oriented plots, it will lead to boredom. I will criticize the next door, "Pony in Destiny" by name, but I will not say that it is bad. I just feel that the book is a bit boring recently. I will comment there later. In terms of characterization, the protagonist is shaped into a rather witty OB player. He is the kind of character who wants to watch a show, but when he sees a deviation from the original plot, he must intervene. At the same time, as a sixth child, Candice has no temper, which is true. I like this. After all, who doesn't like a cheap protagonist, but my own idea is... Um... I want to use more knives |ω) I hope that when I write about Starlight Glimmer later, I will add Miss. After all, I have read so many Pony fanfics, and no one dares to add Miss. (Of course, those who have read Pony must have read the Missing fan animation.) It's okay to occasionally go lyrical. In Anne, it can be used a little bit, such as homesickness, or why did the conflict between the two countries occur? So far, I should give the actual overall rating 3.5, But giving it a five-point rating is a sign of respect. I hope the author can maintain the efficiency of updating once a day, come on!

The author... Didn't he say one chapter with five stars? [Thinking][thinking] Let me tell you a story My hometown is in a rural area and I have a donkey. This donkey is very talented and very good at grinding. He is very creative and the noodles he grinds are loved by everyone in the village. Even wealthy people from countless big cities come here to buy the noodles it grinds. This donkey has extraordinary intelligence and works hard every 8 days. He has been working hard and grinding countless high-quality flours. Among them, the highest quality flour even won the world-class "Best Flour" award. All of us love this donkey, he is our divine donkey. But now he is slacking off and no longer grinding dough. We try to coax it and give it delicious food, hoping that it will continue to grind flour. But he was unwilling to continue working. It said, "It's tired and wants to take a rest." As a result, it was dragged to the entrance of the village by the village chief and the villagers who were angry because they couldn't eat high-quality flour. They killed it and made it into donkey meat and burned it. By the way, when are you going to

It's so good, this is my favorite besides Senyu! [Laughs] I like the heroine's character very much, the plot is also very good, and the characters' personalities are also true to the plot. It's just that the update is too slow, I can't get enough [crying]. I hope the author will update more and more. Come on, author!

This book reminds me of the whimsical thoughts I had reading it when I was a child, but I was still young at the time, so I wasn't exposed to them. Your work is very good and the characters are very fleshed out. I will always support you.

，，Np，Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

This book is the most exciting one I have read in My Little Pony of the Forest. It is great.

It's super good. I love the author so much. I read 70 chapters in one night, and the characters just want to be messed up. If the author sees this comment, he should hurry up and type. I can't wait. Today I am here to review From the character point of view, I feel very good about myself. Yue Ran gives me the impression that she is the image of a funny girl, and she has the kind of thinking of modern young people who can be put off and never move. The author is very considerate in sending pictures. In addition to Yue Ran, other characters are also described in great detail. In addition to the original characters in My Little Pony, the author has also added many other protagonists. Although they seem to be many, the novel does not make people forget who they are, as if every chapter is related. In terms of plot, the author is also very thoughtful. Unlike some fan fiction that almost completely changes and cuts out the plot of the original film (there is no author of Yin and Yang), the author writes the development of the plot in detail, starting and ending, so that people will not be confused about what each chapter is about. The author is also working hard to innovate new plots. The author is also trying his best to improve. Many fanfics simply cannot attract me. In the past, I would not read Tomato once a month or two. After reading this novel, I wanted the author to update it as soon as possible tomorrow. Now I have calmly accepted the author's decision not to update. If you don't agree or think something is wrong, you can also go to the author. The author is very gentle, and I hope everyone can be merciful. Moreover, the author is really the best in the universe! ! ! I admit that this is the best author I know (of course it doesn't mean that I don't like other authors, it's just that this author is my number one [love]) The final hope is that Dudu will be happy, happy, safe and healthy every day! ! ! @ Duian Dudu, I love you forever

You look so good to me, I love you [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][love]

Come on, you will definitely become popular in the future

I won't praise you, I think this is the most beautiful among the pony fics, haha, let me watch them all

The key to Yue Ran's beauty is that the author provided pictures [laughing]

Super super super super super super super super super super super super super super nice. Many articles just describe their appearance. I can't even imagine what they look like. Someone actually designed this picture.

It's super nice. The author should update it soon! ! ! (＞д＜) (The plot is very coherent, and the heroine's character is also super lovable. It's really good to watch, but it's a little lacking.)

The horizontal section of this book is slightly swaying up and down in the middle of the hay. It is not very good, but it is very satisfying. Five stars is considered an encouragement. There are really very few original pony fans from Tomato. I hope the author will continue to persevere and not imitate pigeons_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

Absolutely amazing, really beautiful [Adoration]

Absolutely amazing, just a little worse than Senyu [Admiration] [Admiration]

It's very interesting. I hope the author will write more and don't want to finish it so quickly [laughs]

It looks good, good luck to the author ୧(๑•̀◡•́๑)૭ I'm here to write a long review! First of all, from the perspective of the entire book, the author has his own innovative elements. These self-created characters add a lot of color to the book. Each one is lively and interesting, and does not make people feel boring. Then some jokes are incorporated into the article (I really liked reading it, Now I like ٩(๑^o^๑)۶) more. The character design is not too bad, and it does not copy the original plot like some authors, which makes people unable to stand it. The language of the article is also humorous and humorous, not rigid and dry; Secondly, from a character perspective, my impression of Yue Ran is that of a six-year-old who likes to mess around, has a high talent for magic, is a sunny and cheerful girl, is humorous and cute, is not particularly invincible but is a semi-grown-up protagonist who is quite invincible. Oh, by the way, he also needs good looks and magic. There is magic, a brain, a voice and good looks, magic. In short, I like Yue Ran very much; as for the supporting roles, I really like to watch the plot of Crow Feather and Lin, two enemies who dislike each other but are forced to stay together. It is really fun (not a knock) cp); Xiaobai is also pretty cool, especially after he can speak; Again, I really look forward to the author writing the plot of Equestria in the future. After all, I haven't seen many authors write it; Finally, please allow me to praise you: Dear author, how did your article pass through the barrier of skin and mucous membranes, survive the phagocytosis of lysozyme in secretions and macrophages, and escape the antibodies secreted by plasma cells or lymphokines secreted by sensitized T cells, and live in my heart? (This is my first time writing a long review. I am inexperienced. I have tried my best. It took me a long time to write it. I kept revising and revising it before writing this thing. I even went to re-write it. If you don't like it, please don't criticize me.)

Rumor has it that the author went to military training and won't be back until October.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good. More updates from the author! Don't stop updating!

The author writes very interestingly and updates chapters frequently. He is the author of my dreams.

I personally think this book is very interesting and I like it very much. Although I don't know what others think, I think the author is a little slow in updating. One update a day is not enough to read. But it's okay. I really like the plot.

It's super good. This is the third best book I've read about My Little Pony. To fulfill the author's wish, I saw that the author added an update to each long review, and then I came over to read it, but I never expected that there were only two, so let me add one more! ! ! ，！ ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! More updates! An update must be added. If not, then I will... I'll gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw gnaw, if you don't do it more, then I'll gnaw your ass. It's so beautiful! ! ! (Dark crawling) (Distortion) (Facial distortion) (Crazy shouting) (Becomes a monkey because of excitement) (Dangerous tree vine) (Falls down) (Laughs at other monkeys) (Angry) (Mutation) (Jumps into the sea of Japan) (Evolves into Godzilla) (Drills through the author's neck on the screen) (In the author's ear, gently say, if you don't update, then I will kill you) Why does such a beautiful book only have a rating of seven points? I'm really broken! Why? Why! I absolutely love this book! Dear author, please feel my deep love for this book and for you.

Come on, author! ! Go, go, go! Good looking! ! Update soon! ! Yue Dye rushes! Xiaobai, rush, rush!

It's really beautiful, I still have more to say 💗

Very nice and highly recommended

The author's writing is very nice but a little lacking.