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The book is quite good, but I wonder why so few people read it? To be honest, this is the best Pokémon novel I have ever read with a female protagonist. Come on, author, I hope you don't become a eunuch.

It's very interesting. Although it's not the kind of article about the native world of elves that I prefer, I still like the bond between the heroine and the elves. No matter how many elf fanfics I read, I still prefer novels that focus on the bond between elves and describe the interaction between trainers and elves, rather than novels that use elves as tools to write urban upgrades or all kinds of disgusting system stories. I am looking forward to the growth of the heroine and the elves in the future. Good luck to the author!

It's really good, the logic is online, except for the immutable stone in the middle, which is a bit difficult to follow, but I made it up later. The article is very good. It is rare to have a Pokémon article with a female character as the protagonist. The interaction with the elf is very delicate. I am really looking forward to the possibility of a gorgeous celebration in the future. However, the article seems to be insufficiently promoted. In fact, I personally feel that the title of the novel does not convey the point. If it were not for the Pokémon on the cover, I would not even know that this is a fanfic. It is just a small suggestion.

Come on! A bookworm who has been a bookworm for many years said that as long as it is completed according to the plan, the writing stability will never be bad. The score is expected to reach around 9.6-9.8. However, if it is not fat enough at present, the reading score will increase slowly. So please hold on tight.

It's really good. Come and see it! Although it is a Pokémon novel, it is based on the Chinese model, and the details are perfect, and the elf social content is great! I really like how the heroine gets along with the little cat monsters and other elves. They are so cute and soft-hearted. The heroine is also very smart and witty, and has excellent performance, without many of the problems of the protagonist. The author's writing style describes some details very vividly and interestingly, making people smile knowingly, and the rhythm is very appropriate and the writing is logical and smooth. The only thing is that I personally don't like novels with too many plots. I was really sad when there was a big conspiracy at the beginning, but the author wrote it so well that I kept reading, but the word count is a bit short. I'm curious. Is this a small-sized vest worn by the author? Is this really your first novel? If this is the first book, it is great. The content, plot and structure of the article are all very well controlled. The writing style is the best I have seen among the Pokémon articles on Tomato Girl. If you are a small account, can you recommend your other books to me? [Crying] There is really a literary shortage recently, otherwise I would not come to Tomato. I have never read any articles on this platform [face covering] But it is not easy to find a good book on Tomato [Working on manuscript] It is understandable that the author wants to write a story that is not smooth sailing, but for the protagonist, the pressure is too great. Xiao Zhui has already experienced three crises not long after coming to this world, and is about to face a fourth bigger crisis. These crises are all related to the world, and her own strength does not match these crises. Every escape is difficult. The fragmented world allows her to earn fame points and solve crises, which means that she has to work hard to make herself known to everyone in the real world, and at the same time, she has to rely on her small body to block crises in the dark. Even though her heart has matured into an adult, her spirit in her previous life was not good. She was just an ordinary person. It is too difficult to face such a big conspiracy now. Moreover, the crises are non-stop one after another, and she has no time to rest at all [almost crying] I hope the author can lengthen the schedule a little to reduce the pressure on Xiao Chai. It is too difficult for a 13-year-old child to block the plan step by step. Only by matching pressure with strength can it be transformed into motivation and make the story more exciting [full]

I have never watched an episode of the Pokémon anime, and I know nothing about this anime except for the Pikachu designs found in stationery stores on the streets, but! The amazing thing is that because the author's writing is really clear and interesting, I felt no sense of disobedience when reading this article. It was a great reading experience. On the one hand, I was amazed by the magic of the elf world, and on the other hand, I was moved by the friendship, training and learning between Xiao Zhui, the elves and their friends. Many of the highlight chapters in this article are very vivid and can arouse my emotions and associations like watching anime scenes.

It looks good and well written, but the content puts too much emphasis on the heroine. Almost all incidents are solved by the heroine alone, and other characters have no role. Every time something happens to Ji Zhui, her family is definitely the saddest and helpless. I hope the author will get better and better.

Damn, the title of the book has put you off [face covering]. The writing is very good, but the title of the book does not match the content. If I wasn't bored, I wouldn't have opened this book. It was the title of the book that put me off at first.

To be honest, when I read the title of this book before, I thought it was about selling seafood in the Pokémon world.

This book has been on my bookshelf for a long time, but I have only read the first volume when I posted this review today. In the early stages of reading this book, it always gave me the illusion that it was not like reading a Pokémon novel, which made it difficult for me to read this novel (this may also be due to the difference in the imagination of the Pokémon world between me and the author). But after I saw the subsequent plot, I felt that the entire novel was very interesting, and I felt that the author had perfectly created a Pokémon world. Looking forward to the author's next chapters (I've been short of books recently, and I can only read more than fifty chapters. I hope the author will be faster)

Come on! It looks great. I hope there is no cp [blowing kiss]

It's really great. Come on, don't stop updating [crying]. I'm really looking forward to the return of the little kitty monster. I can't wait to jump directly to that chapter. I'm also looking forward to winning the championship. The writing is really great, it is the ceiling of female Pokémon in my heart [Sending Hearts][Love], I just ask you not to stop updating, and don't delete too many outlines and make it unfinished. This is my lifelong wish [Blowing Kiss][Sending Hearts] Please, come on [Love]

The author is great, this is the best book I have ever read. The characters are very vivid and vivid, and the plot is also very interesting. It's not enough to watch! Big cheers to the author. Please update!!!!

The arrival of elves in the city has been here for hundreds of years, and the construction of a new system has been completed The specific plot is quite different from other elf city novels. When you read it, you won't feel like you've seen it countless times. At the beginning, the game did not follow the usual routine of going to school and playing games, nor was it a live broadcast of popular science. Instead, it promoted the plot by encountering villain organizations and solving problems again and again. Judging from the protagonist's plan, he should run to participate in the gorgeous competition for a period of time in the later stage. It's very good. The authors who write about the gorgeous competition are all treasures👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 (There are too many gyms [smile] The protagonist first appeared when he was 12 years old, and he seems to be around 15 now. He has been on leave for a long time and has not gone to school. The few peers he has come into contact with do not have a crush on the protagonist. This is an authentic novel with no male protagonist and no ambiguity, no cp for the female protagonist [Blow Kiss] The protagonist currently has two pets, the little cat monster and the kung fu ferret, which are also relatively rare fan fiction elves. Similarly, the two pets only have a close relationship with the protagonist as a family member, and there is no such thing as the elf secretly falling in love with the trainer. The pace is slow, and the daily writing is quite detailed. It is so detailed that I find it a bit boring, and it is easy to quickly skip ten lines at a glance. The protagonist has to be involved in various incidents caused by villains because of the tasks issued by the system. He lacks subjective initiative and feels like he is being pushed around. He lacks a sense of satisfaction and cannot be fired up. Although the system tasks were explained later, the feeling of being arranged was still too strong. Of course, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. This shortcoming is not a bad point at all, so it is still praised [Learned]

It's really good-looking and can be used as a brain teaser. (Although the bonding agreement at the beginning of Pussycat is quite awkward) The character setting is very good, and the plot direction also has its own rhythm. There is no carrot or pitfall that the protagonist only relies on Goldfinger or there are all kinds of mythical beasts. There are few female fans in Pokémon fan fiction who write so well! I'm looking forward to the author's follow-up story. It's just that only one chapter has been added in the past five or six days. It's really not enough. I read hundreds of chapters in two days over the weekend. Woohoo.

I really like this book, thank you so much for the author I really like this book. The author must stick to it.

It is a modern + Pokémon world type. The interaction between the protagonist and Pokémon is very good, and it feels like everyone is shining. As the author's first article, this level is quite good (thumbs up. Jpg). It is a very nice Pokémon article. Although it has no cp, doesn't that mean I can just write about it casually? And the Pokémon's culture is the most important! ! ! (Be confident and confident. Jpg Recommended for those who like Pokémon, as well as those who like beast-controlling stories. I look forward to the author's return after taking the postgraduate entrance examination, and wish Wu a prosperous future!

The full text has been updated. The subject matter is very novel. There are too few Pokémon heroine novels. The personalities of various Pokémon are also clearly distinguished. The plot is also very ups and downs. The few may be the description of the battle between elves. It feels very abrupt and it ends. I highly recommend this article. I hope there can be more descriptions of the layers of combat power and battle content, moves, and actions. I wish the author a great success in the postgraduate entrance examination!

Looks good, come on!

It's really beautiful, no exaggeration, I want to see the author Riwan within three days! (Author, you will satisfy me)😋 Otherwise I will make a scene! 😈 Yeeeeeeeees, after raising it for so many days, I finished watching K Island in one go. Come on, adults!

It's broken, please, madam, please don't jail me! My first tomato review is for you. I like this novel very much, it is very delicate, although I have crossed it 7.8 Times. As soon as I saw it, I loved it and cried!

To be honest, I haven't finished reading it when I commented, so far, but I really think this book is very good [like][like][like][like][like][like], it's very good and very read. I include the author's description of the world view and the characterization of the characters that I have read so far, as well as the light and dark lines, which are all my favorite types. ⊙ω⊙, And I think the heroine's character is not coy, she is more likable to me. To be honest, I have just caught up with this book, but I really like it. I really hope that the author can keep following it. The author should work hard [please update] [salute] [salute] [salute] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] Really, I don't quite understand why this book shouldn't be rated so low

Come on! It's hard to find a female Pokémon fan that doesn't have Mary Sue. The kitten and the weasel are so cute! Come on, this story is really exciting and interesting! (Forgive me for my lack of words, the capitalization is really great)

Unless someone thinks it's too childish, this is a non-toxic article. Come on, author, as long as there are no major problems with interruptions/quality decline, I will definitely finish it.

It's the first time I've seen a Pokémon story set like this, and it's really great. The fighting process, growth settings, adventure settings, etc. Are all very interesting and sophisticated! I like the heroine Ji Zhui. She never abandons or gives up and always moves forward. It's incredible to see such good Pokémon fan fiction in 2024! I hope you can add another chapter, please

Nice! ! ! It's just that the time between the dungeons and the dungeons is too close, and the daily life is a bit sparse. It feels a bit like seeing through the cyberspace. The protagonist is so tired, and I feel the same tiredness.

It's so good. I've been looking for a long time before I found a book that suits my needs. Not only is the author's writing very good, but the plot is also very reasonable. It's not invincible, it's reasonable to become stronger, the ability is not too invincible, and the foreshadowing is well laid out.

Very well written, I like it very much

The way Xiao Zhuijia rides Toto must be very chic, like a girl chasing the wind

Come on, come on, it's so beautiful! ! I will update more and hope there will be no male protagonist ^-^!