Start as a Mysterious Businessman

The material is very good, but not killing people is a bit discouraging.

To be honest, I think it's average, but the five elements encourage me! [Love] I feel that the protagonist is not very mysterious and talks too much in the early stage. He is a mysterious businessman but established a sect. A bit holy but acceptable. The article is good, but it gives me a feeling that it's all cool but not really cool. I suggest the protagonist be more cool in the later stage [Love] This novel covers almost all the routines of cultivating immortals, and there are many funny moments, which is good. The protagonist develops a bit quickly, and there is no sense of reward after reading it. There is also a little bit of a running account feeling. . . [Crying] (No harm intended, watch with caution) [cry][cry][cry]

Practice novels, you have to read them!

It's good. I hope I can work hard to update it. I don't like to keep up with updates. I feel annoyed just reading a few chapters after updating, so I still plan to find the next one to read. But it's well written and I like it very much.

Not many people have commented on it, so I'd better give it five stars. I think it's quite in line with the common sense of a time traveler.

The content is good, but I want the protagonist to always wear black clothes