I Run a Farm in Afghanistan

After reading the previous thirty-four chapters, I honestly didn't see the theme! From the very beginning, it focuses on describing the protagonist's grandmother's family, and the endless memories there are like keeping a running account! After reminiscing about grandma and grandpa, I wrote about uncles, aunts, and cousins ​​again! After dozens of chapters, I couldn't see anything related to the title of the book, and I lost interest in reading it!

It's either memories or worldliness and the harem! Speechless, goodbye author! Nothing farm or ranch at all! Selling dog meat for sale!

The beauty has already run away, why are you still writing this thing to remind the shepherd dog?

What the hell did he write? After reading dozens of chapters, I have no idea what the author is writing about.

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that it has nothing to do with Afghanistan. The title of the book has nothing to do with its content.

What first person pronoun is used? Just look at the results yourself. Only one person in ten thousand people is willing to look at it. If it were in the third person, it would definitely not be this result! I suggest you revise the manuscript and repost it. Some authors just change the title of a book and publish it several times. If you get used to writing and revise every time before publishing, the first person is really not popular and no one can do it!

Really, the more I read, the more I feel speechless. A person who took the driver's license test wrote almost thirty chapters. From the beginning of chapter twenty-eight to the sixty-eightth chapter I am currently reading, I have only finished subject two. It is really a detailed description. Is this writing a driving tutorial? , I failed Subject 2 and shamelessly wrote almost ten chapters, it's amazing 👍 I specifically checked how many chapters to get to get a driver's license. Chapters 28 to 84, the author is paying you back.

The donkey's lips are not what the horse's mouth is. I don't even know what it's about, and I didn't get to the topic until almost 100 chapters later.

It's too long-winded. It takes more than a hundred chapters to get to the main topic. The previous part is all nonsense. Slipping away... The more I look at it, the more speechless I become

? ? What does this have to do with the title of the book?

Ness! ! !

Memoirs, named after you

What's the title of the book?

The forward swing is a bit too long

Gaga water character,

How many chapters have you read? Is this an online article? ? ? ? It's almost like a composition. The writing style is good, but it's too elegant to appreciate. When I read this, I felt like I was reading a text.

It is unreasonable to give your book a high score.

Keep a diary?

The first person of evil

Don't write about the topic, write about something else

The bull's head is wrong and the horse's tail is wrong

Who gave you the courage in the first person?