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It's not bad, it's very satisfying, it's just a matter of doing it. In the male videos, at least there is really no cp, and there is no emotional line, it's awesome [Thinking][Thinking]

It's pretty good. The plot doesn't drag on, and there are supplementary follow-ups at the end of each world. The protagonist's portrayal is also normal. There is no emotion at first, but then he slowly becomes more alive according to the progress. It's just that the big pit of the devil is really unexplored [face covering]

Is it still better? Please leave a review after reading it! ! Each world chapter is short, and the battle is resolved within fifteen chapters. It includes exploration of many worlds such as modern times, ancient times, and cultivating immortals.

I came here for no cp. I personally feel that the writing is not very good, but no cp is true. I would like to encourage new authors with five stars. Come on.

I want to join, I want to be a passer-by in the next story Does the author have time to write a short story within the rules? I have long been dissatisfied with those ghosts who think they are gods and how powerful they are, treating others like playthings

It's good to wear it inside soon. The main plot is being tricked by someone_just regaining consciousness and looking for memories_being tricked by myself again_losing the body_looking for the body_being tricked again_having a little soul left_finding the memory_finding the body_killing the enemy's mistress into a clone_finding the enemy and going to "Probably" Guess, I was tricked again later and my body became disabled again (nonsense)

Support new authors Need to deal with the logic There are some problems with your connection. I suggest you read the text a few times before sending it out.

It's okay. Although the editor published the article without proofreading, the rhythm is quite good. Most of the time periods for quick wear are very good and not too frustrating. I like watching the white-eyed wolves being tortured the most, but I still skipped quite a few series. I hope to write more about chronicles, immortality, and ancient times. It is best to kill decisively, cruelly, and unjustly!

Recommended: Within 15 in each world, you can easily abuse the scum and fall into the pit. Recommended. The male protagonist is strong, smart and decisive, and the abuse of the scum is super enjoyable. Within 15 seconds

Why the low score?

The five stars were given to the boss and his wife who had a tentative agreement [laughing and crying] Wrong call, the call was made to the couple who are not just alive [laughing evilly]

Why is the rating so low? It's still pretty cool if you ignore the other demons.

Don't care what they say, it's to my liking anyway, Ma Liu's update

The branch plot is okay, but I don't understand the main plot [face covering] I feel that the main line is too scattered, and the branch lines always feel a bit too "fast", but after all, it is "quick travel", so it is normal. Personally, I like a slightly longer one (chapter twenty to thirty). Overall, it is good, but the "main line" feels like it is related to "pleats" in the early stage, and in the later stage, it seems to be to accumulate strength and return to the original dimension.

A good fast-travel novel, some of the worlds are quite interesting. [Cover face]

It's nice to watch, and there's no CP. Could it be possible for the protagonist to travel through time and become a woman? [Blowing Kiss][Adoration][Adoration] Damn, are there any protagonists who travel through time and become women? There are a little few time-travel transfigurations, can we add more transfigurations? [Almost crying] [Almost crying]

Why do you want to change your gender, even if it's only temporary?

The writing is quite good, mainly because the protagonist's outlook is quite positive.

Yes, daily writing is very bland

Is there any plot of Qingmansiheyuan? If so, point it out. If not, write it down.

I hope to write the protagonist as invincible [love] [love]. Now he is just repairing or traveling. It would be best to write a few thousand dollars. It's better not to have a heroine, no ambiguous killings, decisive, good-looking, but few people comment on it.

I don't know why the rating is so low, but I think it looks great The novel adopts a fast-travel mode and combines urban imagination, city, time travel, system and other elements to construct a story background full of fantasy. The protagonist travels through different worlds. This setting itself is full of infinite possibilities and can greatly stimulate the readers' imagination. It can be seen from readers' book reviews that the lack of procrastination in the plot is a highlight of this novel. Each world has its own unique tasks and challenges, and the protagonist needs to constantly solve problems during the fast-travel process. This compact plot setting allows readers to maintain a high degree of attention during the reading process. For example, the book may have a world in which the protagonist needs to complete a seemingly impossible task within a specified time. This exciting plot can easily capture the hearts of readers. The protagonist's performance in the article is remarkable. There are no too many emotional entanglements and focus on completing tasks. This trait is particularly prominent in male videos. The protagonist's calmness, decisiveness and powerful abilities make it easy for readers to like him. Moreover, the growth and changes of the protagonist in each world are also very delicately depicted, making the character more full-bodied. Although the emotional line is not emphasized too much in the article, the supporting characters who appear in each world also play a very good supporting role. The interaction between them and the protagonist, whether it is cooperation or confrontation, enriches the content of the story and makes the whole story more vivid.

It's pretty good. The world in the front does look a bit messy, but the author is obviously better in the world in the back.

Very good, the story is exciting, compact, imaginative, and beautiful. I urge you to update it.

It's a very good fast-paced book, clean and neat, with clear ideas and reasonable plot. It's much better than those big buffaloes that write a lot of nonsense about one world and write hundreds of thousands of words and then end it hastily!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, very comfortable to look at.

It looks like someone has read the author's book. I wish the author better and better. The most important thing is not to interrupt the update and end it suddenly.

It was written in a hurry and the plot moved forward even faster. It doesn't matter, it must be fun. Come on, hope for more updates, 10 chapters a day is not too much, 20 chapters is enough. [Roll eyes][roll eyes][roll eyes]

Ok ok ok

Beautiful and rich in plot