Zhang Yingyue is an ordinary person. When he was practicing the way of heaven, his Taoist mind became unbalanced at the last moment. His body was damaged by the thunder of heavenly calamity, so he had to be reincarnated and rebuild...
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I have read more than 20 chapters, and the more I read, the more boring I get. A man who has lived for a thousand or two thousand years is in love with a little girl. He still has a good reputation and lets nature take its course. He also likes to meddle in other people's business. Basically, everyone has to meddle in it.
It seems a bit tiring to write so many words. The author should use less words when formatting. The first few sentences don't have much meaning. For a plot where the protagonist travels through time to find the master, don't write about going down the mountain to buy groceries. It took me a long time to read and find out who the protagonist is. Today's readers don't have much patience.
I have read more than 20 chapters, and the more I read, the more boring I get. A man who has lived for a thousand or two thousand years is in love with a little girl. He still has a good reputation and lets nature take its course. He also likes to meddle in other people's business. Basically, everyone has to meddle in it.
It seems a bit tiring to write so many words. The author should use less words when formatting. The first few sentences don't have much meaning. For a plot where the protagonist travels through time to find the master, don't write about going down the mountain to buy groceries. It took me a long time to read and find out who the protagonist is. Today's readers don't have much patience.
Looks pretty good
Really cool article