Traveling Through Cyberspace, I Choose to Go to the Grave Between Going to School and Going to Work.

It's a nice cyberpunk novel with clear logic. The heroine is brave, resourceful and decisive. However, the part where the heroine returns to Earth feels a bit long-winded. Although the gags are meant to ease the heroine's mood, too many of them would conflict with the serious and tense atmosphere created by the author when she returns. (I don't know if I'm wrong. Personally, I think the author wrote about the heroine's return. I wanted to create a tense and exciting reversal atmosphere and a scene where the state sent people to be extremely concerned about, to arouse the readers' emotions and increase the reader's sense of pleasure. However, the excessive description makes it feel like the energy is never getting up or down.) The author describes the heroine who travels into cyberpunk, and her every move is calm and meticulous. It is super well written and beautiful [laughs]

The writing is fluent and the content is well written. The logic is good so far, but did the author come up with the world view after reading "Enter the Cyber ​​Game and Kill the Boss"? To be honest, the world view settings are similar. The heroines are both high school seniors and monsters, group portraits, etc., Including the name, is a bit...? But the content trends are different, which is quite interesting.

Good looking! ! ! The author has a lot of imagination and there are a lot of foreshadowings so far. The heroine is really miserable, too poor, and she always gets involved in other incidents that go against her wishes [laughing and crying]

The content of the cyber world is quite good, but the real world is too slow, and the description of Guan Yiyi is also too slow. Overall, the pace is relatively slow, and it feels like I've written a lot but it's still a bit empty. But it's still quite interesting. Come on, author, I really want to watch the ending in one go. The pacing is very slow and clumsy later on, and the description of Guan Yiyi is very long. It's really unnecessary. I don't want to read it.

Nice. I accidentally discovered a good book. The heroine is smart and witty. She can accurately judge the situation based on the information she has. She is cautious and cautious in the other world. It is very exciting at the moment [Adoration], and the author's writing is not boring at all. Although I feel nervous while reading it, the writing style is funny and humorous. I hope to maintain the standard [Explore] and work harder to read more.

Overall, it's pretty good. Regardless of what others say about the delay in the beginning, I think the details are described very well. I like the feeling of spreading out a little bit. But what I'm more surprised about later is the amnesia. According to the previous description, the heroine's thinking logic is relatively strong, but in the amnesia episode, there are obviously a lot of clues. I said it's the real world, the cyber world, but I can't remember the time travel. What else? Wandering in cognitive confusion, this has nothing to do with cognition. I don't believe that the memory of more than ten years in the real world cannot be guessed by the heroine's IQ, so I can't remember this part over and over again. People who watch it are very impatient. This is why I deducted one star. But overall, the setting, world view, details, and characterization are all remarkable and worth watching. I look forward to the following plot.

Is this the sacred book I can see on the tomatoes that the school boss, CEO, and actor Shizun walks around? I really like this niche world view [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] and I'm following it hard

After seeing more than 360 chapters, I stopped reading. I would like to say that the author's writing style and world view are very good, especially the world view created, which is really grand and detailed. However, the reason why I didn't read it may be because the author's description is too detailed. I saw many people talking about the author's hydrology, which may be based on the author's writing. The author's idea is to write out all the details so that readers can be immersed in the scene, but there are too many details. From the first 7 days of time travel, I may have been able to control the time and content in the early stage, but from the 7 days of the second reality, I dare not even think about it, 100 It talks about the seven days in so many chapters. The control of the content is outrageous. The author has a way of describing the characters every second. The author also talks about the second seven days and explains some world views, but I think these contents can actually be controlled, not It makes readers feel tired while reading, and the content becomes unattractive. The reason for abandoning the article is probably because it is really tiring. The author's descriptions are very detailed. If I don't read it carefully, I may not understand it later. If I read it carefully, it will be very tiring. I feel that some of the descriptions are true and unnecessary. I praise the author because the world view is well established and the writing is good. I feel that if the author could control the content, I actually feel that this book would have a higher rating. Come on.

Write more and love to read. It's rare to see such a pleasant book [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] In fact, it's not as mind-burning as the BOSS book or the environment and background arrangements are so seamless that there's no breathing space, but it's really pretty good. The only problem is that I finished reading it all at once!! More updates, sir)

Great imagination! The heroine is calm and smart, possesses powerful martial arts, and is also a genius with extraordinary acting skills! At least her adaptability, ability to observe details and psychological quality are among the best heroines I have ever seen in novels! Many characters appear one after another in the book, all of which have very personal characteristics. But for people in another world, probably due to the environment, everyone has thousands of knots in their hearts. They all look like bad guys. The Lu Li who appears in this world may not necessarily have time-travel adventures with the heroine, but he is strong, wise, gentle, and polite, making him a very compatible collaborator. If the heroine can't stop traveling and taking risks, then Lu Li is a spiritual haven that makes her feel at ease. If there is CP, then I am optimistic about Lu Li.

The background of the story is a bit like that of Kui Xin, the heroine has a very calm personality 👍 Looking forward to looking forward to looking forward to it [Sending Hearts]

It's good to read, that is to say, apart from the book about naming the night at a certain point and JJ's book about killing the boss, I actually found another cyber novel that is rarely to my liking. The author's plot and writing style are very good, come on!

The relationship between Guan Yixin and Lu Li is really great! I haven't seen this kind of description in a romance novel for a long time. Come on, author! The characters and descriptions are good, and the plot is super interesting! In addition, what I especially like is the artificial intelligence and the policeman in the cyberpunk world (I just didn't remember the name). Whether they are villains or supporting characters, they are all well written, but the word count is too small and not enough to read, haha

I'm halfway through it now, and the entire worldview is exposed. Overall, it's pretty good. But for me personally, I see a small dissatisfaction. There are too few female supporting characters. Currently, the ones who fight and go on adventures with the heroine are always men. There are only two important female supporting characters. Maybe this makes it easier to criticize the heroine and the male supporting characters. But I only clicked in when I saw that the main heroine has no CP, so what I hope to see more is, uh, the kind of struggling emotional friendship between women. So far, the heroine has only one female friend who is very short, and the others are all men. However, the author has also done a good job in not making the heroine and the male partner feel cliched. The author's writing style is also very good, and the heroine's character is also very good in all aspects. It is a novel that I am willing to finish.

The world view is relatively grand, the narrative is clear and not procrastinating, the plot is coherent and closely linked, the characters are vivid and the characters are very comic-like. I look forward to adapting it into animation and comic works. Ps: The author has great views, so you can watch it with confidence. [Praise]

I love it so much. It feels very logical. I like the heroine. I hope there won't be cp.

The logic is clear and the world view is complete. The back-and-forth setting works well with the cyberpunk world view. The plot is a bit lengthy, but the overall quality is quite high. As long as the author keeps updating, he will become another rising master, and I want to be a long-time fan!

A very interesting novel, with an interesting world view, the protagonist has a high sense of morality, and has a very correct outlook on life.

It's amazing, the IQ competition, you can't help but tremble when you read the words, they are so intertwined. The author uses metaphors very well and vividly. The characterization is very good.

The plot of Cyber ​​World is quite good. The protagonist's IQ is online and he pays great attention to details when acting with others. Now I see it's the first time I've returned to Earth. To be honest, it may be mixed with grams and it's really hard to describe, but after meeting with the official staff, I felt that it was very watery and delayed. There is a feeling of "I have been keeping silent until the day is over and I don't remember that I should have a formal talk with you in the early hours of the morning." It makes me feel very tired. Obviously when the heroine saw these people, she thought it was okay at first. But after the accident, it always revolved around this little one. Maybe it was because the cleanliness in the front made me feel comfortable and I started to get used to it, so the game with my family in the back made me a little tired. Overall it's pretty good, the cyber plot is really well written! Recommend!

The previous article is very well written. For the first time in ten years of reading, I felt what a violent ending is. Books that have been said to end violently in the past have always been a little bit ok but okay. This is the only one. I can't sleep now. It's so annoying and violent. It has a unique violent ending. It's like writing an outline based on the main text of 2,000 chapters, and then realizing that I don't want to write it anymore at Chapter 400, and then finishing the story in a few chapters. . . . . . It's crazy. There are at least ten chapters of foreshadowing for someone else's violent ending. You can't wait to read the last two chapters of this book to find the shadow of the violent ending. . . . . It's really enough, I'm very angry, but because of the whole story and writing style, I can't bear to give it a low score [grievance]. I really understand that "I want to send the author a razor blade" is not a description of psychological realism. In the past, even though I burst into tears when Mao Mao was cut to death, I never felt this way.

Good! Excellent writing that I saw on Tomato! I think the little monster is more like the golden finger of the heroine! It's just that it's hard for me to understand the heroine's unwarranted intimacy and indulgence towards the little monster (I would feel defensive), and the little monster is obviously related to the evil creatures. As the energy becomes stronger, the monster will definitely have an increasingly bad impact on the earth. Is the author probably trying to write about a situation where magic defeats magic? But I can't be sure. Secondly, I actually think that the most interesting person to be portrayed is the artificial intelligence sad4. I look forward to sad4's appearance and interaction every time. Personally, I feel that the world view should be more or less influenced by the game, but the perspective is quite different and interesting. Because of this, I may have some high expectations. I hope that this book will also be the kind of story that becomes more and more creepy as it is written, and the world is unpredictable and unfolds layer by layer. The rhythm may not be that good in some places, but the quality is still high! The author please give me a thumbs up (^｡^) The identity of the protagonist in another world is not clear yet, and the identities of the characters he comes into contact with are relatively single. I can feel that multi-line development is not easy to write, and it should be very CPU intensive. Anyway, I look forward to future developments.

① I looked through the comments and found a lot of them that were deliberately slanderous. It feels really good to have detailed descriptions, and the organization is very clear! I don't understand why some people think Shui is a bad person. I can only think of it as being deliberately mean. ②It's super cool to watch! I really like heroines who are smart and can control the overall situation on their own. I'm glad that I ran away after taking a look at the name before studying for the exam - otherwise I wouldn't be able to concentrate on my review. ③The author also describes some things that are not common knowledge in the book in detail. He must have consulted the information. It is really great that he pays so much attention to the details! ! ! Author, please update more, update more frequently, don't stop! ! ! The only shortcoming of this book is that it is still being serialized [crying] I see that many of the previous comments are from 23 years old, and I am afraid of being tied [please update] [I also strongly recommend] Please the author absolutely, absolutely, never stop updating.

The pacing is great and the plot is great. Some of the heroine's subconscious reactions and thoughts are also very comfortable. Looking forward to the follow-up plot, haha. I am eager to know the story after returning to the cyber world. What about twins?

It's quite good. It has a story and a main line. It's not too scattered like many similar structures. The writing is smooth and the world view is interesting. What I don't like personally is that sometimes the plot is too draggy, and it feels like it can be summarized in one paragraph, and it's been broken up and broken for you to boil over many pages. However, the main purpose of the online article is for entertainment, so it's not a big problem. If you just listen to a book and do some mechanical work, it can pass the time very well. It feels like the author wants to create a secret harem, but he is a bit unable to grasp the direction of the multi-threaded characters. There are so many descriptions, and the next handsome guy is separated before he appears. His appearance is to promote the plot tool character.

The setting is very interesting, but the pace is really slow later on. I saw a comment that said it accurately... I can't wait to write out what the protagonist is doing and thinking every minute. I think it is very important to have appropriate details. This way the book will be more popular and more people will read it. Including the constant description of "I think so in my heart but it doesn't show up on the face", which is really too much and completely unnecessary... I only read 7/8 for my long reading time listening to books➕fast reading speed. It was really annoying to watch. I want to watch the finale directly.

It's a very novel subject matter. I've read books with similar themes before, so I was attracted by the title. The story is pretty good so far, with a hint of humor in the seriousness. I hope the author will continue to update, maintain and try his best to break through, and bring us better works! Come on! !

I really like this book [Sending Hearts]. The heroine shuttles back and forth between the cyber world and reality. She is decisive and rational between life and death, and battles wits and courage with the cyber world. There are both humor and hidden dangers in daily life. The author controls this very well. I really like the author's writing style with a little bit of black humor [Blow Kiss]. It's just that occasionally there is no update for a day or two [crying], which makes me feel a little uncomfortable [almost crying]

In fact, this book is not as light-hearted as the introduction suggests. Overall, it is a tense and serious book with humor and entertainment. It can be seen from many details that the author put a lot of thought into this book (from outline to details). Some people say that the author is inferior in word count in some aspects, but I think that improving the number of words in writing is a problem on the one hand (after all, which author does not need to look at the word count when writing a book), and on the other hand, this book is not a mindless article, it requires logic and reasoning. Most readers are used to reading those easy-going genres that do not require a lot of thinking and find new ways. Jing's book needs to give readers enough (fanfu) explanations for readers to understand (it is somewhat similar to when I wrote argumentative essays in high school. I was afraid that the teacher would not get my meaning, so I repeatedly emphasized it, so it became redundant in the eyes of the teacher and failed to get high marks). Of course, it cannot be ruled out that it is the author's immature personal writing habits. This type of article is really [loving], I will keep chasing it until the day it ends [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I feel that the author's outline should be good-looking, but it may be that the writing skills of the first book are not up to par. Since the author does not intend to write a mindless and refreshing article, then reduce the inner narration and increase the continuity between the characters' dialogues. Don't use one sentence followed by a long paragraph of reasoning and inner thoughts, which can easily interrupt the perception. Try to write the characters, scenes and dialogues coherently before writing inner thoughts. Also, I may understand the author's thoughts and want to write this book perfectly, but there is no need to cover everything. The long analysis is really not very good. You can leave appropriate blank space for the readers to figure it out. Since the character of the heroine has been highlighted, then we must continue to tell the story. If it feels good, I will die, instead of analysis + analysis, the author can bring in our normal way of speaking, which may be helpful. Really, really, please, don't write long paragraphs of analysis. It will look better if you highlight the character's character, create conflicts, and make the character's language and behavior coherent. [Shy][Shy] Come on, come on @