Demon Slayer: Born with Transparency, I Became Wuhan's New Father

This book makes up for many of the shortcomings of the original work. Although it has a little bit of a knife, it is the right amount of knife. Shadow Pillar (Su Qiu)'s strength is not present at the beginning, he has a growth process. The heroine (Nangong Meng) is the virtuous wife behind him. She will not make trouble unreasonably. When she is injured, the first thing she thinks of is how painful Su Qiu is. She also has a little temper, but this also makes her more vivid. This ability is not limited to Su Qiu's growth, but everyone who appears in the story has grown. Growth comes at a price. They lost a lot and experienced a lot. In the end, they lived up to the expectations of others and completely eliminated evil ghosts from the world. After everything is over, they become ordinary people and live an ideal life, providing a peaceful living environment for their descendants and not going back to that fearful era. I think this book is very good. Except for the lack of delicate emotional portrayal in the early stage, everything else is very good. Moreover, the author has also grown up later, and the emotional portrayal has become more delicate, which gives me a feeling of success. Not to mention that this is the author's first time writing a book, so this book deserves five stars.

To be honest, this book is not like other invincible novels. It starts with a bang and has no misfortune. Instead, it reaches the sky step by step. I don't know if this book is the author's debut, but this book writes the protagonist's emotional history quite well. It is not as sudden as others, so the author, update, code words

The author is really good-looking. Why is the rating so low? Trust me, stay and take a look. I guarantee you will be amazed. I am not asking for help, okay? Don't hesitate, the author really writes well. Woohoo, author, how do you write such detailed feelings, emotions, plots, and fights? I can't bear to read it. There are only more than 40 chapters left [crying] [crying] [crying]

The portrayal of the protagonist is very good. There is a plot in the book: the male protagonist says that he is a very selfish person. He puts the heroine's life first, the lives of others second, and his own life third. The love for the heroine is infinitely tolerant but cannot express the fear of the heroine losing herself and her heartbreak. The writing is very delicate.

The writing is great, and the heroine is also good. It's not as disgusting as other novels [sending my heart] There are too few book reviews, resulting in a low score. I have to say that it is indeed a good book. I hope you won't just leave it out because of the low score. Please be sure to read this book [crying]

It's really pretty. The last time I felt so pretty was Brother Fanzhu [laughing] [like]

After reading it, not only did I finish reading it, I am also willing to patiently give it five stars and write a review if I like it. I also like the protagonist's character very much, and I didn't remove any CP, and it comes with its own heroine. Not only did it throw away everyone's lunch, but the process was also very warm and did not block everyone's light. Many separate ghosts were set for this. I particularly like the ending, very warm and happy. Thanks for the treat, it tastes great.

This can be ranked among the most satisfying books I have read so far. The kicked-off lunchbox is really good at soothing the heart that was cut to pieces by the original novel. It is really great to bring my own wife without breaking up the official match. The only thing that makes me a little uncomfortable is that the name is easy to play and a bit awkward (Nangong Dream and other things remind me of some Mary Sue novels... But it is also my own problem)

It's very well written, and the male protagonist is very gentle. I like it anyway. I'll wait until I finish the second review before I review it [Chigua] ki mo ji ~I like it so much~It looks good (♥∀♥)~

This book makes up for all the regrets in the original work. I am a person who has very low tears and sometimes is very strange. When reading this book, I will be very moved by many plots, and sometimes I will even cry😭. This book is the best-looking Demon Slayer fanfic I have read so far. This book portrays the protagonist very vividly, and he shines without covering up other people. The author is very delicate when describing the relationship between Su Qiu and Nangong Meng. I rarely read fanfics with female protagonists before, because some books describe the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist in a very awkward way (it only represents my own thoughts), but this book showed me the good side of having a female protagonist. I think the first book written by the author is already good enough [like]. The only regret I have is that the extra story didn't include the consequences of Ginin [crying]

In fact, it can be seen that the author's progress is a bit uncontrollable at the end of the writing. It is very rushed, but as a newcomer's book, this is normal. In addition, the author has rewritten it based on the original work, and there is no big problem with the setting. It is still worth recommending.

Although they are indigenous people, they do not have a very powerful system. But it will make you feel an indescribable feeling after reading it, maybe you can't let it go? Let's just say it's a feeling of relief after all the regrets have been filled. Although there is a slight problem with combat power (in my personal opinion), there is nothing wrong with the entire plot and outline. Anyway, after reading it, I didn't want to read any more fanfics for a short period of time (it's not that the book is not good), well, it felt very strange. In short, five stars is no problem at all [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Although I was very reluctant to give up, I still finished reading it. The addition of the protagonist and the heroine didn't feel inconsistent at all, which is really rare for a fan. What's even more amazing is that the characters of the protagonist group were maintained very well without ruining the characters. Recalling the original work, I burst into tears when I read it. This fanfic really satisfied all my fantasies about the world of demon slayer. Seeing each regret being filled, I kept saying "Great... So good" while reading. I felt very connected. I especially hope to have a girl like Namco in my life. Hahaha. No matter what, this book has brought me infinite reverie and motivation to live a happy life every day. Listen to me, everyone who reads this must love themselves.

The best Demon Slayer fanfic I have ever seen. Although the protagonist is born with stripes and transparency, he is not the kind of mindless bulldozer who flattens out all the upper strings and then kills Mu Pei. He has experienced the frustration of not being able to kill the second upper string, and almost died in the hands of the third upper string. However, through hard work and cooperation with his companions, he finally killed the ghost king Mu Pai. Although it is not very long, it is endlessly memorable. The ending is also he. Having said so much, I highly recommend it. Give it a try and you will know.

From an objective point of view, this book is already very good among fandoms. I have read many fanfics, and some of them started to become deviant in Chapter 3. This book is quite full on the emotional line, and the action descriptions are rich and realistic. However, the modalities and movements of other characters are slightly lacking, and the story background is also slightly incomplete. Overall, it is perfect. Rating: five-star recommendation

Awesome! ! The characters didn't collapse and all the regrets were healed! ! The plot is smooth and the writing is great! ! ! Come on, the author! ! Don't let those bad, malicious comments get you down! ! Those emotions are not worth touching! ! Just know that what you write is really great! ! It's so cool to keep writing it down! ! Keep up the good work and do what you want to do! ! !

I finished watching it in one day, it was very interesting! There was no censorship in the main drama, it was always a single female protagonist, Su Qiu and Nangong Meng were 99! ​​The character design was never broken from the beginning to the end, although the male protagonist said he was selfish, he has always been a gentle person.

Personally, I think it's great. I really like the character of the male protagonist. I love it so much. I think this character creation is the best among all the demon slayer novels I've read. There's also a female protagonist. Although I'm worried about the male protagonist, she still gives it to him in the final battle. Handed the knife, she is strong and caring❤️, giving people an image of a self-reliant woman who has her own thoughts and is not too good at all. Of course, the best thing is that all the members are in a great mood (*❛ั∀❛ั∗)✧*.

I really like this article. I originally thought it was the kind of thing where you can instantly kill all the monsters, but it really gave me a big impact and made me feel wow, Su Qiu really appeared in the world of Demon Slayer, and it really helped everyone survive. I was moved when I saw everyone trying to block the way for Su Qiu to kill the evil ghost and how Su Qiu fought with this obsession. Anyway, this article is really good. The author really wrote down the ending we wanted and made up for the regrets❤️❤️❤️❤️ Everyone is reluctant to part with Ghost Slayer. It feels very uncomfortable to feel both gained and lost after the ending.

I really feel that the author's writing is very good, and it perfectly fills the regret in my heart. The author really does not need to belittle himself. I don't know how to encourage others to encourage the author to have such a long word count. In short, thousands of words are condensed into two words: "Come on"٩(๑^o^๑)۶ I hope the author can open more fanfics like this

It's really well written, and there's nothing sinister about it (I didn't notice it anyway, hahaha). Every time I see the ending, I want to continue to understand what's going to happen next. It's such a shame. Such a great story. The author is great.

The writing is really good. Maybe Su Qiu from Sifengyuan came to save them. When I met Yuanyi at the end of the final battle, when Yuanyi looked at him, was he thinking that this person is better than me? After reading the whole book, I always felt depressed, like something was blocking it. Why did the original work end like that in reality? It's really sad. Su Qiu is a gentle and strong person. Her writing is really great. Kudos to her ୧⍢⃝୨

A very good fanfic, to be honest those 9.6 The ending of 9.7 May not be as well written as this one. Other fanfics gave me a feeling that after the Demon Slayers were disbanded, everyone would never see each other again. This one is great. Although there are some chapters that basically have little plot, I found it basically very interesting. Many fanfics cannot write more about each column. I think it would be better if you can write more about some living scenes. Secondly, your book is too short. If you write more than 200 pictures, the score should be 9.5. I hope the teacher can write more good-looking works.

The character breakdown is okay, not serious, but it looks awkward and uncomfortable. There is also a common theme in Demon Slayer fanfiction: the special effects of the breathing method are regarded as attacks, but the breathing method is a kind of gap, and the special effects are just for the author to make it look more exciting. But it feels great already

Invincible is so good that it took me two hours to watch it. Whether it's the character development or the overall storyline, it's all very good. I enjoyed watching the last episode so much!

A very excellent work, but the title of the book is too careless. When I first saw it, I thought the protagonist was an invincible hunk. Who knew the protagonist was so gentle, I really fell in love with it. The protagonist's growth along the way also helps me remember what my efforts are for and how to use my power. The author's writing style is the best among Demon Slayer fanfics I have ever read. I wish the author a happy new year.

It's super good-looking. I saw it on Shuhuang's recommendation list. The author will update it quickly [laughs]

This book really fulfilled my dream of killing ghosts, everyone is alive, and in the end we can enjoy a world without ghosts together. Also, the author must be a very gentle person if he can write such a gentle book.

Sincerely, after reading it, please evaluate it. The characters are pretty good, and fan fiction is a niche genre anyway, and it's not some NB stuff like God Slayer, Lost City, or Ten Days End. Anyway, I quite like watching it.

Super good-looking, the boy from Sifengyuan is really gentle, please come on author [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] The plot is really well written. Don't be too picky. The quality is really good.