Red Mansion: Waiting for Widowhood, Raising Daiyu

It's very interesting. When I first watched Dream of Red Mansions, I felt a little awkward. Baoyu claimed to care for girls, but he took advantage of her. Daiyu was indeed tricked by the Jia family. This article is very good. Daiyu deserves a better life.

Nice! Sister Lin should have a good ending. Every time I watch Red Mansions, I feel aggrieved when I see Sister Lin's ending.

This is the most enjoyable article I have ever read about venting my anger on Sister Lin. I feel a little pity for Jia's big house

The author's writing is great. I highly recommend everyone to read it. I hate Jia Baoyu's powdery face and oily head after watching the movie version and the original version. I couldn't stand it at all, this book spoke directly to my heart.

I like this theme very much. It's great that Lin Daiyu can change her destiny. Now that I read what the author wrote, I realized that when I read the book and watched the drama, I didn't realize that Jia Baoyu and the various sisters, the male-female defense between the maids... Really hurt Sister Lin and other sisters.

Ah ah ah, my Daiyu finally has a good ending. Lin Ruhai is also very awesome. It turns out that the waiter of Shenying is Zhen Baoyu, and the stone that Nuwa missed to mend the sky is the deserter. The overall story is okay, but the age in the previous plot is a bit confusing. I hope the author can be more careful next time.

It has little to do with the original work and basically deviates from it. Looking at it from another angle, it is still possible. Daiyu uproots the weeping willow and has a happy life. She has a father, mother, brothers and sisters who love her, and a lover who will accompany her throughout her life.

Beautiful and beautiful, this is Daiyu in my heart.

The plot is compact, positive, and the writing is exquisite. It is a very high-quality novel. (I haven't finished it yet... I hope it doesn't end badly)

Every time I see a rewrite about Daiyu, I love to read it. Maybe it's because Daiyu in Dream of Red Mansions is too bitter, so I always think that Daiyu could have a different life. I've read many versions about Daiyu, but I think this one is more special, as it gives Daiyu a non-relative. Qingyue, whose mother is more like her own mother, becomes her stepmother. Qingyue's love and care, and the Jiang family's upbringing, give Daiyu a bright and splendid life. When I first read the introduction, I thought Qingyue was the heroine, but after reading the full story, I think it is a double heroine. Qingyue and Daiyu are both heroines. I fell in love with [Love]

The author's writing is very good. I hope that Daiyu will grow up healthily and her family will be happy and happy [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

I really like the heroine, she is gentle yet decisive. Sister Lin, who is so cheerful, lively and healthy, also likes it very much. Lin Ruhai, who loves to think things over, made me laugh to death. The author's writing style is very good [like][like][like]

It's great to change the ending of Daiyu, Wang Xifeng, and Sanchun. After reading this novel, I suddenly realized how dirty and messy Jia's house was in Dream of Red Mansions. Yes, how could a maid from a big family be so unruly... Comparing it with the heroine's family, it suddenly felt very unreasonable... This novel also explains some classic chapters of Dream of Red Mansions from the author's perspective. It looks very good.

It's good. I've read so many time travel stories now that I'm a little tired of them. But this one is different. It's worth reading. It's very good.

The Red Mansion is full of Daiyu's weakness. Here, I feel Daiyu's strong-willed and noble lady style. I also know how to protect the prosperity of a big family, and I know the dilapidated threshold of Jia's family. It's really beautiful! ! !

It looks great [sends my heart] but I actually hope that when Sister Lin grows up, she will have a younger brother or younger sister who will continue to pamper her. And seeing Sister Lin becoming more and more independent and self-reliant, that feeling was real. Finally, the author continues to work hard⊙∀⊙! From now on I am a new fan [send heart]

The writing is quite good, and the outlook on life is normal. It has solved the awkwardness I felt before watching Dream of Red Mansions. I always felt uncomfortable everywhere. It turns out that the author wrote it too obscurely. I couldn't understand the twists and turns of these big families, so it always felt awkward.

It's very good. It's similar to a Red Mansion fanfic written from the outside perspective of Jia's family. The logic is self-consistent and everyone's ending is relatively reasonable. The full text is divided into several lines, including love, career, and revenge, but it is not complicated. The writing style is also very good, without being arrogant, and the writing is concise and appropriate. I have read a lot of ancient Tomato books, and most of them have problems with intentionally colorful words, but the actual language is awkward and awkward. However, this book uses words and sentences very well, and sometimes blends the original language of Dream of Red Mansions into a seamless whole [Like] The only problem is that the heroine's character is not particularly reasonable. For example, it stands to reason that the heroine has received an education from a wealthy family, but she is immature in handling relationships and some matters. She also has a "deep love" for Daiyu but does not pay much attention to her husband and children (especially when comparing the choices at the beginning and the ending), which makes it a bit awkward to watch [facepalm]

The structure is compact, but the timeline does not match certain events. For example, Baoyu was fooling around with nuns and actors when he was only six or seven years old. It was too outrageous. The rest of the book is fine, but there are a lot of typos. Overall, it's well written, with distinctive characters and a good idea. Keep up the good work, the author [Like]

The plot of the story is compact and full of ups and downs. The author saved Lin Ruhai and finally rewrote Lin Daiyu's life. In the end, she had a happy marriage and a happy ending, which was quite satisfying. [Love][love] It also rewrote the ending of Wang Xifeng, who finally gave birth to a son, and also wrote the ending of Sanchun, who went away to a foreign country without being implicated by the Jia family's house confiscation. [Love][love] Correspondingly, Jia Mu's personality collapsed, and Jia Baoyu's personality collapsed. In that feudal era, if you didn't study official career and economy, and just didn't think about making progress among girls, the psychic gem would be ruined in the end. After all these years, my feelings for Jia Mu and Jia Baoyu have been misplaced [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

When I watched Dream of Red Mansions, I was thinking that Daiyu was really wronged in the Jia family, and I also felt that Baochai was a pity. This is the Daiyu I want, with family, brothers and sisters, friends and lover. When we like a character, we will imagine a happy ending for her. This is not only a good expectation for the character, but also for myself.

Highly recommended. I have never read Dream of Red Mansions, but I just know a little bit about it. Everyone has different preferences, and no matter how the author writes, it is naturally impossible to completely satisfy everyone. When I read this book, there were some people who didn't like it, or felt it was a little unreasonable, but I personally think the author wrote it very well and I really like this book.

It's still a very satisfying story, it's good to watch, the foreshadowing is well explained, the heroine is super gentle, and the ending of Daiyu is also very good (although I always feel that Daiyu should have greater achievements to match her talent and character, but it's good to grow up healthy like this)

A very good novel. It would be great if the original version of Dream of Red Mansions was written like this.

I gave Daiyu a happy home, a healthy body, and a younger brother and a younger sister. I slapped her in the face every day in the early stage, but I won't spoil it in the later stage. If you like it, take a look.

The language and writing are very good, and I can understand the author's intention. But using too much force can cause trouble. (Squat online and find someone who feels the same as me.) Keep up the good work

At least it gets 3.8 Points. Because it is The Red Mansion, I read the article with the attitude of giving it a try. I never expected that the author greatly satisfied our wishes. I love Daiyu so much. It is the Jia family that sucks blood, and it seems that Daiyu has taken advantage of it. He wrote it directly to my heart, and the writing style is also very good. I am very satisfied after reading it! There have been so many journeys through the Three Kingdoms, and now I'm going through the Red Mansions, great, great, great! The only flaw is that the later drawings are not too detailed, so I am not happy enough. I express my gratitude to the author, it is great! Looking forward to the next one~

This is my favorite book among Red Mansions fans that I have read. It really helped Daiyu stand up and she didn't feel like she was out of tune. It's a pity that I have to wait for a while before reading it again!

Emotional! Daiyu has seven orifices and an exquisite heart. What a delicate person. People like me who are ignorant are not worthy of understanding her. But the author made me understand that Daiyu deserves the best! The storyline is also very exciting, the causes and consequences are clear, and it is funny from time to time. The bad people are in bad luck. It is very enjoyable to watch!

I really like this book. I am a person who particularly likes the character of Sister Lin, but my experiences and regrets about Sister Lin can be said to be made up for here.