The Fool Cultivates Immortality, and a Fox Spirit Comes Knocking at Night

I saw Suanbao personally recommending it, well, it's pretty well written. Come on! ! !

It's well written. Your rating is good. The pace could be slower. Also, your definition is not a cool article. Don't write it as a cool article. You can take on the role of Changsheng. What would you do if you were Changsheng? Don't be swayed by bad reviews. You are you, different fireworks. The rating is not that important. The main thing is to write well and we will support you. The so-called immortality is nothing more than loneliness, a symbol of loneliness. For mortals, it is just a drop in the ocean. For immortal cultivators with poor talent, it is an unattainable fantasy. For the male protagonist, it is the greatest pain. Smile as you watch the world of mortals pass through eternity, and meet the opportunity to become an immortal. From then on, there were deported immortals in the mortal world, who would protect a beautiful woman for the rest of her life.

It's very interesting and the plot is tight. When will the main character become immortal? I feel like the author wants to stab us first before he can cultivate [smile] Also, please update it faster😄It will be updated five times a day🔥[Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

This book is well written, some suggestions (personal feelings): First, there can be knives on the road to immortality, but this kind of knife writing has appeared a lot. Most people only read this thing for entertainment, and try to use as few knives as possible. Secondly, the talent of the protagonist should not be too low. Of course, it does not have to be particularly good, just average. This is because I have read many such novels in which the characters are immortal but have very low qualifications, which results in the novel losing some of its flavor. Third, I finished reading this book in one sitting. Can you read more? [Please update]

The stars were sparse and the moon was bright, and the bright moonlight shone slightly through the gaps in the woods, and the moonlight was like frost. ——Pick You will feel very comfortable reading this book. His story is very novel. You never know where his next move will be. The author's writing style is very good. When reading this book, I feel like reading an essay. It is humorous yet interesting, elegant yet noble, and there is an otherworldly feeling when I am trapped in the world of mortals. The writing is beautiful, the article is beautiful, but the author is ugly. The reader is very handsome. I recommend everyone to read it.

It's a very good book, but the rating is so low. Here are some of my weak suggestions: I am now reading the end of the first volume. I used Nangong Wentian as an example. Although the author said that your empathy is not very good, the writing of that relationship is a bit stiff and does not allow the readers to get involved and empathize. This makes the readers feel like outsiders, which is very uncomfortable. Moreover, most readers who like this kind of book like the various aspects of life. If the empathy is not strong enough, many such readers will abandon the book or not like it. If the empathy could be better, the score might be much higher. Note: This is just my own understanding, I hope it can help the author. I hope the author will get better and better (✪▽✪).

From the writing point of view, it needs more practice. From the plot development point of view, the logic is clear. It would be better if the number of words could be increased by tens of thousands. I believe that all readers will also support my [smirk]

The outline of the story written by Mr. Xiaoqi is really good. The previous parents took care of Chang'an and how to make him grow up. It was really touching. The ending of Chang'an's transformation into immortality directly sublimates the theme. The portrayal of other characters and their endings are all summaries of the characters. The cruelty of the world of immortality and the invincible kindness of Chang'an are always supported. From it, many life principles can be seen in Wuhu. I hope that I can be safe and healthy, be brave enough to do what I feel is right, and cherish my time. I also wish that everyone can be happy and not be troubled by life. The foreshadowing at the end is also very 🐮 Come on, Mr. Xiaoqi TT! !

The writing in the beginning is very delicate, and the emotions are very real and the pace is slow, but in the end, the distribution of content is uneven and unnecessary, and it is too dragging, but the ending is too hasty. But being able to write this article without making money and without objections from my parents is already very impressive, and it deserves five stars. If I have the conditions to support it, I believe this article will be well written, and it deserves five stars.

It's been a long time since I've read a book that was so touching and immersive. The characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are very vividly portrayed. I personally think that this kind of longevity novel may have more knives. After all, longevity is long. I have read more than 500 books on Tomato so far. This book is written sincerely. I hope the author can stick to it. I believe it will become a good book. Then there may be more foreshadowings in this book. Let me tell you my opinion: 1. Changsheng's mother said that she saw the jade pendant glowing. It is estimated that the "fake" immortal who gave the jade pendant will have something to do with Changsheng. 2. It is the heroine. This kind of longevity novel usually does not have a female protagonist. Mu Lingxi left Changsheng, maybe for the sake of immortality. It can be seen from her desperate return to save Changsheng. She should be the kind of person who leaves Changsheng out of necessity (if there is a heroine, I hope there won't be too many, just one. Maybe I've watched too many single heroines and am used to [crazy]) 3. Xiaobai and Xiaoqing, Xiaobai has more pitfalls, maybe she is the daughter of Jiuwei (many comments say she has something to do with Mu Lingxi, the spirit beast, it should be possible that she is one with Mu Lingxi) Xiaoqing may not have much to say. 4. The students in the school will also achieve something in the future. 5. This is the foreshadowing of the medicine boy. I hope I can be gentle during the surgery [I almost cried]. The above is my opinion, I hope it will be more kissable [laughing awkwardly] Generally speaking, the writing style is very delicate, and the pace is not easy to write too fast and collapse easily. If you write it well, I believe this book will be popular. (Also, pay attention to the author) [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]