The Organization of Pupil Arts Starting from Sharingan

This book is well written, and I really like the rhythm. Keep up the good work.

Don't hide your strength, and the pace is just right, neither too fast nor too slow. The character setting is also good, there are not so many mindless slaps in the face, and there is no inexplicable aura of ridicule. Very much to my taste The update is too slow, the behind-the-scenes work is not done, the organization is not established, and there are too few source points. I have to write a campus game to fight monsters and upgrade, and there are still more than ten chapters left unfinished.

A very good novel, Xiancao

As a bookworm who has been reading for ten years, I always say that there are very few books that I can read without skipping chapters. Your book is very good. Come on author [like][like][like]

@ Sketch of the clock The author must read When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Very nice! I wonder if there will be a higher strength division in the later stage of combat power. ? Does the world view include ten thousand worlds, or does it use Blue Star as the main world to quickly travel back and forth to other worlds? I hope I don't get castrated due to poor grades. It's really good. Come on, author.

The writing skills are very mature, and the interesting points of the online novel are well arranged. It is one of the few novels that I have read from beginning to end without any poisonous points or feeling boring. It is actually very difficult for a novel to make people feel interesting and look forward to the follow-up. It cannot be too step-by-step so that readers can see the ending at once, and at the same time, there must be a certain degree of uncertainty in the plot. So I feel that the plot arrangement is very good. The more I read, the more I want to read and look forward to the follow-up. This is the normal mentality when reading a good novel. It is not to kill time, but to pay for an excellent story. Come on, author, look forward to the follow-up [Like]

Hey, not bad. The character of the protagonist is very likable. I like it better. He is rational, decisive, and has a high IQ. Not bad, not bad. I think the world view can be spread. It is level 5 in the college entrance examination. It is level 7 or 8 by just swiping two pictures in college. The map is unfolded. Come on

It looks good. Come on, author. You can find it on the home page.

This is the only novel on the Internet that writes about the Sharingan's character, but it's a pity that the author doesn't write it anymore. Unfortunately, this is reality

The plot is okay, not too bad, but what I like most is the character of the protagonist. It is different from the protagonists of other books I have read. I immediately like this kind of protagonist. He talks less and is a topic terminator. After one sentence, no one else knows what to say. Come on, come on.

It's a very good eye-shu novel, but the update is too slow. I waited for 12 days and there was no update [face covering]. If the author doesn't want to write it, please tell me, or he has something to do and is busy recently, because it is really good, but he doesn't give the results after waiting.

No, this book is really beautiful, but why is the author so powerless [cover face] [cover face] Author, please keep updating, and finally I saw your update [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

The subject matter is good, I'm very interested in it, I hope it doesn't collapse. I feel that it would be better for the founding organization to separate out other eye skills. It's a bit boring to play all the members by myself. Of course, this is a personal suggestion.

I have read Chapter 117 so far, and I feel that it is not toxic. The protagonist has a good personality. There is no heroine and no ambiguous person. The IQ is always online. The overall feeling is very good [please update] After reading around, the person who wrote about the Blood Ring Eye is not in Naruto World. This book is still the best. The Blood Ring Eye written by other people is either a slap in the face, or they are just looking for trouble, or they smile bitterly when they meet a woman, or they write too many and complicated abilities, and many of them are not used, and they are forgotten later. Tsk, stop talking. Brother, please update it

This novel is also a wonder in the book world. I came across this novel a long time ago. The rating at that time seemed to be only 6.0 Points and the word count was very small. I basically saw it on the recommendation list every once in a while. Until I clicked on it one time and stopped reading after reading one or two chapters. I thought at the time that the word count was too few and I saved it up. But after all this time, it still only has more than 200,000 words. What surprised me even more is that the author did not stop reading. I can only say it is true 6.

Some parts of the previous chapters seem a bit deliberate (I know I want to emphasize something, but in fact, readers will understand it without saying it, but if I say it, it will be superfluous), but this situation does not appear much later. The overall writing makes me feel very comfortable, and it is easy to read. You can try it [Chigua]

The writing is good, non-toxic, the pace is orderly, and occasionally a little refreshing. The character of the protagonist is also well portrayed. Keep up the good work.

The battle scenes didn't feel tiring at all and were very concise. I really like the character of the protagonist. He talks a bit harshly, acts vigorously and resolutely, and is unemotional. Also, it is too short. Can there be more? Come on, the author😊 [smile] [smile] [cool]

Come on, don't create inexplicable plots (especially if you can't write the emotional scenes, you don't have to write them, don't force yourself). This rhythm is okay, and a cool novel should look like a cool novel.

Don't say anything else. I give you five stars for the plot, writing, and characters. Next is a book written with blood, asking for no female protagonist and no CP. I think the protagonist is so awesome. There is no woman in this novel who can be worthy of the protagonist. Let him be beautiful alone! A truly strong man does not need women, women will only become a stumbling block on the road to being strong! Final update! [Sending Hearts]

It's good to read. Fortunately, I have already won the resurrection competition (recommended on the home page). Otherwise, if I had read this book before and suddenly stopped updating, I would have gone crazy. I hope there will be no interruption in updates in the future (´△｀)

The rhythm is pretty good. There is no cliche where the protagonist always hides his strength and pretends to be a pig to eat the tiger. When it is time to show off his strength, he will show off his strength. By the way, will the protagonist wear a vest in the future? After all, there are so many pairs of eyes. [Eat melon]

It looks good, but the author block comes alive. Resurrection, my author! ! !

It's very nice, but the updates are too slow. I also really like playing the resurrection match.

I can only say that it is very good. The novel I read is not very long and I don't want to comment objectively. I personally think it is really good. Also, a friend of mine is also an author. He doesn't update 5 times a day and received a box of blades. I have no other intention. Come on, author. By the way, the wooden clone of the main character has a talent for learning other words and a talent for group ridicule [ Eat Melon ]

This book is very interesting, and the character of the protagonist really touched me. I was reading fan fiction and accidentally discovered this book. I feel that the plot is very good, and it adds a little new twist to the old routines, which is very consistent with my thoughts when watching those old routines. The beginning of the plot was indeed a bit slow, but now it has over a hundred chapters. Returning to the main theme, there are also many foreshadowings. The books I like are rarely finished, they are basically in a state of discontinuation, and some are serialized. Many of the books on my bookshelf are serialized, but every time I read many chapters, I am too lazy to read them. Anyway, come on, author, don't stop updating forever! ! !

The author's writing is very good, and the protagonist's plot is very enjoyable. As long as you survive the slight fight against monsters in the early stage, it will be enjoyable all the way. It's hard for the author to update. I hope the author can finish it well. Not only that, the supporting characters in the novel are also real people, not tools. They have IQs. Unlike some novels, I think those supporting characters are really just looking for trouble with the protagonist. They have no purpose or consider the reason. They just bully the protagonist, scold the protagonist, and then let the protagonist beat him up. At present, the protagonist has no idea of ​​opening a harem. I have really accepted the training, and then you have a bunch of opposite sex here... I am the same with the routine. It's not that this routine is bad, the main thing is that most of the people who wrote this routine are too routine... Boring, boring All the characters in the novel have online IQs, and the pupil skills and the protagonists all play the same character. Alas, they don't do anything anyway. It is obviously this person's pupil skill, but it creates a very different one. Every time people see the same name, but the personality is different, giving people a very divided feeling. Praise wife

After reading it, I personally feel that the author's imagination is very broad and incorporates a lot of things without being too abrupt. It is a novel that I feel is very novel and thoughtful and should become more and more interesting in the future. Overall, it is very enjoyable. There are no vulgar routines or any rubbish, but there is no description of the division of combat power in the early stage. I think the combat power collapsed at the beginning, so I gave it 99 points. I hope the author will update it soon! ! !

Invincibly refreshing article. There are currently no poisonous spots. To be honest, when I first read the introduction, I thought it would be about hiding my identity and the external performance was ordinary, but because of the subject matter, I clicked in anyway. After entering, I found that I was not aggrieved. Now it has been to Eternal Eye, a genius crushing, and it is exciting and not very cliché. The previous one has always been aloof, and it is okay to come out as a clone to make fun and liven up the atmosphere. I hope you keep it up and will update more in the end.