Under One Person: the Sword Opens the Immortal Gate

A good book should be rewarded. [Sending my heart] I hope I can continue to finish it like this and don't end it unfinished [Like] I really can't stand it, so I just keep writing it as before. Why do I need to add a female protagonist? I'm really a bit confused [face covering]

It's so beautiful!

The book is quite good, it would have been better if a female protagonist didn't appear suddenly [face covering]

Don't get too involved with your parents. They are already two different families. There is no need to talk about the father, and there is no need to care about the scum. My mother is finally happy and doesn't need to be disturbed too much.

It's very interesting to watch, but I'm in a hurry, so I'll give a brief review: The male protagonist Lu Linglong is the half-brother, his parents are divorced, and he is a lone star (because he has no evil spirit, so he is just a lone star) (cannot control his parents). The author may be a bit shabby, but it is indeed a good work and has not been updated. The male protagonist and Zhang Chulan are not in the same camp. He only has a small space in his heart, which is not enough to accommodate so many people. Others, such as the introduction, need no introduction. It's just that the character of the protagonist fell a little bit later, and he eventually became the kind of person his father was, a little bit scumbag, and no longer the clear-minded swordsman he used to be. But at least the front is worth watching.

It's very good. It's better than any other person with the same text. What's the point of practicing if you don't seek immortality or becoming an immortal?

The author's writing skills are acceptable and the plot is average. The characters are not clearly drawn, nor can they be said to be vivid, but the final rule is not to be blind! At least I was deeply impressed by the protagonist's character. But somehow there is an unknown force that forces me to read them all. To sum up, overall it is still ok. I hope the author will work harder and prove himself. On the premise of taking care of yourself, write as much as possible! Come on! ! !

Overall it's ok. There are just a few minor flaws, but nothing serious. Then the most important problem is that the author updates too slowly.

The protagonist is good-looking and not decisive, but his IQ is okay online.

Come on, I hope the protagonist destroys all sexes

Gone! Gone? Damn, how many hours did you just watch? Just gone? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It has connotation and can be read often

The plot development is wonderful, I hope the author will work hard

HA

Except for the confusion at the beginning, everything else is OK, come on

Very well written, in every aspect. . Alas, it's just too short and weak. . . . The requirements are not high, just one chapter per day is fine. . It's better than fucking four or five days, one chapter a week, the best one, one chapter every half a month. . . It's such a painful wait [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

The first dozen or so chapters almost gave me two stars, but the later chapters are very well written and detailed, and the foreshadowing is over nine minutes longer.

The ending is unexpected and reasonable. I quite like the character design. This book takes a niche route. The writing style and plot settings are generally good. The plot description is a bit cryptic. If you don't understand something, you can understand it by reading the comments.

Oh oh oh oh oh

Good luck to the author!

Kill decisively, no poison can enter

There should be something left unwritten in the end!

Can you hurry up? If not, I will keep this book. Come on, it used to be updated once a day, but now it's updated every two or three days. What a speed.

I really hope that the little girl can be included. She should be the child of the protagonist.

I would rather teach me to betray the world than let the world betray me. The way to get it and the way to use it are for my heart.

I hope I don't abuse the main character. I'm a little curious as to who and how many heroines there are. The author will post them. Is it Xiyao or Di Lieba? How about a Feng Baobao?

The front is a bit messy, but the writing is getting better and better in the back. It looks good.

Give a four-star support and the author will change immediately ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Okay, okay, all the settings I like are collected. It's a really cool article.

It's really good-looking, but there are few similar themes, and the writing style is not as good as this one. Although the author has some personal stuff, it's not much, so it's still bearable.