Pirate************

It's well written, but a little lacking.

Excellent, poor driving skills

Come on, come on, work hard

The subject matter is very novel and beautiful Chaos, fate, messing around? Can this lick Luffy? Destiny?

Yes, five-star support.

As for people, why is it broken?

This book is very good hahahahaha

Come on, get better and better

It's good, but it's missing a bit. It's a bit short and weak.

It looks good, no matter what, I think it's very enjoyable to watch [laughs evilly] Come on, author!

Well written, keep it up

Good keep up

The author wrote so well

Not bad. The second design is really good. It's just that the author is short and weak [laughs]

As long as it looks good, that's it

The world view is great and the characters are quite suitable. However, we still don't want the protagonist and Gion to fall out. If the protagonist wants to inherit his bloodline, it is best to get a clone of Auntie, one who has the talent, strength and appearance of Auntie and is clean. The gifted divine pupil + steel balloon or the Yamato ghost + divine pupil are both very strong, but the aunt's child is definitely stronger, it is simply invincible [smile]

A very creative fanfic, worth reading

The writing is very good, the subject matter is novel, interesting and not stereotyped. I hope the author will continue to work hard... Of course, appropriate updates are also good.

It's really cool what you wrote.