The Journey of Dragon Transformation Starting from Demon Slayer

I didn't even review the last book for myself, so giving it a five-star rating isn't too much [laughing]

Overall, it's okay, but the female character has a problem with past life memories. The main reason is that there is no foreshadowing. I was blinded by it all of a sudden, and it was not mentioned in the introduction.

The story is good, I would like to tell more about this story if possible.

The harem is a big harem, with a guarantee of 3,000 [laughing]

It's very real. I hope the system can give the protagonist some superpowers. (For example, Sharingan, Devil Fruit, etc. Props can also be like Demon Sword Thousand Blades)

Okay, okay, it tempts me to watch the previous work, right? OK OK

Leave a comment after reading Chapter 31 Visually, it's not a cool novel, and it's a comprehensive comic (maybe harem?). There's no Se Se (the main character has an upright character and is young, which may be the reason why Se Se is avoided) I don't know if there is a plot to send a girl away. It starts with Zhan Chihong and then pauses through the Demon Slayer time. After that, it's the Stepson Breathing Technique, and then it's probably the wireless train, kill me without misfortune, and then go back to the empire (or maybe go back halfway), which feels a bit cliche. I still like the feeling of being taken away by Wuhan next door [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] It's easy to wash away Wuhan, after all, he just wants to live in the sun. But this book is definitely meant to be killed (it would be great if the resentment is contained) I hope it's because there are no free girls in the harem, and it's not because the heroine tries to reduce her descriptions to avoid being out of touch. I also hope the protagonist grows up faster I'll check it out later tonight and edit my comment later. Leave a comment on Chapter 81. This book seems to be a continuation of another book by the author, but there are very few chapters. I don't know what worlds I will write about later.

The writing is okay, but why is it so low? I feel that the scores for comprehensive comics and novels are generally low, but they are not unattractive [smile] or weird. On the contrary, quite a few fantasy books are poorly written, and the scores are still very high.

This is a comment after reading Chapter 394 It's very interesting. There was nothing that made me feel comfortable from beginning to end. The author also worked very hard and used readers' suggestions to make this novel better. In the future, when more people read it, the author may not be able to read every comment like he does now, but a good work should not be buried, so I give it five stars.

The current protagonist has no trace of a time traveler at all, and has completely become the "Asashi" male protagonist of Japanese comics.

It's a very good comprehensive comic. The system doesn't take up too much space, and it doesn't have its own consciousness. It's much better than those books where the author's left and right hands are fighting each other (referring to those where the protagonist and the system interact crazily) [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

Why was it taken off the shelves again?

Not bad, but I don't know if it will be unfinished. Many people can't hold on.

Oh, to be honest, it's really uncomfortable to watch the linkage. Generally speaking, I like the kind of books where you just open a new book and don't have anything to do with the previous version. And I feel that getting along with Esdeath has become very sloppy and confused because of this. I have also read a little bit of the last book and think this one is better. For Esdeath's sake, I give it five stars. Come on, author [punch out]

Why was it removed from the shelves? [What]

Why was it taken off the shelves?

Personally, I think it's pretty good, at least an 8.5 To 9. Why doesn't anyone watch it?

The plot of this book is relatively smooth, and there is no deliberate effort. Except for the heroine's memory travel, which is a bit abrupt, everything else is okay. I haven't understood the last few chapters very well, and they are not strongly related to the previous plot. I feel like it's a bit deducted.

It's pretty good. Well, I just read the Demon Slayer chapter because I've only watched Demon Slayer and don't know much about the others and don't have a sense of the graphics. Please provide the author with some worlds: "Fate series, Bleach, Black Bullet, God Eater, EVA, Guilty Crown, Tokyo Ghoul" [laughter]

It's very nice. I hope the dungeon won't end so quickly. How about the author writes about the seven deadly sins

Super exciting, much better than the previous book

After reading the book for a while, I didn't see much, but the comments surprised me. Some of the comics or the endings were already stated. You still have to think about the dark side, don't you think it's a little bit weird?

Tudou Da Da, can you write down a single error? [Upvote]

The author loves Lyu very much [laughing], starting from the Earth Wrong Chapter, as long as the male protagonist does not go to other worlds alone, Lyu has a separate plot, describing the most appearance, personal plot, and giving the most to the male protagonist. Of course, the character is also the best. Among the heroines who show clear feelings, she is eaten after hundreds of chapters. She is treated specially, haha [laughing] Ah, why was it removed from the shelves when there was no color content?

I said why it looks so familiar. It turns out to be you. Why did you send me the original copy? [Chigua], it looks very good. Come on.

I hope I can read the book you wrote while still alive.

Ask first. Harem?

I forgot to rate this book. I can't say this book is bad, I can only say it's very good. Ugh, I almost didn't mean it. I'm not talking about anyone, as long as it's a bit short.

The story is good, but it's a pity that I didn't like the harem. Women will only become the protagonist's weakness!

In fact, the writing is quite nice.