Exploring the Path to Immortality: Starting from a Mortal and Step by Step to Heaven

Support the new book. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I didn't want to write a review. There are only 2 reviews so far. I'd better give four stars to encourage you. Just treat it as a record. Why not two stars? Why not three stars? Well, it doesn't feel good, so why not give it five stars? Anyway, one star less will not lose a piece of meat. Haha, just kidding. Of course, because the number of words is too small at present, I am afraid that the author will not finish it later. So why give four stars? Well, of course, it's to encourage the author to continue working hard. Also, it's actually because the author said there is no female protagonist, so I gave it four stars. Haha, so why did I write so many words? Well, I've already written them all. Since you've seen this, you can give me a like by the way [awkward laugh]

Not bad, you can continue reading

The logic is reasonable and the plot is smooth. It feels like the author has considered a lot, from the background setting of the sect to the price of the elixir and so on. Moreover, the battle order system is always online, and it is indeed decisive in killing. In addition, I saw that some readers complained about the price system in the comments on the book, but I want to express my opinion: Everyone has read a lot of immortality cultivation articles. Common immortality cultivation articles usually talk about how the Foundation Establishment Pill is so expensive and how hard it is to obtain it. At first, I subconsciously accepted this setting. But I feel that what the author writes here is more realistic. It is indeed difficult to obtain the Foundation Building Pill, but not that difficult, because it is only 300-500 spirit stones that are a bit expensive for the Qi training period, but not so expensive for other levels. So some people get a little surprised when they see that the hotel fee is 20, 30 or 50 spiritual stones. Looking back, the price of the Foundation Establishment Pill should be within the same range as the prices of other recovery pills in the Foundation Establishment Period, so the author's setting seems more reasonable to me. I also want to make a suggestion. The author can set up more bonds between the protagonist and other characters. Otherwise, the one-way plot advancement will be a bit bland. For example, for example, when we were friends in the Spiritual Medicine Pavilion, for example, Wang Sirong stopped building foundations in his last life. When guarding the family property, the protagonist met him and received his great help, and they jointly explored and obtained a key treasure. Another example is that other people in Li Yu's family got in touch with the protagonist for some reason. [Eat melon]

The writing style is good, the narrative is neither urgent nor slow, it is a good book, I hope the author will keep up the good work, come on! It was good before I started practicing immortality, but it got worse later on, especially when the first monk I met was a woman. Eight out of ten books were like this.

I learned the first part well and look forward to the following content.

This story is good everywhere, but it's a pity that the protagonist is not the villain

To be honest, the updates are too slow. I think the rest of the novel is pretty good. Damn it, when I was reading this novel every day with great enthusiasm, suddenly there was no follow-up.

The writing is very real. I hate that some novels are so explosive and exaggerated that I wish Goldfinger could become an immortal directly. This novel is well written and very beautiful. Come on.

The logic is clear and reasonable, the plot development is not abrupt, and the connection is natural.

Pretty good, now that I see it Not pretty, boring

Nice writing, keep it up

A Better Mortal's Story of Cultivation to Immortality

The review from bookworms of the past 40 years is pretty good.

It's really good and sounds good, but the update is a bit slow. I finished listening to it in three days. I hope it will be updated soon [Like][Like][Like][Like]

The writing is okay, I quite like it, it's better than most articles about cultivating immortals, why are so few people reading it🤔

Nice! The writing is simple and engaging, a rare masterpiece. What I wrote after the foundation was established is as bland as water, and it doesn't arouse interest.

The front is okay . You can take a look

Good start, keep up the good work later

The content is exciting, very good

The article started with some small talk. Since the protagonist became an immortal, it has become wonderful! Come on!

Well written [like] [like] [like] [like], come on, author, I hope to see this book finished.